kavi jii this was fabulous update..m so so hooked to your writing that each time a new update comes up i end up reading it atleast thrice before commenting...the passion,zealous and the whole atmosphere becomes electrifying and that too when these two people just converse..i think there will be blast and dhamakas when anything else happens...
sheetal u have presented a complete character sketch of her in this update and m loving it and you as well for making her the most evelist & mean person...😆😆
i wonder when will the strong bonding between arnav and jealousy come to end..they go hand in hand always..poor it guys had to pay so much for helping out khushi..
so anjali is depressed..kavi ji you have written the whole anjali breakdown part effortlessly each and every emotion was described beautifuuly enabling us to go thru all the emotions along with her..👍🏼👏
anjali singh raizada was forced into this marriage..now this statement got me confused about mamiji's character..like all your other stories shall i assume her to be negative character or is there a change here anjali finding solace in manav's arms..her life is in mess and she needs to get out of it soon..also give more about shyam kavi jii i can see he has an imp role to play but not much is written about him (i dont mind though😛😆)
whats with this sheetal i strongly feel arnav is forced into this relationship as well i guees it will get revealed in next chapter now dat she got arrested...
reading about khushi learning about dance took me to another jouney with you i.e valley of flowers..😊
arnav's childhood..this was new to us as no one ever described about it in any of the ff's or in the show as well so that was a new addition and reading it made me smmile.
as always will vait for next part😊
Edited by Cute6 - 11 years ago
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