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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful Update Dear!!! Loved it!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update update
loved t
the edits were out of the world

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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
Just great 😛 n s romantic 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
that was must superb..
this confession was so beautiful :')
and their 1st kiss..lol
that was unexpected..
I mean I never thought their 1st kiss would be like this :P
loved loved loved reading it..
the kiss description was awesomely written ;)
very descriptive lol.. :P
so I can't wait to read their consummation part..
if u know what I mean.. ;)

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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Woooww ..that was beautifully well written with emotion👏
Dam i love this marvelllous ,lovely update❤️
All pics were just perfect for each scene you describe☺️
thanks for pm & eagerly waiting to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
finally they confessed and r together...
M sooo happyyy...
Loved the confession part...
Its awesomely written...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats 4 new thread
oh god! Maardala such a lovely confession the dialogue by khushi was superb di u had awesomely written their feelings n how much they luv each other ⭐️
their kiss made me blushing 😳
w8g 4 their romantic lovely n hot moments as a couple with a new start 😛
upd soon 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
that was a beautiful update i love it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yayyy... Finally they confess their love...

Must say khushi is very innovative... What a way to make him drink milk... 😉

You have beautifully written their confession and the kiss was just mind blowing...☺️

Love it...

Hats off...🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
so he as usual left her witout giving her a chnc 2 say anythng nd barged out of d room thnking dat khushi is not comfrtable wit his touch bit least did he knw dat she was resisting coz she wanted him to confess first..!

Nd as usual he left from there leaving her in tears nd drove away escaping d whole situation wit all wrng thoughts..!

Loved it how he cursed himslf thnking dat he has ruined evrythng nd his pain,ahhh beautifully penned down..!

He is uncomfrtable to face her nd dats why he is avoiding her bit he did not knw dat whom he is avoiding is dying wit every passing secnd..!

Both were in pain,one in pain thnking dat he has messed up wverythng nd nothng can get back to its place nd d other is in pain being unable to xpress how much she loves him..!

Nd den his deliberately avoiding her nd going to sign some deal nd her anger nd den his getting back nd her avoiding her,everythng was perfct..!

I loved it how aman teased arnav,payback tym 😉

but arnav shut him up nd his mind again got occupied wit khushi's thoughts nd her actions nd he could not get any futile rslt..!

Den finally his sorry nd her anger rising up again nd den d spicy food nd den khushi' making him drink d milk,hayeee beautiful..!

I loved it how khushi was all crying thnking how to make him believe dat she loves him nd was also ashtonished to thnk dat how can arnav hide his feelings for 8 long years wen its getting difficult for her to suppress it for 2 days nly..!

Nd den wen her lips landed on his,he could easily get it dat he was not wrng nd she loves him nd thus getting d green signal he smiled as if he is d happiest man in d world..!

Nd den their confession,ahhh was getting goosebumps actually nd d way khushi said dat he should not say those 3 word coz his love is way too pure nd strong dat those 3 word will not b able to justify it..!

ahhh finally d most awaited kiss..!

Hayeee wat a kiss nd d way khushi poured her heart out,hayeee lovely..!

Nd d way he passionately kissed her nd she gave in to him relishing his touch nd experiencing her first actual kiss,hayeee me toh simply blushing thnking ab all this ☺️

nd d way he protected her from rain nd her saying d same was cute nd den him taking her inside hand in hand as if its a ne beginning to their blissful nd eternal love story was beautiful..!

Mindblowing chappy nd i am simply in my dreamland..!

Loved d update di..!

Its simply mindblowing..! ❤️

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