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Farha Naz

@farha_ipkknd

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#111

it's beautiful & quite different from your other works ...enjoyed reading it & the ending was amazing :)

Edited by farha_ipkknd - 11 years ago

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surrazdan

@surrazdan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Amazing story... loved it to d bits...

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amus5

@amus5

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

true to the saying 'What goes around comes around' and that too with full blast and with full consciousness ...

lovely...thanx for the OS and the mail... 👏

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mamidis

@mamidis

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Nice short story. loved it.

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Lakshmi

@Chipmunks.

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

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~Unres~
Lovely OS.
First I pitied Arnav. He loved her and she didnt even remember him and she didnt even liked his company.
But when I read that he didnt respect her for who she was I thought he deserved her aloofness.
That was a twisr when I realized that she was just acting cuz she knew the truth.
I think she should have been a lit bit more hard on him.

Edited by Chipmunks. - 11 years ago

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Lovely.

A simple love story but so heartfelt. Methinks it was Arnav;s journey to love and self-realization. Enjoyed reading it 😊

~Edit 1 ~

Just one thing - perhaps Arnav should have elaborated on the fact he fell in love with her over the course of time? I don't see how Khushi would believe him instantly, perhaps assuming that he has been coming here because his parents forced him or because he really needs Shashi on his side.

Doubt tha, bas bol diya 😊 But I loved the OS!

Edited by vgedin - 11 years ago

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

That was freaking brilliant
I love your stories
They always have a twist

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anusha.nush

@anusha.nush

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#118

thats was nice nice
read it twice
u r too gud
👏

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priya247

@priya247

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#119

like always this story of yours is also amazing.
I truly loved it. and i appreciate you as a very tremendous writer of India Forums.
Your concepts are always different from others and also exceptional.
Good job👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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avika_ShArMa

@avika_ShArMa

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#120

awesome!!! 😃
i was literally in tears in the first half of the story and smiling till my cheeks pained by the end! it was that beautiful. if os's are going to be like this then i don't mind reading 10 posts long one! really. :)

i wanted to comment the other night when it was like what, 2-3 pages old? but fell asleep and look where im am, freaking 20 pages late !! i don't res as i tend to forget where i res-d but i think im in dire need to do that in cases like this!! :P

okay, now about the os. do i really need to say that loud? don't you yourself come to conclusions when you end writing such awesome piece of work?!

firstly i was confused in the first para but then i got the gist. i was angry with arnav but if we look from his pov, how many would NOT behave like him? he is foreign educated, his parents are so modern, has had been living in such modern environment with broad minded friends and colleagues, he is bound to somewhat be appalled with his parents decision to get him married of to a girl coming from a village. but yes, it was wrong on his part to demean khushi so badly when she was trying so hard to be like him. he should have helped her in parties to mingle with his friends rather than getting irritated and whining like a baby and downright rejecting her!!
she must have felt so bad. really bad. specially when she was in love with him. for her, her self respect was more precious than being with a person who treated her like a piece of inanimate object, and refused to make her a part of his circle.

i somewhat guessed she was pretending and that line about ring being loose since the engagement caught my eyes even before i read the next few lines! i was grinning like a fool, partially because i caught her lie and partially coz for the FIRST time ever in your story, my guess was right in the beginning! lol. :P :D

my heart was crying seeing arnav make efforts and amend his mistakes and khushi not even acknowledging him! but like he said, he deserved it.
but few questions keep coming to my mind. what IF she didnt have an accident? even if she had, what IF she didnt loose her memory? :O

but all's well that ends well. they are together. they are happy together. they will be getting married...well together! :P :P

thanx for the pm.
and keep writing. ALWAYS!

gosh! i must have bored you to hell. :P 😊