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Camlin

@Camlin

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Unres~~~~~

OMG... When I used to read your comments on my FFs I always thought you had deep, penetrating thinking and a writer's qualities. And, when I read this, I wasn't surprised. You can write so well my dear and my stories are plain in front of your writing. What actually do you find in my writing, to be worth read?

Arnav's thoughts, Khushi's actions; everything was justified. Aman, I fell in love with his character.

The Arnav you created was total drool worthy! Khushi's cuteness and the final kiss.

Each emotions was justified and felt. I so wish something like this happened in the show!

You are simply amazing darling and I am already a fan of your writing.

Waiting for you to write more...

Edited by camlin - 11 years ago

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Mahnoor

@Lalaland222

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

This was amazing, you doll.. :')

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Anu,

Very nicely written.from the beginning I could visualise a sad ASR having lost so much all the tragedies that haunt him...to the man he is now..lonely and alone...like having it all still something or someone was missing from his life...

Then comes our Khushi, brave and beautiful, she knows what is wrong and takes a chance not compromising her values..

Loved how he feels when he looks at her and she at him..I could feel the chemistry and intensity...and the passion...beautiful!

Loved how he is so concerned about her and how she falls into his arms...nice!

The end took me by surprise...the way they connect with each other it was unexpected...as I thought he would get angry so I loved it...very well written!

Loved your interpretation of the scene and all the dialogues from the show...🤗

Edited by vandana.sagar - 11 years ago

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aashi12

@aashi12

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar
Anu,
Very nicely written.from the beginning I could visualise a sad ASR having lost so much all the tragedies that haunt him...to the man he is now..lonely and alone...like having it all still something or someone was missing from his life...
Then comes our Khushi, brave and beautiful, she knows what is wrong and takes a chance not compromising her values..
Loved how he feels when he looks at her and she at him..I could feel the chemistry and intensity...and the passion...beautiful!
Loved how he is so concerned about her and how she falls into his arms...nice!
The end took me by surprise...the way they connect with each other it was unexpected...as I thought he would get angry so I loved it...very well written!
Loved your interpretation of the scene and all the dialogues from the show...🤗

:')... 🤗

Thank you di! You don't know what it means to read you comment, here on this OS! :)

but i'm glad you liked it!

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Itu

@simi58

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

oh my anu this was sooo adorable... and awesomee and everything.. truely i loveeeddd it..

u wirte beautifully girl..👏

u turned the events soo nicely... i simply loved ur khushi..she loved her sis.. she had her innocence..(i absolutely loved the way khushi had the faith tht her jiji will get her rajkumar) and of crs the mind to do the right things..And yes she was sanka devi also.. Having a being human dress?? pagal hai..par cute hai..

arnav was niceee too..

thnks for sending me to my hayeee land with all the ipk dialogues.. <3