ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 7 - COMPLETED - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats...waiting eagerly for d next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Our Sankadevi is trying her BEST 2 tk a LEAD n mk Arnav Confess his feelings by her MOVES... 😉





N c our Arnav Babua is no less... C d Excitement on his face as he's heading 4 his FIRST REAL KISS 4 his wifey...




Lastly, a BIG CONGRATS 2 U 4 bringing dem 2gether... May this FF never ends... I knw its nt possible still wish karne mai thode kuch jata hai... I knw I'm Pagal, stop mumbling tht 2 urself... 😛 😆


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats on new thread...👏⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congo!!!!👏
i just cant wait for the update nw!!!!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats on the new thread

Chapter 30

Part 1

Loved Akash's rule of the game setter being able to alter the rules whenever & however he wanted ... awesome dude 😉 😃 ... trap the opponents getting a chance to escape your part... 😆 😆 😆


Arnav understanding that she was referring to NK & he glad that he would stand out as a better man than NK always in her eyes; Khushi overwhelmed with the way Arnav wanted her to be herself & not to restrict her dreams or wishes just for his sake; Khushi wanting to hear his statement again but he refusing, he little astonished as to the way she seemed so comfortable with him & his proximity unlike until morning, she tasting from his glass & turning all flirty with him & wondering if she was stepping forward in making their relation work was well written 👍🏼


Khushi all excited to play the game despite the warning from Arnav, she being all easy on her friends inspite of Arnav giving her a hint of how an Akash's game would be was lovely to read


Arnav getting embarrassed with the way Khushi was put to face Akash's tricky questions, Akash earning kicks from Payal first then later from Arnav; Khushi forgetting the inmates & arguing openly with Arnav on the topic of the count of children she wanted surprising Arnav on one side & giving her friends the glee of trapping atleast Mrs.Raizada, she running away when realization dawned onto her,☺️ Payal slowly getting Arnav to open up but careful not to blabber about Khushi already being in love with him while enjoying the other two running & chasing crazily was enjoyable 😃

Part 2

Khushi all set to seek revenge on Akash for embarrassing her in the previous round & sorting Arnav's help & pleading him so that he agrees; she in turn agreeing for a date (hmmm ... smart Raizada 😉) & then Arnav correcting her that he was going on a date with Mrs. Raizada & not Gupta was a lovely scene


Arnav's set of questions shaking as well as embarrassing Akash & he at a loss of words but then answering them with hesitance fearing Payal's presence ... loved the tit for tat 👍🏼 😃


Arnav wondering if Khushi was desperate to know what was the impression about her that stays on his mind & seeing her blush on his answer, Khushi fuming at the way Arnav didn't answer properly to the questions for which even she was awaiting his answers but only to be disappointed was awesomely structured


Akash sarcastically telling Arnav that he wouldn't disturb Arshi while planning for their babies & that he(Payash) wouldn't sneak out of the room(Khushi's room) & the former earning a whack from the latter was enjoyable 😃 ... it's so lovely to see the friends so care free with each other & still being the old self like they were in their teens


Arnav a little hesitant to lift his own wife cause off the effect on his senses, he admiring the way she held onto him, Khushi enquiring, thanking & then awarding Arnav in her sleepy state with a kiss that he held onto so dreamily that his mind registered it & thought that though it was by mistake he wouldn't mind getting them repeatedly as well countlessly - this scene was beautifully framed ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Part 3

Arnav loving to hear his new name besharam' from her mouth & teasing her for fun, their little talks which lead to Khushi knowing that Arnav brought her to his room as there was none available for her & she hurt that he didn't bring her to his room out of right or out of love for her, he finally understanding the reason behind her gloominess, Arnav silently drawing plans to subside her anger with his surprise & Khushi muttering under her breath how bad he was in getting the hint of her words was fabulously put down


In the office Arnav squeezing his head & finally it dawning him that he & Khushi have started to share something beyond friendship & he excited to unravel the answers for his queries threw light on how Arnav slowly wanted to find out whether there was progress in their relationship & also how he longed to make her a part of his life


Shashi's manner of perceiving things, analyzing situations & understanding people is really commendable. It was really nice when he said that he wasn't angry on Arnav & that wasn't the reason for him missing the party but the tension between him & Arnav was another matter to be settled & he would definitely settle it in the right way


Oh ho!!! Poor Aman 😃... as usual stuck in a mess ... God save him. Khushi still mood off & irritated but she apologizing to Arnav unable to bear his silence; Arnav & Khushi patching up & they casually conversing with each other; Arnav understanding her gesture & gently washing her hands in the most tender way & his proximity creating havoc on her sense was so romantic ☺️ ☺️ ☺️


Arnav teasing her making her blush profusely, he openly accepting to her that she won & asking her to enter his room ... no no no ... their room;😃 Khushi shocked to see the decorated room & praying that things shouldn't proceed further without his confession which she deemed significant & Arnav's words relieving her worry; he praising her beauty making her flustered & happy to witness the husband in him; further Arnav's words "Thank you for being you and for being in my life" over whelming her & they lost in the moment; Arnav proceeding things in his trance to be broken by Khushi's resistance & he withdrawing at the thought that she prevented him since she wasn't in love with him beautifully portrayed how Arshi though in love with the other their lack of proper confession from their respective ends was the sole reason for the distance between them though their hearts longed for the other


Deeps the VM was beautiful. It was fab to watch the scenes that were in sync with part 3. Thanks for this lovely VM ... enjoyed it 😃


Thanks for the PM . The precap has made me so excited & eager to read the next chappie ... hmmm... Their first real kiss ... wow!!! ... WAITING


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Posted: 11 years ago
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WOW 7th thread...Congratulations...waiting for 31st chappie eagerly...more eager for this chapter than my exams :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congratulations on new thread ur story is really awesome
Waiting for the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congo for new thread dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congo...🥳🥳
eagarly waiting for nxt part...
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Congrats on new thread... N the update was absolutely mind-blowing!! The game lol.. Bechaara akaash!! Why doesn't arnie want a baby ! I hope khushi can change his mind!! N aww he panned a surprise for her <3 aman srsly rocks :P

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