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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 197
I forgot to tell u by mistake I wrote chapter 194 instead of 195 in my previous to previous comment n in previous forgot to mention chapter no at all sorry
Now first of all u have selected the gifs frm two of my all time fav movies just love the both specially salt... now coming to update this chapter beautiful the way u described General n his bravery now I know why Aura said wht u told us in cottage. ... I really have fallen in love with him in this chapter n the mystery he posses is certainly much more than Lordy... he saw his mother's face instead of the face of enemy soldier when he was falling oh my god! y? did he killed his mother BY MISTAKE? oh god n then lightening saved him by getting hurt herself. ..

He fought furiously, crying curses
aloud, almost maddened in his
movements, wrought by the vision of
the woman he had had and also by
what had become of Lightning. And
woe to those enemies who strayed to
him for no one escaped the brutal blow
of his revenge-ridden sword.


AWESOME simply awesome 👏 👏 ' 👏

his pain n loneliness n vulnerability was so beautifully written na Linny... now who this girl... she is a girl but her eyes aged n angered... n she is not his imagination coz she touched Lightening n she felt her touch too another mystery. ...
The General gritted his teeth in anger,
and frowned at the darkness, "If you
are the one to be born to my wife, then
cursed be you and hated be your birth!
For you come only to bring torture
upon me."

means he is already loathing his unborn child...

a tear slid down his dusty cheek.

now my heart for the first time went out for general yaarLin u r making me emotional for him...


She looked only at her Master. Her
beloved Master who had always been
there for her and for whom she was
ready to lay her life.
If only he would look at me... the horse
yearned.
As though hearing the echo of her
heart's wish, the General looked up.
Fresh tears glistened on his cheeks, a
sight she had never seen. No, Master.
You are strong. You always should be.
She heard the gunman cock his
weapon in the distance.
And then she understood...why her
Master was crying.
But she didn't falter, she didn't move.
She was a General's soldier.
Courage ran in her blood.
With one last look on her Master's
face, she closed her eyes.
And then she heard his voice.


BEAUTIFUL I had tears in my eeyes it was so beautiful... she is his only family n he left battlefield for her only... I really m liking his character now after thos chapter... btw this is stramge na both lordy n gen show their loven care for their horses n r very near to them n love them n treat them as familyinfact little more. if u couldnt found any connection or make sense of my comment on the end its coz isuddenly m very sleepy n sorry typos too
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Posted: 12 years ago
I swear, this is the first and probably the last time I sign my allegiance to General Jha. As much as I hate that despicable man, I could not sit here and read this chapter without breaking down.

Lightening has become a part of all of us and I can't see her suffering and her almost last few moments; I love her thoughts and how she wanted to see her Masters face one last time cause she knew that this was it.

I didn't expect General Jha to leave but even I agree it was for the best however I sincerely hope he doesn't go to the Castle straight away to stir more trouble. I hope he hides in the forest until Lightening heals...

Thanks Lin...loved the update. Very touching.xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
im so pleased with this update..you amazed us with arnav's characterization.His yearning for his wife has been pictured beautifully..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing super cute...keep it up
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Posted: 12 years ago
Okay!! After the last emotional (Lightening) chapter, I am no grinning like an idiot😃😃😃😃.
I can't stop smiling to myself and I'm sure my colleagues think I've lost the plot...but seriously, I could not have asked for a better way to see them finally come face to face; although Khushi is asleep.
I'm convinced that I felt Lord Arnav's every emotion and heartbeat as he lay next to her on their bed. Yes, THEIR bed, cause that's where she belongs. I had goose bumps going up my arms and my neck as he spoke to her in his own way. I'm glad that Khushi spoke of her feelings albeit it was in her dream. They say we speak the truth when dreaming so her words can be taken literally by Lord Arnav.
Short chapter but worth every word that's written in this chapter. I feel like singing and dancing😛
Now you say, we are about to embark on two chart busting chapters on ARSHI; so I can't wait... will keep stalking this page until I read them. Thanks Lin.xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dear Aqualine,
I am a new member to your Arhasia.Now going to be a regular visitor to the Inn .The chapter which I read first is Chapter # 184 Reaching Out.May be ,as you know, the Lady in the Dark Hood have specially taken me without my awareness to the cave and seated me before the fire place.You narrate the story so well and I was shocked,astonished,thrilled,goosebumped,..what not !!...
I was going for my vacation to my own country and you know What I did ,I copied the full chapters to my laptop (PLEASE,NOT PLAGARIASM) so that in my home without net access I will be able to read your story.I devoted my full vacation for your story...My days and nights were filled with Arhasia and its characters...The handsome beast and the stubborn red rose was in my dreams too...
When I returned I was anxious for the balance part.You know when I go through the headings of stories in the forum I avoid too long stories as I think I dont have that much time to allot for a single story.But still I don't know why I read your story that day.Really you are awesome..May be just due to the long lengthiness of the story the readers are not coming here for visiting.Like me...
But I know once they visit they will understand that they missed a wonderful story for a long time.Your writing style always keeping inmind the lordy nature is quite appreciable.
Ok ,but I have a doubt you should clear it... Aranav asked Khushi to stay in his Di's room.But after that Aranav didn't run for food at night?Or he was not needed as he got peace with Khushi's smell??
This last two days he again went in search of food???Or Arnav doesnt change everynight??Please explain to me.
Love you
Edited by sweetfairy007 - 12 years ago
-Farwa_Ibrahim- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
CHAPTER 198



WHAT AN UPDATE *dreamy sigh* my heart swelled with happiness gosh yes it was a small chapter but wht it held was so great tht m happy it was... Khushi decided to punish Lordy by keeping her scent n herself away from lordy n the poor lordy is so used to his wife's presence in form of her choice in his daily wear to her scent she was always there n now she is punishing him but he was unable to hold himself anymore the yearning got better of him n he dashed towards his sister' s room ermmm Lordy weren't u in the game for winning n losing u r going to lose it u know... lol hai


"This is me taking my wife with me."

off course impatient now r we Lordy. ... but whtever I love u for this Muaaah. .. hahaha Lordy's style of saying shutup u shld b sleeping now di lol...


Sighing, Lady Anjali shook her head at the door,
"Oh dear! I fear what may ensue next. I certainly
don't want to be in Chotey's place when Kushiji
wakes up."

CERTAINLY Lady but I can't to see n witness the outburst. .. its been long time now since we last witnessed thwir verbal fight a treat to watch indeed but for now it can wait as Lordy is taking Khushi no scratch tht his wife to his no scratch tht too to THEIR room.
BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL god! he couldn't believe his eyes n his lips couldn't stop chanting the name n the part where u said it was almost he would cry out of joy... haha she thought Di n confessed her yearning for him n it made him so much happy n us too... I don't know abt room but I know abt my self coz m grinning like stupid n I can't stop it... thank u Lin for writing it... loved if

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Gayathri_ipkknd

hai i am a new reader to your story and let me say its one of the best I've ever read. its really creative for a story to be a blend of ipkknd in a completely another plot. your story is really long and mysterious. and it is just getting more and more thrilling. Arnav and Khushi are the best, their chemistry,their love,their passion is so amazing. but what i loved the most was how you gave each and every character a great importance in the story. honestly i am neither a fan of akash-payal romance nor a fan of shyam. but in your story,i just can't stop myself from falling in love with each and every character,even the prakash bros, ram and surabhi. and arshi they are the best. last chapter was so fantastic. finally our lordy has given up his pride and surrender to his love for Khushi. i just hope they don't get into another fight when she wakes up.
p.s. what will i have to do to be your comrade?


Rabba Vey dear Gayatri
welcome in Arhasia... to b a comrade u need to take the oath... if u see page 1 there is links to reader's special 1 n 2 u have to look at them n copy paste the oath given by Lin
Regards
Comrade Farwa
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lin, i love you. .i love you. .love you. .short or not that was soo touching.the way our lordy couldnt hold back any longer. .wow! Cnt wait for the next two. .nd yeah. .200th spl!!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Rabba Ve...
I missed a chapter in between.. I can't believe this.. 🤢 I should not keep stalking...

Finally, Khushi is going to her parents.. Khushi didnt know about consummation... 😆😆😆
Payal trying to make her understand.. hahahhahaha..

Lordy gave such lame reason.. errr...😡

After reading bitter battles for the first time in my life I felt pity for Shyam.. I felt there is good in his blackness as yin-yang... Ohhh lighting is such sweet heart.. ohhh... who is that mysterious girl.. What happened with his mother... Is that girl has to do something with the curse ??

Chapter 198 -- 👏
He missed her and she missed him too.. U r such brilliant writer Lin... There are no words the way you have narrated chapter.. It is pure love for arshi which come acrosses.. I really love your writing.. Keep it up...

I am awaiting for next chapter as u promised lot of Rabba Veee...


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