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@guggu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

I am done with exams and will update as soon as possible. 😃

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@guggu

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

cute ...:)

happy seeing the update after a long time

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anupama

@ak_maggi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

In the beginning of he update itself u nailed it guggu!

just imagining he putting her to sleep... the peace she must ve felt after all tht torture she gave herself... n d way she wanted to watch him quietly.. registering d proximity... n how it feels to to wake up with him...Awww! ❤️i think i was almost pink by then... he he he😛😳😳

I am really enjoying the comfort n peace bn them.. she is finally letting him into her space... d way he holds her cheek...caresses her.. n when she hugged him pushin al her insecurities out n just living the moment... i almost clapped out of relief when she said "Never been better"...😆 n clapped wid surprise when she snapped abt Sneha comin back...lol😃

But best part was when she blurted out "I find you attractive anyway! 😉

Arnav is really being a darling... keepin it light.. not pushinh his way too much.. just letting her be... Well thts wat women want most of d times... Oly if al men understood us like him...😛

The most interesting part of this update are d parallel comparisons u r effortlessly drawin thru d paper boats.. wid d way she is looking towards her own life... her hesitance.. restlessness...n finally her letting go...!! I am proud to see The writer in making...⭐️😃

By d way I am sure when u were writing this update u were craving for Dosa n Vada!!!😆

Ur cheapo sis😃

Edited by ak_maggi - 11 years ago

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mehak

@mehak06

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

I love how arnav is babysitting khushi.. its cute indeed...
khushi finding solace in his arms
her getting panic not finding arnav for a fee minutes

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reshmimohan

@reshmimohan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#146

Loved it.

Thanks for the pm.😊

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#147

oh my baby sitting are we
well she did need it but not this much
but guess she did need it
him being there for her
aww she wanted him to stay but didnt know how to say it
he wanted to stay but till she said something he couldnt
bless that was so cute
ahhh so sneha is coming back
but she didnt want that
as arnie would be gone
man she isnt in best of moods is she
well hope she will be better soon
wow she actually said she finds him attractive but brushed it off too

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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

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Posted: 11 years ago

#148

Haan haan, you reserved one of the better chapters for yourself!! Very clever!! 😆

The first half...you're probably tired of hearing this...was beautiful! It was!! It showed how much you are capable of! Good job! :D

Sorry but I didn't understand Khushi's bratty behaviour towards the end. Is it because she likes to be more independent? Or she's just annoyed that Arnav wouldn't spending more time with her? Maybe it'll be clearer in the next chapter. I'm glad Sneha is going to be back; she'll be a big help to Khushi to pass this phase she's going through.

Good going; keep it up! 👏

Edited by avantika_2012 - 11 years ago