Ashlok FF:DESIRE CALLS...Chapt-24,pg-149 UPDATED! - Page 41

Originally posted by: saku1122

Great update. Can wait to see who is the second person.

Thank u!Updating soon!😉

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

Our hero sholk is also there...

Don't worry aastha. ...

He will come rescue...

Great update dear...

Thank u so much!😛

Originally posted by: sumana561

Nice update...

Thank u!😊

Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx

Nooo!!!!

I can't believe you ended it at such an interesting part! 😲

^That is how deeply involved I was in your story while reading it! 😃

After reading two such passionate chapters, I've gotta say that you are like the official Queen of Romance! 😉 Seriously the way you describe the scenes - every small detail - is simply flawless!

And now I also have to say that you've given a very correct name to this FF! 😆

Hope to see more of Shlok's "forbidden desire" 😛 and the two of them getting to know each other! :D

Do update soon!

Awww!😳Thank u so much!🤗Ur comments always make my day!😃Nd ofcourse mk my pen,or in dis case fingers itch to type more romance..Nd story.😆Thank u so much my frnd..😛

Originally posted by: ..-AsYa-..

The second man must be Shlok...continue soon...

Let's see..Updating..😉

Originally posted by: ArVi-licious

oh wow.. great chapter, loved the car scene.. it was beautiful.. and i could feel the tension later in the party.. well written..👏

Thank u so much!😛

Originally posted by: rhearuhi

great update thanks for the PM loving it

Thank u so much!😃

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome update
loved the car scene
but you stopped at wrong place
continue soon
thanks for pm

Thank u so much!I know I shudnt hv stopd dere..😆Bt i always end up doing stuffs i shudnt!😉Thank u!😛

Originally posted by: -Priya01

Nice updt ...y u stop

plzzz do continue soon

thanks for the pm

stay blessed rab rakha

Sorry dear!😳Will update soon!Thank u!😉

Originally posted by: les-miserables

Man, this is angsty! 😈

I know..😆Thank u..😉