Arshi OS: Forget Me Not ~ TY Note Page 48

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ara_000

@ara_000

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

u knw wat u r one hell brilliant writer..!

Like read dis shot nd anyone will day how much potential u have to hook up ur readers to ur stories..!

Such a fresh concept nd such an awsum twist,ahhh dats wat i call LOVE..!

Both love each other like crazy nd her she is pretending to stay away from him thnking he will not b able to get his happiness wit him nd there he is all waiting for her to get her memory back so dat they can get married..!

Nd lastly she got trapped nd its hard to play wit d ASR nd finally LOVE finds its way out..!

Beautiful shot

ahhh loved every buts of it ❤️

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musicfan5

@musicfan5

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Beautifully beautifully written story... Absolutely loved it...

U surprise me every time with the beauty and versatility of ur thoughts and stories

Waiting to read a lot more of ur amazing writing

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Megha

@MarriedLove

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

just loved it...

very nice work...

the emotions of arnav and khushi are so readable...

you are hell of grt writer...

a bouquet frm my side on such fantastic story...

Edited by MarriedLove - 11 years ago

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Oh wow, that was wonderful!! Loved this os!!!!

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celinawalter

@celinawalter

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

unres!!!

wow!!! just wow!!!
the above 2 words must have told u how much i liked it... i guess i dont need to elaborate.
but what to do, its habitual...😆
this os was from Arnav's pov to maximum extent and i liked the khushi's acting to save her self respect.. and making Arnav come on his knees to beg for her hand but thank god Arnav caught on the her momentary slip in pretense...
nice and loved it...

Edited by celinawalter - 11 years ago

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Frida

@Frida

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Wow, that was so sweet!!

All of your stories have unique Arnav & Khushi characters & I love each one of them..

It has been said enough times that do not judge book by its cover, but we superficial humans still do it. You have conveyed the same message so nicely.

Pls keep writing Arhi stories!!

Now waiting to read next MKM-2 update :)

Edited by Frida - 11 years ago