KriYaansh Drabble Series:With the Strings and Love|[C] - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago
Pasdto this is beautiful..
You I love you for writing this drabble series..
It is so simple and beautiful..
I love the way Rey has soft corner for Kriya and makes her realize <3

And yeah baathrrom see aati hi kyu rokha :/
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome...
this story is indeed vry well-written..
juz loved it..😊😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome part...
Rey was just abt to confess...
Oh!! Y did'nt he confesss...
OMG kriya came in just towel...
Wat revenge she's planning
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing updates
he kissed her n she responded! After freaking 20 years, finally Rey has taken a step! Aww d kiss was cute n passionate at d same tym..
Now Rey is in Kria's place.. Probably something interesting is gonna happen ;)
waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Incandescence.





Chapter 5


Her breathing was uneven, her eyes stopped blinking and her body shivering. Is this is the way a model behave in front of camera? Grab your confidence girl! Her mind shouted but a little she understood.

He came closer, his breath falling on her glossy-red lips and his eyes fixed on her ; creating wreck inside.

All her sensations got buried somewhere, she could barely hear anything else than her heartbeat which was so loud that even he could hear it clearly.

Meanwhile she sensed the flash light being aimed on them, Andy taking his position.

He pulled her even more, whispering in her ear's "Passion, My Love. More Passion"

And with a thud she came back to reality from his touch to his eyes...Everything was like a yearning for which she had waiting so badly...

"Don't teach me about my business." She hissed in his ear's, again affected by his proximity.

"Alright...Lets see then...Who is more passionate" He said for the last time before twisting her around on the beats of the music, with her back tucked into his hard chest and his hands keeping her from retracing her steps back.

"There! I can see some passion..."Andy said with pride clicking pictures from different angles.

And it hit her hard, How can he be the limelight when this is her business. She turned around quickly, wrapping her arms around his shoulders ,surprising him. "Don't you Dare to play around, This is my game!" She said with a smirk.

He quickly wrapped his arms around her waist and pulled her down, making her fall in his arms. " That's your misconception, I lead in each and every game.." He said with a same smirk. leaving a fuming-confused kria behind.

Saying so he arched down, aiming at her luscious lips, a thing for which he always dreamed. How would it feel while Kissing her? Her lips, soft like a cotton candy, beautifully framed.

And he didn't knew when he had crossed every line and was this much close to her.

He saw her big beautiful eyes getting bigger by each passing moment.

Just one more move- and there he would be living his dream of kissing her. Just one more move!


"Dress Change!" Andy spoke up, satisfied with the pictures clicked till yet.



She got back up immediately feeling embarrassed, Definitely she made a mess.

Hate you Reyaansh!

She walked towards her green room, flabbergasted.

They were on the verge of Kissing! Get Hold of yourself Kria!


She twisted the knob of her green room door and suddenly she was taken along inside by someone, she simply couldn't register who that person was.


In no time she the door being closed with a bang and she was pinned to it with his lips mashed with her's, kissing her passionately and she simply couldn't do anything else than responding with same passion..

She was certainly not in her mind and neither he was. Never he had imagined to do a thing like this. Wasn't it too early?

He broke the kiss, parching for air, looking in her black eyes filled with utter confusions.


What the hell happened here?


Both thought in unison, wondering about same things, trying to find out some answers in the depth of each other eyes.




Hello Friends 🤗

Here was the second update for today ;)

I hope you liked it 😃


Love :*


I am sure you all must be linked with my Facebook page , If not then here's the link. I give the notifications of updates there :)

https://www.facebook.com/CreativeKindredSpirits


so amazinggg
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Posted: 11 years ago
this was awesome
loved the happenings in the story
loving ur speed of updating
awesome
concept
n update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey love ur dis work.
It's awesome n d way they r behaving in front of each other make me love them more.
Rey all of a sudden kissed her which has made an ever lasting impact on her mind.
Now I am waiting to see what she does n how he controls himself.
Update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awwiieee.. yum yum yum update...😃

& I guess .. next one is going to be superyummy... tabhi itna pause lagaying aur humein tadpaying tu...😉

She wanted to go away... but rey ka deo itna intoxicating hoga ki usja mann hi nhi kiya right?? See .. asli baat maine pakad hi li... 😆

Omg... first hug... then kiss... I know very well... wats next..☺️😉😆

Itna deadly scene rakha hai upi... towel me kriya aur rey besharam seedha bedroom me hi aa gya ... 😲😛

Ab sorry bol ke gentleman ban raha hai... khada to vahi hai na... Sochi samjhi planning hai iski... 😉

Kriya bhi full mood me hai... towel me hi ladne chali gyi... upi ke mind me hot ideas already cooking story... 😎

I know very well.. ab tu mujhe bas galat mat saabit kariyo... 😳😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
I hate you! Hate you for ending it here! god it's so amazing! The update I mean. I want more! And soon! Please Di! Pretty please..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Upi dii...:* :*
U r really a very very fab writer...n i can guarantee that now..😃 😉

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