ArHi FF:8:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES

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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#651

lovely update as always dear...Khushi distraught for the Lord's health was a wonderful sight to see...she is missing him so much, that even his anger is welcomed now...and she is right, she is the only one who isnt bothered by his anger...cause she is his...and he is hers...

in the factory, even i wanted Lord Akash to quickly leave so that the first lord can enjoy khushi, breakfast basket with peace...i was scowling when lord Akash started reminding Lord Arnav bt how he is diff with Khushi around...cause i was scared that this reminder will push him back in his shell

Khushi is still eating in the Kitchen, I am not liking that at all, But i understand that its necessary for the story...also her theory for who ate the breakfast was so very logical

I loved the first Lord's gesture of leaving the liquor for her...and was sad that Anjali wanted her share out of it...it seemed like Anjali will never let the first Lord to totally belong to Khushi, she would always demand for herself equal or more attention from the lordy...and for once i really wished that Nani would teach her some basic rules, as to never asking a share from the gift that a husband brings for his wife...esp if that husband is lord Arnav, who has never gifted anything to anyone before...though i love khushi;s sharing nature...but somethings are meant esp for her...she has to learn to be a little selfish in such matters...

the Lordy-Khushi encounter was so (what do i call it) goosebumpy...it was beautifully written and its beauty shone through because of the 3 weeks separation...

But I must confess that for some reason despite reading that it was Lord Arnav there, for some reason I was scared that is it really the first lord or the general...i really hope and pray taht the general never gets the chance to go so close to Khushi...but with her still sleeping in Lady Anjali's room, i will be on the edge as long as she sleeps there...

Khushi's skin started paining because it was long-untouched... Does that mean that she will get used to the lord's touch, once they come closer...or will they have to maintain a distance cause of her pain...silly question i know, but i was wondering bt it...

waiting for the next update...

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19sayana

@19sayana

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#652

First thing first.. I missed u so so so very much.. so happy to hear from u..

I always loved the silence part.. I felt it just make their love strong for each other..

khushi is being such good wife.. n I always loved khushi's theories.. d part where she was trying to find what lord like to eat after 1st night n then now this one.. she is too good..

But this time lordy gave gift.. chocolate liquor.. wow.. lordy is using weapons to soften her m sure.. wink..

after coming so close.. arhi n their stubbornness.. ohhh how much I love them.. how much they both love challenges..

thanks for update.. hope everything is fine at ur place now.. take care..

edited -- if m nt wrong. next week both lady's ll visit their parents along with lords may be.. ohhh m eagrly waiting..

Edited by 19sayana - 12 years ago

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rockingsoni

@rockingsoni

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#653

loved it lin...

wonderful..

both are going out of their ways..such is their longing for each other...

loved their voiceless conversation..

I think khushi will break the game, on naani's insistence ofcourse...

But I really wish, it was first Lord who broke it..

They both are suffering.. but khushi said it right, they are more close than they were three weeks ago..

waiting for next...

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khareshelley

@khareshelley

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#654

superb update...👏
this is the best arnv khushi part..!!!!!
pls continue soon..!!!!!!

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gmsk

@gmsk

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#655

Woopiiiee wooppiieee... .

LINNY IS BACK WITH AN UPDATE..

But I'll be catching it up at night..

Bussy with family right now :D

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mpuhan

@mpuhan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#656

Gosh how romantic!!! And quite a long update... totally made up for the long wait... hehe
I bet it'll be the Lordy lord who breaks the breach first;)) make him do it will ya... you're the writer after all.

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meera

@mira

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#657

yehhh!! that was really waited for :D

the heat and passion those two have!!!uff!! if only they get over stupid ego and self sacrifice :P

Can you update some parts together? ieven if it takes a few more days reading together gives a great flow

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darya20

@darya20

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#658

Come on yaar when will the game finish

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#659

so true lord akash...Lady is making Lordy do things that he himself had never imagined...i still dont believe that he left a chocolate liquor bottle for her and then the night scene...though they were not able to see each other...still they relished each others presence to their hearts content...boosting them to go ahead with their games...loved the updates...thanks for pm :)

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shreelakshan

@shreelakshan

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#660

My My!!!...gosh...*gulp*...that was an awesome chapter and am glad i waited so long for it..:P...Am blushing like there's no tomorrow..:P..How do you do it Lin?..:P...Only you can make a beautifully crafted string of words into a mindblowing imagery...And I don't mind the pace at all...( and by pace i mean the unfolding of the story not the rate of updates;)..)..Agar mera bas chale to main har roz update maangti..:P..Am addicted to your FF dammit..:D..The update was worth the wait..:D..I loved their interaction through the basket and the bottle..:)..It was so cute..awww..:)...Both the stubborn hearts have culminated a breach in their bet...Cant wait for more..:D...Waiting for the next update with an explainable eagerness...:D...

Cheers,

Shree...;)