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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Barun_Gf

Gd nyt chetna lala nishu 😃😃 and meenu 😡😡


arey.. no angryjjj

me just kidding behena..

Happy wala Nightjj Nandakisore😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Fabulous updates & thanks for the PMs 😊


Chapter 27

Part 1

These days Khushi's pull towards Arnav growing more & more & she advancing towards him even though he kept retreating back & she caressing his cheek even after dusting off the lint from his stubble & she deeply lost in his lips ☺️ to be broken by Arnav's teases, ☺️ she denying & he easing the situation but she hesitantly & innocently opening up to him that she was feeling restless lately & he not being able to figure out that he was reason for her disturbed state, that is, she was getting attracted to him was awesomely penned down 👏


Khushi peeking glances of her hubby in the limo☺️ & she shying away at her new warm thoughts while Arnav affected by her neck & trying to prevent his thoughts ☺️ & controlling them but in vain, so he switching over to the opposite seat, Khushi blushing at the thought of his kisses & she breaking the ice whether he did love anyone followed by his set of smart answers & then her confused queries of still keeping in touch with that married girl & her jealousy overtaking her & she worried that he loves someone else was enjoyable to read 😃


"Hain, ek ladki from college. Bilkul Pagal thi aur abhi bhi hain ... But sadly, she got married now" 😃

Yeah she is married. But we still keep in touch and very well in relation.

Its working just fine. We both have no issues and no strings attached.

Hey deeps, loved Arnav for teasing her & trying to figure out her reactions ... hmmm ... looks like his feisty tigress has turned all jealous. A while ago she was red due to the constant blushing & now she's all red with anger & jealousy


Loved Arnav's protective hold over his love, Khushi & she in turn acknowledging it & seeking comfort & relief to get over her nervesnous. Usually Shashi deals his professional & personal life in a balanced manner, so was kind of wondering why he didn't turn up at the event. Is it b'coz Khushi has officially taken up his post or b'coz he wanted to give the couple space or he wanted Arnav to personally invite him to the event after the wedding nights incident or...??? 😲 😲 😲


Yippee!!! Khushi noticed the wallpaper ... wonder what explanation he'll give on being asked 😃


Part 2

Arnav's speech was over whelming 👏 ... the manner in which he thanked his two lovely buddies to concealing his buddy cum love's name but still stating that he feels unfortunate for having lost her; Payal revealing to Khushi that Arnav was referring to Khushi & she joining the dots; then Arnav pouring out his gratitude to Shashi in his absence for being there with him & for shaping, moldings & sculpting him into a fine business man cum leader & he finally revealing to the world that Khushi, his wife was one of the major reasons for his huge success was a marvelous scene portraying Arnav's heartfelt speech, Khushi's reactions to it & Payash's happiness on seeing Arnav reach great heights


Khushi's speech drawing a smirk on his face & he elated, proud & over whelmed with her & then he figuring out that something is troubling his love; Arnav surprised to hear from Khushi that she had been noticing his moves, followed by Payal's teasing & Arnav pulling her leg was lovely


The manner in which Arnav lovingly asked Khushi for a dance & he telling her that though he wasn't good at it he's sure that she'd make him feel like a rock star; Khushi confused at the choice of song, Arnav passionately moving to the beats & lip singing the words that portrayed his feelings & his love for her; & she reminiscing how & why she feel in love with this man gradually for every little gesture, touch, care, concern... that he showed towards her was astoundingly structured 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Payash rushing towards Arnav for having found their long lost Arnie, the happy go lucky guy while a myriad of emotions surging within Khushi, that is happiness on one hand for having realized her love for him but sadness & pain on the other at the thought of Arnav liking someone else was so emotional & lovely to read

Chapter 28

Part 1

Arnav signaling Akash to handle his overjoyed friend, Payal so that he wouldn't hurt her feelings though his soul was screaming to go & look for Khushi who abruptly ran away from him after the dance threw light on how he respected his friends


Arnav realizing that he could have just asked Payal to check on Khushi rather than huff & puff in confusion, Payal feeling Arnav overreacting when he asked her to pass on the phone to Khushi as soon as she met her showed how the heart struggles to beat & how the mind fails to recognize the solution at hand when you are filled with worry about your loved ones


Khushi's thoughts of how she felt pain engulfing her after he told her about loving someone else when all her heart did was to fall for him & be occupied with his words & actions of love & care which she couldn't gather herself to forgo followed by her analysis & decision to find out who was the woman he loved was well written


Payal trying hard to figure out exactly who Khushi was referring to while bluntly saying he' & she' was nice. It was thoughtful of Payal to take time to speak to Khushi & make certain facts about Arnav's love clear to her before letting Arnav & Khushi meet each other


Arnav on the other hand boiling in anger when Payal just came up with excuses to hand over the phone to Khushi leaving him frustrated to the core, Arnav later warning Khushi to come before him so that she does not leave him any chance of barging into the ladies room depicted the extent to which he was restless without getting a clue of whether Khushi was fine or not


Part 2

Khushi unable to contain the joy of being the love of Arnav as well as feeling the weight of the pain, he had undergone all these years & especially the impact NK's entry would have had on him, to be unbearable; her words intently meaning that she was sorry for making him wait for so long & reminiscing all the incidents from the past of how Arnav flirted with her, did things for her, how he found solace in her arms after losing his family, how he let anger & pain take over him when ever she mentioned NK, how he saved her upto his actions of extra care until today was awesomely written 👏


Arnav taken back at Khushi embracing him suddenly & gripping him tightly after all those incidents of running away a few minutes ago to appear in front of him with puffed up reddened eyes & the way she spoke to him which pushed him into a more confused state was enjoyable


Khushi's heart rejoicing when Arnav said we' was a lovely scene 😃


Khushi planning to make Arnav open up his hurt heart to her, share the excruciating pain suffocating him & believe that she was always there for him as well undergo the tension of confessing his love to her & experience the event of waiting for her reply restlessly like a nerve-wreck was amazing


Payal is really a caring friend ... she wanted to give Arnav & Khushi the needed time to patch up


Arnav astonished to find the all blushing Khushi holding his arm so freely & kissing his cheek suddenly & moreover asking him to hold onto her without minding any pain & he trying to understand the cyclonic change in Khushi was well narrated 👍🏼


Arnav turning all red when Khushi caught him who was about to kiss her in a trance was awesome ☺️


Love to see what happens next


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Posted: 11 years ago
tjis is goin to be eart warming and fun journey.. very much lookin frwd to it..
Khushi's initial anguish inspite of realisin her love for Arnav cud not be his cuz of his love fr smone else... her wxhilaration after Payal's admission of her n Akash's observations , Khushi's flashbacks of Arnavz feelings from the Uni days , Arnavz concern for her at the party n finally the jubilation of understanding that it was her thruout whom Arnav loves , loved n will only love!!!! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago

deeps missing u dear...love...so finally weekend is over :)


Edited by lalarukh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


Edited by divyashree449 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Mauka bhi hai, dastoor bhi...

Gv us an update soonwa Di... 😃


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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update. loved the way u have written it.

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Posted: 11 years ago
pls update..
cannot wait fr the update..
pls jaldi jaldi update..
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Posted: 11 years ago
plz give us an update soon today
we r waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
diii update please 😃😳

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