Arhi FF Towards The Edge/ Link to thread 2 page 133 - Page 28

Originally posted by: Hina69

res 4 me😳

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OMG! Whenever I read ur update of this story..its like m reading a thrilling and mysterious novel perfectly executed by perfect author👏

Oh my god!! Thank you so much for such an awesome compliment Hina 😳

In the chilling, biting cold he was standing there shirtless, she saw across the mini wall separating them. His hair was messy tangles. His eyes as usual filled with amusement and his perfect jaw sprinkled with day old stubble.

Perfect jaw?! Where did that come from?! When had she started related something as good as perfect with this idiot?!

Her voice suddenly caught in her throat, as she checked his broad chest and taut and pecked stomach displayed naked in front of her. As her eyes traveled up she could she a vain pulsing in his neck, this Adam's apple bobbing as he swallowed making her swallow tightly with him. The hollow base of his neck with strong collarbone was so gorgeous, she almost drooled. His black track pants hung very low on his narrow waist. The broad muscles of his tanned upper arms rippled and stretched as he crossed his arms over his chest, drawing her attention again to that area. He was so well sculpted, so smooth...

Stop it Khushi, she chided herself and closed her eyes tightly.

Arnav saw her shutting her eyes and suppressed a chuckle. He had seen her eyes widen as she took his shirtless form in. He knew he had major effects on the opposite sex, but to have this girl unnerved enflamed his male ego to no end.

It was also bothering though, that he was affected by her as much.

In those black tracks and grey looses howdy she looked so adorable. Her black her were carelessly drawn back into a messy ponytail and her lips, nose and cheeks had that cute reddish tinge to them.

Cute? Something mocked him. Cute weren't his kind. He liked kinky and bold. But she is feisty. He remembered. Plus he did like this combination of coy kitty and roaring tigress. He knew she was passionate, was sure of the fact. But, this sudden bashfulness pleased him beyond words. A rare combination...(Both were checking out eachother..sparks already are flaming from time to time whenever they met/collide😉)

Hahahah... Yeah! When there are Arnav and Khushi, sparking has to be there😉

So the game is ON!!😉

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Anjali and shyam both are aware of eachother real identity and they both are thinking that they are smarter than the other!😲

Hats off Pakhee👏👏👏 for writing an amazing and great story😛

Thanks you so much for such an elaborated feedback😊 Let the love coming in😉

Originally posted by: aashi12

i'll un-res at night or kal.. Mummy calling! Sorry!

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paakhee, you have given me lots of fodder to think upon! Really with each new chapter a new twist comes up!

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Its not that hard to understand Khushi, anyone who's shifted to a different place, froma place they have spent some really important and long years of their life, would understand her lonliness.. Besides she is in an entirely new country, the one she has only heard about, all alone with few ground breaking revelations to accept and ponder on!!


She basically is under : 'House Arrest' and that will easily frustrate many but Khushi here is showing lots of patience and courage!

Yes she is strong that way. But she also live being sad over something that has already happened in consequences to inevitable. She believes in moving forward and let future makes it way.


NK seems a nice guy .. Sweet, shy but nevertheless, friendly. Besides Khushi can teach him 'English'.. And he can be a good friend too :)
Good Idea!! 😉

about Arnav, every time i'm unsure. Really! I said it last time and i stand by it, he shows himself for what he is not! But around Khushi his mask falls.. Like he is not even bothering to hide!
Should I be bothering that you are already reading him correctly, when other's are busy hating him?😆


*Make Khushi drool over his half naked state, often, gives us a fair idea about his sexiness.. ;)

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the call shashi received from Rana, so the wheels have now set into Motion!
Wait and watch, is all i'll say here😉


** even ablind can see a Black Bugatti.. But the way you write, i mean your vocab and choice of words is such fun to read! :' its a four wheeler fanatic's wet dream'.. I loved this!
😆😆 Thank you for the compliment 😃

Aman is the sensible while Anjali is fast and furious.. Daring and vivacious!
So Shyam Gupta is equally aware of who she is, as much as she is aware of who he is..!
Yes, but for how. You'll have to wait 😈

Besides both of them are brother-sister right..? Shyam is Rana and Sheetal's son! And rana had raped Anjali's mother, which had led to Anjali's birth.. So it makes them Bro-sis! Haina..??
I have to say this that you are the only one who has correctly intercepted the relation tangles until here very well! But, Towards the edge is all about twists and I'll show you how😉 Though you are correct according to what has been said!

Shyam is already aware of Anjali, asli pehchan..! They must also know about how Shashi is planning to set them up, because Anjali is a major part of their plan! her identity being already known, puts a lot of things in open!

Let's see!!😛


P.S : do tell me if i'm thinking wrong anywhere.. Hum tum par nirbhar hain!
Bang on up till now, Meri jaan 😆
Anywys.. Great Going.. Already making my brain work hard!;)

Originally posted by: _disha_

Just when Khushi thinks of having another clean slate at her messed up life , Arnav is just round the corner to screw with her mind literally!

Absolutely 😆 His sole aim right now is to drive her crazy😆

And my my what a fabulous description of him , had me drooling here..😳 😆

Thank you☺️

So Shyam Gupta is clearly not just an arrogant ass , he is much smarter than i gave him credit for , he already knows Anjali is Anjali and not Khushi !😲

There is more to it😉

Originally posted by: ShwetapS

Hey Paakhee, caught up with the last two updates. Loved the description on the antagonist's entry.

Glad you liked it. I was really nervous about Rana's part

It was as sleazy as character seems to be!

Arnav's flitting personality in these two chapters from dry indifference to casual flirt was a good touch too...gives a peek into a what an interesting personality he would shape up to be as the story progresses.

Yes, he has many shades to him. 😆

And you have managed to leave the readers on tenterhooks with your parting shot where Shyam knows anjali is an undercover agent! But then whats a good mystery without some head scratching moments! So bring it on I say!

Sorry?? 😆 I will try to update soon to compensate 😛

Originally posted by: camlin

Originally posted by: smartgirl9009

ahaaan...so the game begins now...

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its just perfect...brilliant writing dear...

Thank you so much 😃

I don't wan to miss any detail n event in this story...

plxxx continue soon...

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thnxxx a lot 4 pm...

Originally posted by: suji5

is shyam aware of shashi's daughter's name?