ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 7 - COMPLETED

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smitha2728

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Hi superb I just loved it the way u express his feeling
I god it is unbeatable 😊 👏

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Aplihs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

How was this?????...hmmm,..mind blowing amazing and every possible adjective. Finally they got through to each other.

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koisk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

They confessed, loved it loved it

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Arshi diwanee

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

wonderful updt dii...jst amazing..beautifully written

love da way khushi give punishment to arnav😆😆

finally arnav confessed his love for khushi

so da wait was over and finally arshi kissed in real sense 😳

''Baahon Ke Darmiyaan Do Pyaar Mil Rahe Hain
Jaane Kya Bole Mann Dole Sunke Badan
Dhadkan Bani Zubaan''...

egarly waiting for nxt dii as my gutter mind already activated..

continue soon😃😆

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.ButterCup.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

awesomest update

that was really funny when she kissed him for make him to drink milk... lol 😆...totally unexpected and innovative kiss😉...aww finally finally they confess their love for each other..& omg their heated and passinate kisses☺️ on the poolside ...wow...the edit of bachelor party pictures is totally mindblowing..loved it..thanks for the pm..

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Asrkkgsr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

nice part.finally arnav confesss his feeling.wow khushi what a kiss with milk.hope they will together soon

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ammi22

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

lovely. really amazing. You are expressing the feelings very nicely. I will be inactive for few more days. hope u'll send Pms for me.

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aafan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Wonderful update!
Love the tigerous khushi

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ajeetha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

simply superb the description of the union of two hearts was mind blowing .just loved .the anger and pent up emotions of the two it was well potrayed

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tanu3579

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Posted: 11 years ago

#130

absolutely loved it :) :) ..

much awaited confession... kiss.. wow :) .. i was soo soo waiting fr this confession...

the kiss was absolutely innovative :) :) ... honestly.. till u mentioned her filling her mouth with milk.. wi cudnt hv even placed a kiss in tht situation :) :)

bt arnav really has lost soo much tht anyone in his position wud hv lost faith in his good fortune.. more than anythg else... n i think tht is the main reason he mistuk khushi stopping him to mean her rejection... ignoring all the other hints she had been dropping ... n the obvious signs too :) :)

beautiful description of both their thots n misery after he left fr his night-mind-clearing-drive :)

bt in the end... they were both just concerned abt the other.. :) ... they soo r in love 😊

the confrontation... arnav feeling wrongly place guilt... n khushi outraged by tht :) :) .. was cute :) ...

her revenge was... well... spicy :) :)

n finally tht beautifully amazing n unexpected kiss :) :) haye .. :) :)

followed by the much-awaite confession... one wondering how did he hold up soo long.. while the other thinking how to ever put to words wht all he has been thru :) :) ...

i totally loved the first question arnav asks khushi whn on pool-side... clearly saying tht he finally understands the reasons behind all her latest changes... all her hanging arnd him.. kissing n touching n everythg else.. n her general comfort arnd him :) :)

too gd :) :) ...

waiting to see how they move fwd.. :) :)