Arshi: The Symphonious Saga!!! #Bairiyaa 16/3 Pg. 42

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AASHI

@aashi_taichi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

It was interesting
n liked d pace of d story
do pm me wn u update

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Praniiii

@Praniiii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Lovely lovely lovely...amazing concept and perfect writing...loved it...

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DaisyHoney

@DaisyHoney

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Awesome , superb ... Do cont ASAP

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saba

@ASR6262

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Very interesting I really enjoy reading it :)

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pal_24

@pal_24

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Yay you're Back😊...and that too so soon...was a really gr8 surprise to see ur pm waiting for me in my inbox..
coming to this story, I love the whole concept...I always imagine scenarios for the songs I listen to and so was thrilled to see you weave stories using the songs as themes and that too scenarios revolving our Arshi...Loved the first story... & its so dfferent in its writing style as compared to 'the deal' and yet captivating ...I liked the deal for the witty & funny style of writing and the drama that unfolded whereas I like this coz here the words and the descriptive style of writing just flows along and takes us with it...the way khushi handled the ntire situation was awesome...just wish even she had noticed arnav at some point of time...
Waiting for more:)

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Awesome... khushi is very strong on her views but that does not mean that she does not believe in marriage...Arnav can be in for a rude shock ,,,

Edited by ranogill - 12 years ago

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the_breeze

@the_breeze

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

OK this was simply superb..

First off I love this song and the way you incorporated it into the story was just great... It was a good touch to have given us all the background info about Arnav and his beliefs.. Just goes to show the effort you have taken to pen this down despite it being an OS. 👏

The wedding scenes were beautifully described and the song just added to the magic and hae I just drooled imagining Khushi looking like an angel the entire time in a pink lehenga! 😳

All said and done, this was an amazing piece of writing. And I look forward to reading more from you..

Please do continue soon

Edited by the_breeze - 12 years ago

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Sajinabi

@saj111

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Praj my dear Gulabi, wat can I say after reading dis marvelous Pink poem with its beautiful Kisses

. WOW perfect introduction of Arnav with his Besharam lifestyle and his belief in it. I really appreciate his POV, its true if u don't believe in it then do not force them until and unless u see how much weak their belief is. In Arnav's case he set's his mind and no force can change it .

LOL u made khushi also pink, but I really loved it how Arnav described khushi and dat too called her Besharam like him 😆. This is wat all girls hve to do. Never get binded to so called rituals and traditions unless and untill its taking u to right path and future Clapping Hands

. When d groom itself told dat he loves someone else then he should've informed it earlier to d bride then she could've stopped with help of Khushi.

Loved each and every convo between Shruthi - Khushi Best Friends 1

and how she explained it correctly to her, but when it comes to parents image then its obvious dat bride will follow d wat they want instead wat she wants

. More than their convo, its Arnav's thought and his admiration on Khushi I loved it to d core . Even I loved dat confident smirk of Khushi and can really picturize her while reading dat part. When Arnav very curiously came down to find out how Khushi was going to stop d wedding, even I also was waiting eagerly to see dis drama part along with Arnav when for minutes he lost her sight 😡, thought he's gonna miss d drama part, but no including him every single person present 4d ceremory was only focusing on dis hot spicy convo .

The meaning of d each and every rituals, WOW never thought Praj dat in ur brillent brain u'll come up with such a brillent logic. It was very very true, 4 a healthy relationship trust and love is d most important thing reqiured and were there is no love then how can two individuals live their entire life and if these rituals donot provide d power of love and give blessings to love each other then wat is d use of such rituals. Finally as nani said "All is well that ends well" Hippie 1

but Arnav's thought was only on Khushi and my most fav part of all was Arnav's dialogue dat he said in his mind dat he has found his match . Waiting how Arshi's love is going to blossom and will nani accept her as bahu when she herself called Khushi Besharam.

Praj when u got d idea of combing both Storytelling and Poetry, never thought it'll be such a wonderful story coming up and u really deserves dis Bow Down

and u've outstanded and reached a very big step ahead in ur writing skill's. Thank u so much 4d pm Thank You

. Will be waiting 4d nxt update.

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

wow you are back with more woohoo
well yes there was no point in marrying the guy and then be miserable all life
he loves another and wont love her friend
her friend will be miserable
and so will be the girl whom the groom loved
aise emotional blackmail ke liye toh bilkul bhi haan nahin karni chahiye
wow they would make good pair
so good for one another
loved the mixture of poems and story like that
cant wait for more now

Edited by chavvi16 - 12 years ago