New arshi SS: A second chance, part 4 final, p21 25NOV - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
beautiful update those emotions were so intense...amazing
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
OMG this Song n the situation blended so perfectly ...loved it...

and the banner... its is superb... 👍🏼

awesome update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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A second Chance

Part 3

Khushi runs out of the mehendi party and the whole home...

She runs as fast as she could and when she saw that she was out...she stopped...lied her back against a wall and catches her breath

-no...no more wounds...my heart will ever bear another hurt

Arnav was following her too and hearing her murmur...he could find her in a side corner in the road

When he faces her...

-no!

She cried out

He lifts his hands up

-no!...no...I will not speak to you anymore...actually, I have no words left...you know me very well khushi...I'm bad at this...I'm a bad man coming to woo you back...and now, I have no chance...still! I just can't stop trying

She's still out of breath and looked at him with her wide beautiful eyes

-yes...you're bad! You're the worst man I ever meet and know!...at first, you've been so arrogant and hurt me...then you fast judged me that I'm with shyam and you ruined my life and then...you choose your past over me...actually, everything comes first...and then you come and you...still trying to ruin my life...

Suddenly, he comes further towards her...with a sudden, fast move...his strong hands held her waist and he pulled her closer to him...

Her whole body shivered...her heart starts beating so fast that she was barely able to breath...

-you know what's your problem?...that...you still in love with this worst man...no matter how much bad I'm...your heart could only beat for one person and that person is me!!...you love me! you can't help!!!...you will love me...and that too...

He leaned and whispered in her ear

-hamesha...

He said and carried her in his arms roughly

-what are you doing?

She asked after some seconds of melting under his words effect...

-no! leave me!...no!! no...put me down!!

She cried out till her voice full all the road...some guests outside look at them...

But Arnav doesn't even mind looking at them...he placed khushi in his car, forcefully, puts the seatbelt to her...locked the door...

-I have a stubborn wife!

He commented looking at the people looking at them...

And then turned to his side in the car, he gets in, himself and starts driving far away...

Far away with his stubborn wife...

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Locked with the seatbelt, khushi got also her hands tied with his black neck tie...because she tried multiple times to open the door of the car while he's driving and so, he has to have under his control

-let me make you remember that it's a crime!!! I'm no more your wife and the fact that you're kidnapping me and taking me in your car, all tied up...can just make you a criminal!

-I can take this risk!

-I hope one police man meet us!

He doesn't reply but he smirked to her...

After some time of silence

-where are you taking me?

-somewhere... so far...

-what????!!

-we need to stay together and alone, for some time! This is our last chance to save our love! After this...you have my word, my promise...I will never bother you, I will just disappear from your life!

-together...alone...for some time...

Khushi murmured, feeling dumb...

If they will be together again...then...

She's worried...she knows what will happen...and she's feeling herself giving up to him...already adoring this idea of him and her, together and far away of the whole world...

"our last chance to save our love"

Oh god...she felt his words honest and she's melting away with everything he's doing to her...

Even the felt of his neck tie on her wrists seems...a sign of his helplessness...

He loves her...she knows that...she always knew that...but he never trust this love blindly like she does...

He always success to ruin everything...

And she knows why...he's ASR, after all...love is something forbidden to him...

He's all the time, during his life, trying to place his heart's matters at the last position in his priorities...

At this soft thought of Arnav's helpless love for her...she stops talking and turned to the window...to admire the view...

They are out of town and Arnav still driving from last two hours now...

She's wondering where he's taking her...

Last night, she spends it all cooking sweets and she's really tired now...

Even if it's the middle of the day, she promised herself a good sleep after delivering that box of sweets today but now, everything changed...

Her plan changed

She's in his car...

She should inform her family but no...

This is about them only: Arnav and khushi matter...

If she will call her family, she will only said that she will be late...

Her family will refuse Arnav...they are angry at him even more than her...

Oh god!

Look at what she's thinking about...she's thinking like she already forgive him!

But the truth is that she will never forgive him!

-are you hungry?

-I want to come back home!

-paapdi chaad...

-what?

-masala puri

-I said I want to...

-or pani puri...with some...

-I'm just so hungry so stop...stop!

-I propose a heavy meal...I know you just love it to be spicy...and full of flavor...

-shut!

She said bitting her lower lip

He stopped the car...smirking

-just here...

He pointed his index to a dhaba just in front of them...

-will be eating here?

She asked...she can't resist this anymore...

-yes!

-untie me!

-you will promise that you will not leave or try to escape!

-no! no I just want to get in and eat...you don't have any idea...I'm tired and hungry...I worked all night long...

He untied her hands and kissed her wrists...

-and you have the worst husband on the top!

-you're not my husband and ...I still not ready to forgive you!

His amused expression changed into a serious one and he remembered his mission...

-come!

He said and both get out the car to the dhaba...

They had their meal...

Khushi ate with an opened appetite and Arnav tried to copy her but the spicy flavor makes his eyes get all wet and red...

So, he just drinks water and was full seeing khushi eating her meal peacefully and enjoying it...

*****

After eating and washing...they come back to car

-could you tell me where we are going now?

He silently looked at her...with a naughty gaze

-you will see...but for now try to sleep...our journey will be long!

-what? Arnavji! I'm working now! I have responsibilities!

-I'm working too! But we have this to do! We have this to fix!

Silently, she gave him a glare and looked back throw the window...

After awhile she felt his hand holding hers...

-thank you ...I appreciate the fact that at least you're giving me the opportunity to try and fix my mistakes!

She takes a deep breath

He brings her hand to his lips and kisses her palm...smells that mehendi on her skin...the dark design on her milky hand

He's trying to keep an eye on the road

But he stopped the car for awhile...it's a better option because he's unable to focus on the road

-I love you!

He whispered...

-so much...so much...that it hurts!...it hurts so much khushi! khushi...I never decide to not come that night! Our shadi night...I was just thinking about my mother but I don't mean to not come! I...in my mind you're already mine and we don't need any other ritual to prove that...and in that night...the memories...my mind was aching...but I don't mean it to call off our wedding! I wanted you in my life, I always do!

-I wanted you to call me, at least inform me about your state, your confusion! You think I will not understand?

She asked looking straight at his eyes

-I under every bit of you...I know you better than any one!

She continued

-that's why I was more and more hurt by your behavior! And now...what will you do if I gave you back my heart?...you know that one more hurt...you will just finish me...and I don't want to give you that opportunity again!

-you want...

He whispered

-if you don't want...you would never be here with me, now!

-you forced me!

-I can do anything!...anything for a second chance!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Ruki.F

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WOW im FIRST again ... YUHOOO
was Amazing update ... loved their eyes to eyes romance ... he needs to do something BIG to win her back . waiting for next update dear ...

so cute Ruki
thank you my dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: aridj

Amazing chapitre he come back to his love his khushi. I lke the idea of Arnav stalking khushi every moment . Yeah he need second chance , but he will be punish for letting her going so easily . Thanks darling.

D you the song of nawal zoughrbi "elassy" , I love so much can you write a short or ss store about it??????????

hi dear, I don't know it but I will hear it and if I can I will write something 😉😆
kisses
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: AdoriMeye

wow wow wow!!
what a update
it was a perfect eye to eye romance
so loved how she admit in her mind that she belongs only to him :0
looking forward to see how arnav will help her with his hand with mehendi
thanks for the pm my dear
so lvely this story
love you :*



thank you my dear 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Awesome update! =)
Loved it
Continue soon
Thnks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
arnav kidnapped her lol=]
wonder what will happen now
and how arnav will make her forgive him=]
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
awesome update so he had wanted to come he just did not and khushi ready to forgive him because she loves him but he need to understand her worth more because everything always comes in front of her loved the update thanks for the pm

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