Arshi SS-'Adopted'. LINK TO THREAD-2 ADDED ON PG-1 30-11

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smitar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: laddoo598
What a cliffhanger of an ending, you must update soon! Loving this story :)

Arnav has got what he wanted, an indifferent wife. Whether he likes it or not is another thing...ha..ha..Lovely, Harinder! Love it!👏👏👏👏👏👏

Smita

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raina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Read it in one go
It's pretty good

Ur writing style is different

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Japonica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

This is a fantastic story. Chapter 1 was so poignant and in fact painful - addding a new dimension to the meanings of the words 'understanding', 'strong' and 'patient'

Resoursefulness (in its positive sense) was absolutely the le mot juste.

Your Khushi is a tremendous person, for seeing the situation as an opportunity rather than a challenge. Now the terms 'understanding', 'strong' and 'patient' have an added layer of meaning here!

A pity Arnav baabu was so lost in his own awesomeness, he never saw the awesomeness in his bride. Glad his family did. Serves him right.

Payal, the self-absorbed creature, is not worthy of commenting upon.

Love the way you have conveyed pain without the dramatic angst and the sentimentality that accompanies it. Lacing it with the humour makes it just that much more poignant.

Looking forward to Mr. ASR coming in for nice bumpy landing down to earth from his lofty heights and seeing the world at ground level! Ha! 😃

Edited by Japonica - 12 years ago

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crazyweird

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Nice nice

Loved the way khushi treating him...

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S.B.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Take proper rest
will be waiting for u to update on the given time:)

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..Jyoti..

@..Jyoti..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Amazing update dear..
Arnav ne kya socha tha aur kya ho gaya.. 😆

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Throne

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

You are extending it to an SS!!

Sure as hell, the story is going as per our expectations!

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Greta update, Khushi s POV was important too.

So Arnav Arrogant Raizada is feeling left out now!

That too because of the girl he was waiting to put in her place!

Saari ummido pe pani his wife threw!

Of course Khushi s Dil ji was bound to get her in trouble, ignoring super temperamental husband doesn't solve problems!

I love how the entire family is doting on her. That gives her some support I guess, something to fight for. Otherwise she would have just left probably thinking no one wanted her!

Now I am waiting to see what damage the erupted volcano does and what damage control measures the family takes after that!

Looking forward to Saturday!

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dilectus

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: smitar

Arnav has got what he wanted, an indifferent wife. Whether he likes it or not is another thing...ha..ha..Lovely, Harinder! Love it!👏

Smita

Thank you Smita ji!! I wanted to make some things opposite than the show, like how Khushi always went behind Arnav despite his bad behaviour. And how Arnav always took her for granted even after everything, as showed by the "You are the biggest mistake of my life" scene and "Naa hi tum mein dimag hain na hi itni himmat ki dunia ka samna kar sako " scene on their diwali with Aarav. I have planned on some more deliberate differences with the show. Hope you will like it. :)

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dilectus

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: ShikhaKhushi

😆Dekho Jiji... Main aagayi...😆

Haan, haan... hum jaante hain, achhi tarha se jaante hain.. Har baar yahi karti ho, kuchh ITNA sundar likhti ho, phir gayab... Iss baar aisa kiya, na... Humaara itna chhota sa, pyaara sa dil = ❤️ aise ho jaayega : 💔 Toota hua, phata hua...

Theek hai, baba! Chalo, apne exam ki khub prep karo, hum tumhaare liye prarthna kareinge priye! Yeh jang tumhein jeetni hi padegi! Vijayee bhava!😉 But I know you can do it, baby! *Oppa Sanaya Style*😆

Aur haan! Montreal ke ek mashoor baba [aka moi😆] ne kaha hai ke aaj kal Harinder ji ko apni aankhein khuli rakkhni chaahiye! Humaare jijaji se milne ki unchi sambhaavna hai!😆

Ek aur baat! Humein voh sher zyaada samajh mein nahin aaya...😳😆

But jug-jug jiyo beti! Aur yeh update jaldi karo... Varna hum aapke intezaar mein marjaayeinge!🤢

Sach bol rahi hoon Shi, ek baar bhi soch ke nai likha. Bas tabadtod likhto gayi hoon. Aur ye 3rd waali update to sirf isliye kyunki tune maangi thi. Pehli baar kuch manga tune, mana kaise kar deti 😳😆.

Yaar, ye exam ne to maar dala mujhe. Sar pe mandrata rehta hai aur main aur kuch nai kar paa rahi hoon. Excel ke saare frmulas yaad karne hain mujhe, soch!!! Saare matlab SAARE!!! But main clear karke rahoongi, chahe jo ho jaye!!!😎

Aankhein to har wakt khuli hain, wo aaye to sahi, hum to palakein bichaaye baithe hain☺️

Wo sher nai tha idiot 😆 Eczema lotion ki ad thi, tu boli thi na tujhe update nai mili to khujli machegi, isliye😆😆😆

Main to waise bhi budhhi hoke hi maroongi, par tu Ootpatang baatein mat kiya kar!! Tu mere baad hi maregi!! Update di hai wo padh, aur baaki apni classes mein padh, man lagake!!!

Kal milte hain 🤗