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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
Awesome work anmol and surabhi i really loved the love u guys have potrayed ...anmol i really felt that ppl should have a elder bro like u...u describe bro-sis love so well.that i just loved it...pls continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
its awesome!!! i love it. I want pm for this. song sequence was amazing but I love taayam part more
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
Sorry for late comment i am really very sorry plz maaf kardo. .. Actually iam stuck with my studies so dnt hve tym... Sorry 😳
Cmg tothe update
All i can say it was perfect
It had everything a taarey n taayam fan wanted to see
The taayam album n thier convo was so emotional i started crying!!!
Hats offf
It was awsum
N rey ka dance i cud feel the taadap of rey
It was awsum
Hats offf

Thnks for the pm n do send me in future too
I might not be able to comment instantly but will surely comment after i read it so plz pm me the updates

Thnk u n sorry for the late comment
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
awsome start. waiting for ur next update... n thanx for the pm. plz pm me for each update. 😛
Edited by Vrindaroxz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75

Chapter-2

A cute boy who was lying in his cozy bed some ray of light fell directly in his eye.. the cute prince opened his eye slowly... he made his step to the floor and when he stood up something fel in the ground by making some noise he looked down and found the photo album which he hav hugged and slept a cute smile suddenly he heard a knock on his door he putted the album a side and went to open the door he saw there was kaka standing

Kaka- Swayam baba woh aapne kaha tha naa aaj aapko jaldi college jana hai???

Swayam - (Checking his watch) arrey haan sayad mujhe tayar ho jana chaheye

He turned and was abt to go when kaka again called him

Kaka -Swayam baba

Swayam - haan kaka

Kaka- Janam din ki kubh saari shub kaamnaye

Swayam - aarey haan aaj toh mera b'day hai...Thanxs kaka

Then kaka left and swayam got ready... and left for college

Swayam was badly missing his sister... the scene from their childhood to till date... Taani called in Swayam's house and the Kaka received the call and answered - Hellow

Ta- Kaka bhai kaha hai???

Kaka- oh Taani betiya swayam baba toh college gaye hai and woh bohot udash lag rahe the

Ta - par woh kyun kaka???

Kaka- woh toh pata nahi hai

Then Taani went to a deep thought... anfter this Taani called Sharon,

Taani-Hellow Sharon bha... I mean Sharon

Sharon- haan bolo Taani

Taani- woh actually aaj bhai ka b'day hai toh plz aap unke saath rehengi??? And unka b'day ko saabse special kijiyega

Sh- ohh thik hai Taani

Taa- toh mein rakhti hun.. bye

Sh-bye

The phone is disconnected then Sharon gets down from her bed and says to herself -Sharon tu swayam ka b'day kaise bhool sakti hai!!! I need to plan something kya!!! Kya???? Haan eak surprise party but uske liye I need help let me call the gang...

She calls Vicky, Neha, Amar, Simmi, Rinni, Bharat,neil... all of them answered and agreed for the surprise Party but Rey was not answering the calls... Suddenly Aditya's name flashed in Sharon's mobile and she answered it...

Sh- helow sir

Adi - hellow Sharon I want u to be in my office soon

Sh- par sir (She was cut by him)

Adi - Sharon no questions!!! jaldi se aajao

Sh - okay sir I will be there soon

Sharon took her car and left for adi's office

In College

Swayam just reached the college and every1 started to act as if they don't know abt his b'day...

Swa - hellow guys

All- Hi swayam

They were behaving too weird so he asked kya huwa hai???

All - Kuch nahi hamein kuch kaam hai!!! Chalo baad mein milte hai

All started to leave... bt he bothered less there and remembered the way Taani planned b'day for him... She hav a record of wishing her brother at exactly 12:00... He had a cute smile in his face remembering his baby sis...

Outside adi's office

Sharon reached adi's office and entered inside Rey was standing in Adi's cabin... she went inside the cabin

Adi - oh hi Sharon good that ur here in time

Sh - kyun sir kya huwa hai???

Adi - tumhein and Rey ko Dance routine set karna hai

Sh - abhi karni hai???

Adi - haan abhi karne hai

Sh - but sir

Adi - Plz stop it... Behave professionally

Rey was noticing this and he looked towards Sharon who was looking really sad.. Adi left the cabinet and Rey asked Sharon

Rey - Sharon u okay???

Sh - actually Rey mujhe tumse eak bohot important baat karni hai

Adi entered - Guys tum log jaldi chalo

ShaRey - okay sir

They got busy in the rehearsal of the dance and they even didn't receive the calls of the Gang who were continuously calling them

Swayam opened his house's door when he saw his hall was dark... There wasn't light at all...

He called out "Kaka... Light kyun nahi hai yaha pe???"

Suddenly, a ray of light hit this eye... and called out "SURPRISE" by the gang...

He looked toward the sound and found the gang was standing (except TaaShaRey)... They began the party but as for Swayam... he was enjoying coz, he was badly missing his Sharon... He was just missing his best buddy and even Taani... He have only one thing running in his mind "Miss u Sharon" but he was too lonely there... But today no1 not even Sharon has wished him a "happy bday".. and Taani's record of wishing him at exactly 12:00 clock was also broken... He was not having any feeling like it was his bday... The chocolate boy wants to cry to his situation but he can't do that in front of the mass present infront of him so to make the gang happy he too acted that he was happy and as the gang handed him a decorated knife to cut the cake and were encouraging him to blow the candle

But suddenly, There could be heard door bell ringing

Kaka opened the door and there was someone standing in the door with a flower Bouquet...


Plz like and comment if u wanna know who is the person standing with a bouquet😳


❤️ANMOL ❤️

❤️SURABHI❤️


And Guys, Do add swaron_tanha1 If u want PM next time...




Edited by -.QTPie.- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
amazing update dear
i feel so sad to seeing
swayam like that
he was missing her sister
so badly
taani cares 4 swayam so much
that was so nice
aww poor sharon didn't wished
swayam
i hope on door there will be
taani
waiting 4 next update
update soon dear😃
& thanx😉
Edited by navk - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
omg!!! finally you updated. bahot wait karwaya. its swayam's b'day and sharey busy in making a video lag gayi😕 swayam is not happy as three most important person in his life are not there. But I guess the doorbell made the difference. I am soo sure its taani. bas ab tum mere guess ka falooda mat banana😆 update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
awesome update
sharey are busy
swayam is upset
i think that is taani came there
give TR next
update soon
pls pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
Amazing update...
Read both chapters...they r awsum...
Update next part soon...
And don't forget to pm me... :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
nice update
feeling so bad fr swayam
rey frgt swayam's bday????????

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