Arhi OS: Change!

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letme cry too first.😭😭😭


okay now*sniff..sniff* you know what girl..i have always adored you for writing winning my boss..one of the most hillarious piece of writing one could find on IF..i had always thought you are good with humour..and then YOU completely SPEECHLESS-ed me by coming with THIS OS.😲😲

Really, it was ONE of those rare kind of writing where you felt you have not read just an ONE sHOT but an entire fiction. YES..i felt the same after reading this..its complete ARSHI's journey within itself..from their mrg..to his hateredness..to her chirpyness..to how he changed..unknowingly ofcourse...her feelings..then his feelings...the accident..his proposal..her acceptance..her demise...his life after...EVERY DAMN THIS WAS WRITTEN BEYOND PERFECTION.


i wish i hadnt read that because i cannot put it out of my mind right now n feeling like i have lost someone dear to me..i wish i could force you o change the end..but then it would loose its existence.

THE PICTURE AT THE END..COMPLETED EVERYTHING!!

LOVE U LADSSS FOR AMAZING ME EVERYTIME WITH YOUR WRITING..m so emotional right now..i cant type anymore..when in reality i want to say loaaads.

just one word, LOVE YOU n kudos👏👏👏

Rotten!

You know what, Whenever I come across a new OS or FF, I will makesure to go through the comments and then read, Only because I cant stand any emotional work... But, Just because you wrote it, I was sure that it will bring a smile on my face.. and I tried to Reserve my spot after a long time and I was happy to get a spot in the first page..

But, all that happiness and excitement flew out of my mind..when I came across it..

Arnav as usual waiting for Khuhsi to come up with the lunch.. He wanted to confess his love for her..and he was prepared with a ring.. that was such a cute scene.. and I was like this is going to be funny, theres gonna be a nok jhok between the couple.. for coming late.. But,the phone call gave me a slight hint of something is not going as I wish... Still, I had full faith in you, that you have really planned a big Twist ...and I was more excited to read... and the flashback, How Arnav hated to get married and how he had to marry because and for his di.. How Khuhsi, with her innocence got the special place in each and everybodys heart...My favourite part-Whenever Arnav yelled or proved that he hated her, she just smiled... Such a sweet girl she was.. No wonder, arnav fell in love with her..

In the hospital also I had hope that she will be fine.. she will fight for her love... and Arnav will never let anything happen to her..I had faith in you, Rotten..

When arnav was talking with khuhsi, I was crying.. and I felt stupid as whats need to cry, Khuhsi will be fine.. arnav is there.. Nothing will happen o khuhsi... and I smiled in between..

how he told her that he didn't even propose her...proposing he for the next 7 lives.. engagement.. marriage..honeymoon.. Damn! I am still crying... No, nothing will happen to Khuhsii...

And when he tried to get up and call the doc, to say that she is conscious now.. and how she made him propose and put the ring in her ring finger.. how he confessed his love and the smile on her face... Nothing will happen to her..

At last, that deep breath.. It took away my heart beat... and I couldn't read further.. I didn't want to know what will happen to arnav..

I thought I will wake my hus with my cries, and so shut down the wifi without even loggin out from IF..

In the morning, as I promised I just came back to give you comments... and read the last portion..

Rotten, You are proving this each and every time that You are versatile, fabulous writer...and I am glad that I got a chance to read your works.. The title gave full justice to your work.. and I must say this was your masterpiece...

How are you feeling now? Better? I will pray that you never fall ill, as I don't want to read this kinda stuff ever again from your side...Your updates always bring smile on my face.. whenever I feel bit low, I just have to go through your WMB, and I will be back to myself.. So, I really hope You will always bring a smile on my face, and in case, if you ever write these kinda emotional stuff, and you didn't get my comment, you know the reason.. This work is a great success, as I can see many crying members through out... lol

Enough of crying... After making each and everyone cry, I am sure you are happy now, so I am expecting an update this week.. Pleeej... Do update any.. I want to forget this emotional OS

unres😭

after reading this ... i cant tell how terrible i was feeling ... i go to my Mom woke her up at late night and cried like anything... 😭 this was beyond of my limit... 😭😭😭 at that time i really need someone to hug me tight...😭😭😭


i dared to read khushi's last breath part again just to assure may be i was wrong ... its not happened...


Rotten u really deserve a Standing ovation... i dont know how did u manage to Complete this so beautifully ... what u have tried to say through this OS u said it so amazingly ...

u have showed the power of LOVE, the Love which can change u for better ...

Bless u Rotten... 🤗

i have learned a good lesson from this...

it is awesome i really cried

omg...this is trulyyy awesome...👏

hey rotten,u make me cry for the first tym i m crying reading ur OS
i cnt even express how beautifully u hav written dis os,its simply superb 🤗
This line told by Arnav was awesome
"Will you be mine
khushi..for the rest of
your life ..for 7 lifes.. I
promise not to be a
beast this time.. let me
give this opportunity to
rectify whatever I have
done in past ..to rectify
the way I treated
you..to keep you, to
protect you from every
evil of the world..and to
love you in millions way
possible ..will you give
me a chance to LOVE
YOU !..."

Awesome os... Felt lyk crying... The lump had reached my throat... So emotional... Loved it...

u made me cry😭 😭 😭

Not fair, you made me cry first thing in the morning 😭😭😭 I dont know how to appreciate this in words, it was beautiful yet heart wrenching. Loved the picture in the end as agree with it fully. Change is inevitable but if it brings out the most beautiful emotion from you, its the best thing that can happen. Brilliantly written, each and every word was just perfect. Kudos to you for writing such an intense OS yet managed it so beautifully, superb work dear. Nothing can be sadder than loosing a loved one and atleast Arnav got to tell her those 3 words. Amazing OS, loved it 👏👏👏