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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: chavvi16

only started yet
but have three hours to finish it in
takes me loner to read and type man

It is ok! Chalta hai! Take your time! You put that res that is enough for me!😃

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#272

and finally done with DFL
wow that was one hell of a chapter
though have to say i might have over done it
kuch zyada hi bada ho gaya
well you shall know soon enough dear oopsies

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#273

Originally posted by: chavvi16
and finally done with DFL
wow that was one hell of a chapter
though have to say i might have over done it
kuch zyada hi bada ho gaya
well you shall know soon enough dear oopsies

Chalega! Chalega!

Kitna bhi bada likho!

Got up in the morning and read the review and let me tell you - Itni khush hoon ki I can write two three chapters of DFL non stop (Of course I Cannot do that as it will damage my hand again) But that is how much you made me happy!😃 Ab poora din I will be grinning like a lunatic and no sadness can touch me today! Yippeee!😆

Don't get alarmed! This is what happens every time you review DFL coz your reviews are so long😉

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 11 years ago

#274

Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer

Thank you for that! Really felt glad after seeing your like!

😃 apna panic button band rakho...aise koi panic hota hai kya😊

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#275

Originally posted by: honeygrape

😃 apna panic button band rakho...aise koi panic hota hai kya😊

Kya karoon! I have a bad habit of over reacting!

Total Drama Queen you see!😆

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#276

Oh teri! I just realised that I forgot to write my point of view about Chapter 2 of Lutt Jaawaa after posting the chapter! So in the next few posts, I will give you my idea of LJ Chapter 2, LJ Chapter 3 and DFL Chapter 64 (B)! Get ready to be bored by me in the next few posts!

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#277

Heya people,

I am back to my ramblings!

So first I will ramble a bit about Lutt Jaawaa Chapter 2! When I planned this chapter, I was inspired by the scene from Geet where Geet asks Maan to save her from the goons in the fair and he refuses! But when she falls into the lake, he saves her! That attitude about Maan - not wanting to care about people and yet somehow can't stop himself - is what I tried to capture in that scene! Hope I succeeded!😳

Then there was Geet turning into Maa Kaali, that is my fav. part. Coz most of the time ladies are shown as weak in tv shows and we ladies even believe it sometimes. This was my way of showing my readers that girl power rocks!😃👏

And finally about the fight scene I wrote, honestly I did not think it would come this well. You see I can imagine a fight very well but describing it is a bit tough coz I don't remember exact terminology at the time I write. But still it came out good.

Now lets talk about the chapter overall. It was fun writing and I think this was one of my best works!

That's it for LJ Chapter 2! Chapter 3 ramblings will be up next!

Kalpana

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#278

Hello you sweet folks,

I am back to bore you but this time with my thoguhts about Lutt Jaawaa Chapter 3! Chapter 3was tough to write! Every time I checked it during editing, each time I found something missing and sat to write it. When I first wrote the chapter, it was barely 1200 words but by the time I finished editing it neared 2000 words! I must have edited it more than five times!

About Maaneet's first meet, I was a bit nervous while writing it! I had planned not to write Maan's point of view as it would have revealed everything about the story but yet I had to make sure my readers would be able to understand the basic motivation behind Maan's actions! It was tough but in the end I can say it came out alright!

Then there was Geet shouting on Maan, honestly this was the easiest part. After seeing Geet shout in the show about the injustice heaped upon her and then writing about her telling her story in DFL, this was simply a piece of cake! But loved writing it! While writing few lines I myself felt a bit emotional!

The best part for me was Maan handing over wallet and mobile as that was a stroke of genius! I did not plan it before hand but while writing the scene where Maan asks Geet to sit back in the jeep I stopped and thought, "If I were in her place, will I go and sit in the jeep? Especially when the jeep was driven by the guy whose family killed my family?" So I wondered, why would Geet trust him and sit in? I had to give her a good reason to trust Maan. That is when it struck me! To send her to Dev, Maan would have had to call him through mobile. So thinking that, Maan hands over his mobile and then he hands over his wallet simply to give her more reason to trust him. But I have to say, sometimes my ideas are really good. (Comparing it to my other works)

Overall, this chapter was stressful while writing as it had so many revisions done to it. The original draft and the edited version have vast differences between them. But it was a fun process!

Next up is DFL Chapter 64 (B),

Kalpana

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#279

Hello folks,

I am back with my thoughts on DFL Chapter 64 (B). This was one of the toughest chapters to write from DFL! Coz this was supposed to have Khushi explaining everything but yet it could not be so long that readers get bored. Another tough thing was that I had to explain everything from Khushi's point of view. While you guys have read the story from readers' point of view, I wrote it with writer's point of view; where I knew what will happen in the future and yet had to restrict myself from revealing everything at that point. But writing from Khushi's point of view was seriously tough coz there are certain things which you and I know which Khushi does not know. So I had to make sure Khushi does not talk about something she was not supposed to know. Plus, I had to go and read the older chapters again to make sure that the story which Khushi narrates are in the same sequence as the story I wrote😆! This was truly tough. But it came out good.

Then there was Kyun song! Honestly, I did not think you would like me jumping from scene to scene like a monkey on a tree just for few lines of the song. It would confuse you, I thought! But luckily, there hasn't been any bad comment about it, yet! Infact, one of you even thought the song was apt for the situation. But frankly speaking, I did not care what my readers thought coz I loved this song. And when I have put in so many sad songs, ignoring this song would have been unfair of me! Toh likh daala!😃

Aur rahi baat 'Kyun Dard Hai Itna' ki, now don't tell me that situation did not demand that song. The situation practically begged me for that song!😆 And just like Mann Jaage reminds me of Male Version of this song (talking about Chapter 55 (E) of DFL) Kyun (Duets) reminds me always of this female version. So isko bhi insert kar diya!😆

Overall, this chapter was a bit of bore to write and also a bit stressful but it is done and over! Thank God for that! Now onwards to the most awesome chapter, coz this will have Arnav Geet nok-jhok and their decisions which will turn this story on its head and bring the love stories back on track!

So be patient and wait for the night when I will post a teaser!😉😃😆

Take care and enjoy the day,

Kalpana

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#280

i agree with all three comments
it was nice to see geet as maa kali
no more damsel in distress
maan and his habits of wanting to save other even if he shows himself not to be so caring
and then geet getting in the jeep only because he gave her his mob and wallet
cause you are right no one of us would get in with a man whose family has killed your family
geet isnt that forgiving and she shouldnt be
and khushi pov perfect
and the songs with rabba ve fit in well

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