TAAREY OS - FOREVER AND EVER

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello Everyone...!!!!! This is my first OS and I hope this works out...!!!!!! Please bear with my story...!!!!!!!😊😊The blue sky was clear and cool...The sun shined shyly from behind the clouds...He opened his eyes and smiled...He was sitting on her lap resting peacefully...She was ruffling his hair and looking out at the waters...He got up and held her hands... She raised her eyebrows 😲 and he just nodded...😃
Taani:"Rey aap kaha jaa rahe ho???Baithiye naa yaha...
"Rey:"Tum chalo toh sahi..!!!!!!"😉😉😉
She got up and he took her to the shore...she jumped like a small kid when the waters touched her feet...she played with water for a long time...He then picked her up in his arms 😳😳😳 and they left smiling and happily each others...
Tears streamed down his face 😭😭😭😭😭...His forehead cringed as he remembered the most dreadful time of his life...😭
She lay on the bed breathing hard...Rey was totally shattered...He knew this was coming...ANYTIME, ANYWHERE...He didn't want to loose her...HE LOVED HER...He couldn't afford to lose her...but he was helpless...Taani's breathing grew heavy second after second...She was fighting between life and death...Rey held her hand tightly...It was Taani's hand which was losing grip slowly and steadily...He prayed to God to give him his Taani back...He wanted Taani...Whether he had to loose his whole fortune, family, friends or anything for it...But God had many other plans for him...He clinged on to Taani's hand asking to hold on...She was hardly able to breathe...She opened her pale pink lips and managed out to say :
Taani:"Aaa-I l-l-l-ove yuuuh.."❤️
Rey:"I love you too Taani...Mujhe chodh ke mat jao...please Taani main nahi jee paaunga...please Taani mujhe chodh ke mat jaaooo..."😭😭😭😭😭😭
She managed to smile weakly...He took 5-7 heavy breaths and the heartbeat reading machine went BEEP...He looked at Taani...After battling with CANCER for 10 grueling months...She finally found herself some peace...FOREVER AND EVER...She was gone...FOREVER AND EVER ...He had to live without her FOREVER AND EVER...He could never see, feel,,touch her...He was gonna miss her FOREVER AND EVER...The doctor came up to Rey and and put a hand on his shoulder...Rey looked at him and the doc nodded...Rey signed the papers and they took Taani away...Away from him...FOREVER AND EVER...
He slid his hand into his jeans and took out a old crumpled piece of paper...He touched note with his fingers...It read:
"Rey main jaanti hu aap bahut upset hai mujhse...maine apna promise nahi pura kiya...but mujhe pata hai aap mujhe maaf kar denge...kabhi apne aap ko akele mat samajhna kyuki main hamesha aapke saath hu.I love you.Forever and ever..."
A drop of tear fell on the old paper and he opened his teary eyes...Today even after 7 years he missed her so much...she had left him only this piece of paper...He loved her and missed her a lot...He put the note into the pocket and walked off...Today there was nobody to hold his hands and walk, nobody he could pick up in his arms...He was alone now FOREVER AND EVER...
Ok guys I know it was really boring but please if you liked it leave some comments...Thank you for bearing with me and Reading my boring OS...😃😃
Take Care ...😊😊
Edited by ziya_taarey - 12 years ago

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2111_shweta thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😭😭😭
It was too emotional...
The pure love between them was written very nicely😳
Length wise it was short but feeling and emotions kut kut ke bhare the😉
Write more...but thoda happy happy wala please😛
Will be waiting till then...
Love
Shweta
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very emotional 😭
Taarey love are timeless
Lovely OS, u did a nice job
Plz do write more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful and emotional os
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I'm speechless yr...!!!
Its amazing emotional and heart-touching OS...!!!
Its not at all boring!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey dear...That was really cute...I mean I just loved it...
Great job!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was too emotional 😭
But well done 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it...
bohot emotional tha...
awesome work...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you so much for all ur valuable comments...!!!!!!😭😭
I'm really happy that u all just loved it...!!!!!!😊😊
Edited by ziya_taarey - 12 years ago
ZiyaGautamholic thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I promise ...next time...a long OS...!!!!!!!

Thanks for reading...!!!!!!

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