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Posted: 12 years ago
Best lines, summarizes Kushi's character completely "There is always so much tolook forward toin life with her around.There are small things to be done, big things to be discussed, petty things to be whined about and funny things to tell. She fills your day with herself,happiness, leaving no room for anything else."
Nice!
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh god writer ji. ...I m dying to comment and discuss this update but now cant.college.
but one request,if the thread comes around 150.. ..than plss make a thread before going off line today...so than at evening we can carry with our discussion. :)

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well writer ji,you have very wonderfully explained what he wants?,why he wants?,at what length he can go to get that, his need for Khushi and ...that now its impossible for him to go on without her.
And so this weighted manipulation from his side...
He is blameless for what he is doing because of his horrible past and the extent at which he wants khushi in his life..
by his little harangue its very clear that khushi has become his reason to live and also by her at his side he can dream of a happy future for HIM.

Here he is in his full manipulation mode and hats off for his manipulation here.
He is just damn good in making all thing work in his favor.
for example his imaginary wife.He very well handled the situation regarding how a new woman in his life can be a threat to Khushi.And his cardinal weopan was always with him.His dad's surgery!.And which he used it to the fullest.
And finally success was his...Khushi said YES.Must say a colossal job done by him.





Here Khushi was at her naviest.which hurt me the most.She was all but caring and loving for him and his dad and here he is taking her love and care for granted.Here he is not only taking her love and care for granted but also the rich amount
of trust she has in him.I know that he is very complicated person and had lived a horrible past but how
can he manipulate a person who has done nothing but filled his life with happiness, to this extent?
from my point of view i din like at the extent Arnav has manipulated Khushi.He was only and only , one after the other placing his cards in front of Khushi and left her with no divergence but to say YES.

In last update he has thought that its time to reap his dad's fruitful deeds.And ya he was right it was HIS DAD'S accomplishment that his laddoo was with him and filling his life with happiness.
And according to me he has no right to ask her to marry him for the sake of what all his dad has done for her.And i know that he has refrained himself from doing so but still he thought that
and it was really atrocious of him to even think that.

And what was his ace plan??

was it this only that he will ask Khushi to do his dad a favor for the sake of his dad's love and care and that his dad has adopted her and saved her from being an orphan???Or was it some thing else??
all in all i din like his level af manipulation.

I know that Arnav will take care of her like no one and try his level best to make her happy but for the time being ,i din like what all he did.His past cannot be given here as an excuse for his manipulation .Khushi was not the reason of his years of misery to put her in such a situation ,where he has not given her a way out is not right.


And again your last line left me hanging.what else he could ask her now...is it that ,that now he will ask her to keep distance with Rishabh ?...obviously he will not say that directly what he wants ,and again he will use his some manipulative tactics...


I know that i m sounding here like a anti -Arnav type,but believe me I love your(your ff's)Arnav a lot but after today's update i cant put myself to like him.And my sole reason of not liking him is becoz of how he manipulated a innocent khushi here.

But i also know that you will only take a mere update to change my views about him and i will be eagerly waiting for that update.😊








Love!!!





Edited by sphobic - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice chapter
i took all my time and read it
arnav has the art of convincing people...i loved that
he did not leave any chance for khushi to refuse him
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Apologies for delay in unresing!
The waiter gave Arnav & Khushi the right timings to converse 😆
This update has stark similarities with MKM 1 when Arnav was sort of proposing to Khushi & Khushi could not understand Arnav's different methods of doing so.

All I can see is Khushi's manipulated yes. Arnav is happy but Khushi is still in the dark about her own feelings, Arnav's feelings which is incorrect! U could have made Arnav make Khushi realize also na ? Finding out about Rishabh was just being selfish! Does Khushi know if Arnav has a girl Friend before or not ?

I read your 13# ka note hence felt even bad that I had not seen those hints before. I dont read through lines for hidden meanings.

Edited by Senorita Sanaya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
You are an awesome writer. Loved this chapter.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm didn't like the way he handled the whole proposal thing..it was so business like..I mean like khushi is a precious deal & he's trying to bag it for his own benefit ...nothing MORE nothing LESS ..he's WRONG ,so so wrong...I wish he had used a softer tone...(apart from not using the ACE card)..
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as for khushi you brilliantly described her shock, confusion, self doubt..the girl is thinking about arnav more than herself ...like he's a perfect marriage material & she's someone who limps ...seriously.!!!! well at least here arnav did a right job by brushing aside her insecurities ...and also by giving her an assurance to discuss about their situation later..though I doubt how useful it will be...
last line didn't give me any positive vibe...so yes i'm a little worried about khushi ..will be waiting for the next part..please update a little earlier :)
Edited by farha_ipkknd - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Updated at page 104 😊!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update! Arnav is at his manipulative best - but he is also very truthful. Eager to read more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I loved it. I was waiting like hell for it. My net had some problem and when today it was okay I was all but wishing that you might have updated.

From here on my interest level in the story has increased 20 folds. Though the outcome and layering of this update was as predicted, I loved it to bits.


I wonder what will Rishabh feel when he gets to know about it. Is he going to stay or leave soon? Please do let us know. Somewhere I do feel bad for him, but this is for better. His girl is not Kushi. Kushi is meant to be here with her bade papa, in Raizada mansion, with her Arnavji.

And what is this 'more'. Is the story going to take a different direction? Is Arnav's character going to be dark or persistent in coming updates?????? Can you give us some clue? I am really curious. This is a doubt in my mind from long.

And in one way what more can he demand from her? Commitment and ownership of her is given to him. I don't think he will demand love or care, or will he? I am intrigued beyond limits!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice update. Loved it. Poor Khushi had to say Yes. I wonder whose call was that Arnav cut it without even caller name.
Really nice update. Arnav the business man at best here for his important deal. But one thing I liked is he was not too harsh on her which is nice.

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