Virman ff:when new life start as stangers part9 on page24(21 decmeber)

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parthnitiholics

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: hangok
loks nice but please write only in english i cant understand hindi😔

i will try

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LoverBollywood

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Nice yaar..

Pleaseee continue soon..

And thanks that you are write in hindi.

Thanks for the PM... Update soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: chandiniebinda
Nice yaar..
Pleaseee continue soon..

And thanks that you are write in hindi.

Thanks for the PM... Update soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

nice start.
awesome name for ff.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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nice prologue please do continue soon and pm me😊😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

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guyzz i cant update as my xamz are cuming hope u understnd n wish me for my xamz

i will update from end of october or as soon as my xamz get over..:)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Allright...i can understand all the very best fr ur exams...n comeback soon

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5roseparvin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Its seems really interesting... but, please give english translation... because, I can't understand hindi... so, please... and also pleaseee add me in ur pm list... pleaseee pm me WHENEVER u update ur stories... bye friend...

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Amazing Concept!!!!!!!!!!!!
Interesting!!!!!!!Loved it
Thanx 4 pm
All the best 4 ur exams😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

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virat turn and saw jeevika his bhabhi ..mehak is her daughtr...jeevika is wife of viren vadhera who is famous lawyer...there i hi dadaji..the khados sb,filmy kc and her husbnd ic and their son shlok..

virat turn and saw jeevika looking angrily towards mehak...mehak hide beside virat's leg n peeping her mom secretly ...

v-are bhabhi kaise hoo(hey bhabhi how are u )

jeevika's graze move towards virat from angel -virat tum agye...mi thk hoo tum kaise hooo..(virat atlast u r here...m f9 how are u)

virat ans jeevika share a hugg...

v-mi thk ho baby..ye itne sare log..sb thk h na...

j-virat jldi chlo...kuch imp. btana h

v-ji..

but mehak hold his legs with her n nodded from her little finger nooo even shoking her cute face..not to go...but j saw her

j-mehak(giving her angry look)

mehak free her hold..when suddenly a girl came rushing in vadhera mansion...n was about to fall as she didnt notice laggage on door step

????aaa ...aaa

virat turn n rush towards her n hold her from falling..girl was holdign virat;s shirt in her fist titghtly her eyes was closed tightly...n she made her ready to get heart ..virat lost in her innocnce n smile occur on his face when girl open her eyes saw herslef in a strong young guys hands

?? ahm ahm

virat come in his senses make her stand

?-kya ghr h logo ko girane ka pura intejam kia hua h

girl gave angry look to virat but he smile she saw jeevika there with cinfused face

??-ap ap isi ghr ki hai kya

j-ji..

??-mi manvi...mr n mrs chaudhry ki beti...kaha p vo log..(worried voice)

j-ohh to tum manvi hoo..jldi chlo..virat tum b ao..maa or mr n mrs. c haudhry k accident ho gya h

virat was damn shoked

manvi was called from usa on urgent basses directly to vadhera mansion as vanshika n mr n mrs chaudhrys has gone some where n got accident..

virat about to when mehak again hold her hand...

a-chachu mt jaooo

j-angel

m-(become cute angry baby)-koi meli bat chhunu fil bad mi mat bolne angel the gleat ne btaya nahi tta(dont listen to me ...then dont tell me aftrwards angel the gr8 didnt tell anything)

mehak tap her feet cutely n went from there

j-virat manvi pls jaldi chlo

j took virman to the room where manvi's parents and va was lying on bed...with bandages

precap-

m-mi shadi k liy taiar ho

v-mi b

Edited by sakshivirmanian - 11 years ago