MaYur SS [Once In A Night ] LAST PART ON PG 49 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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My comment on page 6 😃
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Originally posted by: rimshazeb

Beautiful n very interesting concept api..thanku for starting mayur ss 🤗
Superb start..full story on one night..only on
mayur ..woww..
eagerly waiting for first part..
plzz continue soon

awww sweets🤗
Thank you for ur lovely comment ,i'm glad you liked that..i hope you'll like other parts too..keep reading and TC.
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i'll continue it soon:)
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Part 2

Slowly her gaze dropped down at his wet black boots, up to his buttoned jacket and then again settled on his handsome face, she frowned little to realize she hadn't seen that man before in the town, and a frown remarked at his brow too,when she scanned him, she noticed his jaw tensed, his lips were shivering with the cold and turned to purple, a stern look was the part of his handsome features and the tiny wrinkles of frustration at the corners of his eyes indicating he wasn't much pleased with his condition.

Reluctantly, she jutted up her chin and her eyes flared with bright sparks of suspicion, "whom you want to meet?"She quirk a brow at him and he breathed collecting his voice from his shivering body. The drops of rain plastered his hair to his head trickling to his face, he spilled them out and gasped parted his lips slightly.

"I----I---need a shelter---for night, I assure you ma'am I'm very-- much a gentle man, I can even pay a rent,I'm new to this town so don't know the name of any hotel ---or an inn where I can stay---for a night---the weather isn't in my favor "His voice was arresting, strong, deep, and warmly cordial; nothing more but slightly shivered and she knew they were obviously because of coldness, a strange wave of concern rushed her veins as she glanced again him closely he was soaked, drenched but she banished them as quickly as they had come. She drew an uneasy breath, the man had an intense feature with mysterious deep eyes, he was possibly in his early thirties or had just crossed the twenties, He was quite young and handsome, though, he was looking troubled with his situation but she couldn't have trusted the stranger when she was alone. If her mother would have been there they would surely help him.

"Our home isn't an inn "find some other place or seek shelter somewhere else"

Her words sounded so rude that she felt herself stunned for behaving like a stern woman; she didn't know it was the effect of his appearance at the wrong day at the wrong time or her own strange sudden attraction towards him.

He seemed to digest her rudeness with the certain amount of disappointment but what could he had expected from the young girl who appeared uneasy to see the stranger standing at her doorsteps.

"Sorry ma'am for--disturbing you" He had spoken the words so weakly that they barely reached to her ears, She wondered at the abrupt disappointment in his face or the flatness of his tone. She swallowed, aware of the tightness in her throat as she had seen the disappointment touched his cheeks and something stirred in her heart she didn't know what, it may be a sympathy or concern for him seeing wet and shivered in the rain.

He wrapped his jacket tighter and sniffing in the rain whirled around to take a step towards the other side of the street, and it took Nupur a whole moment to think what a soft hearted person would've done in this situation, she couldn't have left him in the rain to get cold , the thought of him getting cold didn't go well with her heart.

A slap of storm,roused her and she tilted to look at him, "Hey, mister.. listens"

As Mayank took a step towards the narrow line going towards the main road a feminine voice seemed to call him and he whirled on his heels only to find the same girl waving her hand at him, signaling him to come back. A stunned expression covered his stiffened face why was she calling him back when she so rudely behaved with him a few moments ago.

"Please"listen"

Another gush of wind pushed him hard, lightning crackled, and he struggled to keep his balance and then gave a look back to her who was still waving at him to call him back, he knew he couldn't have stood there another moment; he would surely get chills or would die with cold, A thoughtful moment passed as he decided whether to turn back or not and his consciousness insisted him to turn back as it was best for him.

She saw him coming back towards their house and let out the breath of relief.

"Yes, ma'am. Why did you call me back?"His words choked as he spilled out some of rainy drops had entered in his mouth when he parted his lips to speak, she could've seen his jaw was clenched hard, and the skin stretched across it had turned white not because of anger but with cold. A frisson of regret rushed through her veins and she swallowed the lump.

"Please come inside the house, you're shivering badly" she stepped aside offering him a way to enter into the house Mayank looked speechless at her act. He hesitated a moment before taking a step inside the house, she closed the door behind her signaling him to come along with her.

"Please sit here, I switched on the heater"

She pointed towards the comfortable sofa and went to switch on the heater, once the heat seemed to fill in the room; he had let out the breath of gratitude. She dragged on a chair close to the heater and offered him to sit there so heat could reach in his chilly bones and he could get himself warmed a bit though,under those wet clothes it was impossible.

Once he settled in the chair, he raised his hand and gasped when the heat touched his almost frozen skin.

"Your clothes are soaked. Let me arrange something for you to wear"

She looked concerned and a momentary hesitant touched his features before he accepted the offer, "it would be indeed a great favor" he spoke hesitantly while his eyes sparkled with the hint of gratitude in them and she smiled slightly before walking towards her mother's room to find his father's clothes. She didn't know what took her to offer a stranger to share her house with her when she was alone and vulnerable, certainly, not in a situation to defend her virtues if he turned out a bad man and tried to take advantage of her.

Edited by Maria. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that's very very nice part...
i loved it
Edited by shafy_MN - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update.
Concept is really different.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow!!!!!!!
that was pretty Awesome part...
loved it to d coreee
loved the hestation of Nupur as i wud hv did the same n i mean not letting him in part lolzzz
n bechara Mayank
finally she let him in kinti sweet hain na woh
loved the updates as i read both of them in one go
n u know i makes me feel like m reading a classic novel really beautifully written
do update soon plzzz
loved it lodsss
love u lodsss SIS...🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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intresting the way it is going
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
that was fantastic part
very well written
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
plz do continue Conquered hearts

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