FF: Is it Love????Last Part Page-121.. - Page 9

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

Beautiful update...

Khatti meethi nok jok hamare ashlock ki...

There are so cute...pyaar me bhi ladai hai or ladai me bhi pyaar...I enjoy your writing...Thanks...

How are you lovely people... ok its next update here, but really i am not in the good mood to update... so less response? infect i think there are more than enough silent readers here...i just want to tell every writer needs a bit response if not appreciation atleast some criticisation telling me my weak points about story as well as my writing kills.. but here is nothing... no its not just my Ff's case, almost in all the stories people write, no one respond... this will really discourage writers here to write anything...Its not necessary to write good points only... you may tell weaknesses too to others which will make them better writers. otherwise its your wish...

Part-5

After having tea, Shlok started work on his laptop while Astha was moving here and there...she was looking her phone again and again but there was no network...

No use... finally Shlok spoke to her. Network will not resume till curfew is there...

Lekin mujhe samaj mein nahi ata, whats the need of jamming of network in curfew? Unhe pta nai hai kya kisi ko emergency call karni ho to? Astha spoke cutely making shlok smile...which could not go unnoticed by Astha...

So you smile too? Astha spoke with surprise...shlok banged his head with laptop in irritation... whats your problem? If I speak, then you call me monster, if I not speak, you try to make me speak. If I don't smile you call me Akdu, now if I smiled. Even then you are irritating me...

Na,na... its not so. I was just complementing you... Smile often, looks nice on you... saying astha on the bed while Shlok while working started music on his laptop...

As the music started... Astha widened her eyes in shock...

Now what? Shlok asked...

You and music? Mujhe to lga ap just kitabein hi padte hoge ya bus doosron ki band bajate hoge...

Shlok looked towards her surprisingly... astha has not seen this side of shlok ever, she has always seen his angry look with irritating face... As the song started...

Jhuki Jhuki see nazar bekaraar hai ke naheen
dabaa dabaa saa sahee dil mein pyaar hai ke naheen

Astha held his head with her hand...

Shlok gave her a questioning look...

I must have understood, your song choice will be as boring as you and I was getting happy chalo kuch music sunte hain...

tu apne dil ki jawaan dharkanon ko gin ke bataa
meri tarah teraa dil bekaraar hai ke naheen

Listen the lyrics of song, you will like it... but for that you need a bit brain... that I am yet doubtful... Shlok spoke making her angry...while he closed his eyes listening to the song...while astha was continuously looking at his face... She was smiling on seeing him singing the song with the music... Infect she had forgotten her all worries on seeing Shlok...

wo pal ke jis mein mohabbat jawaan hotee hain
us ik pal kaa tujhe intazar hai ke naheen

teri umeed pe thukaraa rahaa hoo duniya ko
tujhe bhee app ne pe ye ayetabaar hain ke naheen

As the song finished, shlok opened his eyes and found astha glaring at him continuously...

What? He asked...

Nothing...all astha said turning her face away...

Two days had passed in the same way trying to behave normal and teasing each other on one thing or another...astha was happy shlok had not scolded her even once in two days...while shlok was happy Astha had not wept remembering her family in last two days...

In these two days, they both had known a lot about each other and had a good bonding, still they didn't talk very much but atleast could understand each other a bit...

It was third day when shlok found on tv, there may be relaxation in curfew for two hours...

As he got the news, he went to reception and asked them to get them booked two tickets for pune for the earliest flight...

As the taxi reached midway... they saw a number of gangs of goons had jammed traffic on road...people were running here and there while cars, buses , all vehicles around were on fire...Police was trying to control them... tear bombs were being thrown , the scene in front of their eyes was just horrible...Astha was shocked as well as in tears on seeing all that and same was with shlok but being stronger, he was holding himself...

Saab hum vapis chalet hain,... taxi driver spoke in fear on seeing the scene in front of them...

Shlok and astha looked towards each other when shlok spoke...ok, turn back...

But it was too easy to say... As the taxi driver turned back... they saw goons coming from back side...with knifes, rods and many more weapons...

Sahib jaan bachani hai to bhag jayiye yhan se... saying taxi driver ran from the taxi...

Shlok looked towards Astha, he held her hand and pulled her immediately from taxi running in the streets near by... While some goons were burning their car and some were following them...

Some of them were shouting... Don't leave anyone, only then govt will wake up... Kill everybody who comes on our way...Shlok and Astha had entered into a dark street which was going nowhere. They knocked almost every house there but no one opened the door...soon they reached in an abandoned building nearby. Astha was crying badly...hum ab kabhi ghar nahi jaa payenge...

Stop astha. Shlok cupped her face in his hands... Everything will be fine. We will go back home...

Nahi... nahi... hum nahi jaa payenge... she nodded in no...holding his hands on her face...

bhrosa karo mujhpe Astha, we will definitely go back... I promise, we will... Shlok moved closer taking her into hug...

WO rhe do log... maro unhe... they listened some voices from behind. They turned in shock and found some goons there... Astha bhago... saying Shlok again pulled her closer and both started running but soon they were covered by goons... Those started beating shlok while two of them were holding astha tightly...Shlok was struggling badly to fight with them but they were tens while he was alone...

Chodo unhe... Astha was crying as well as shouting... Shlok...

Astha was pleading them. Please leave him... but no one was listening to them... only good thing was they didn't have any sharp weapon, they had just rods...

Shlok. Astha was shouting again and again...shlok was bleeding badly. Astha somehow managed to get free from goons and ran towards shlok... she laid upon shlok covering him completely...

astha run away. Shlok shouted...he turned back again coming on her op and covering her...

no...I will not...I will not leave you...

Astha please go... they are busy with me. You go and save yourself... Shlok tried to push her away...

No... Astha placed her hand on his face crying badly. No shlok.. I will not... I will be with you only... shlok held her hand...he was losing his senses..., only when goons ran away listening police siren...

Astha, please leave...shlok caressed her face... I will manage somehow... but first you reach at safe place...

No, I will not go anywhere without you Shlok... astha tapped his face, shlok... main apko kuch nahi hone dungi...jahan bhi jayenge, sath hi jaynge... nahi to main bhi yahin hun... she was hugging him tightly...shlok too hugged her back... in the meanwhile he had been completely unconscious...

Shlok...she took her head into her lap... She tried again and again. But he was completely lost... Astha too had a lot injuries and her face, arms were bleeding. She somehow gathered strength and ran outside for help, but could not get anyone...she was knocking every door, but no one was coming out for help...

Bappa please meri maddad kijiye... please help me to get back my shlok... She was speaking continuously. When she read a name on a small house's door... Hakeem wasim Khan...

She knocked the door...please help me Hakeem sahib... She was shouting, when an old man opened the door a bit, looked outside and seeing Astha in miserable condition, she opened the door completely. Kahiye beti . kya huya...

Astha folded her hands...Please... Hakim sahib, mere pati ko bacha lijiye...she spoke crying badly...

Pati? she herself didn't know what she was saying, she was speaking only what her heart was saying...

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

Awesome update,dear.

She is calling him pati😉.

Ahaaan...

Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani

pati? interesting 😆

Originally posted by: dmgomg

I hope the updates keep coming fast :p please let me know each time you update

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

Pati...😲

What is she saying...

Dill ki baat zuban pe aa hi gayi...

I think she realise now she is in love with him...

Thanks dear for updating such a lovely update. ...