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Anarocksick thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sandy, Sandy, Sandy... I LOVE THE DETAILING!!! Seriously, I love when things are written with details. Not too much. But just the right amount. Makes the things so much more enjoyable and understandable.
Besides, I have no issue whatsoever reading each and every action/movement of Arnav... be it breathing/blinking/staring/trying very hard not to stare/smiling/Hi-ing/talking/driving/frowning and la la la... you get my point, right? 😉

And your Khushi is so adorable! I just love reading her thoughts! And damn, the girl looked smokin' in her anarkali suit. Thought she was just cute. But she totally brought the sexy back, yeah!

Your Anjali is very cool and different! I don't think I've read about any Anjali like her. I mean, an Anjali who doesn't want to get married? 😲 It's like...world order change ho gaya, boss!
But you know what, it's so understandable, why she is like this. Being the elder sibling, of course, the impact of the whole disturbed family situation, fell on her the most. And I love the sort of understanding she and Arnav share in this regard.
But Bechara Shyam. He seems like a nice enough guy. I can't begin to imagine just how much wooing he'd have to do to get Anjali to marry him.

Ye Lavanya Kashyap kahan se aagai? :-| Wannabe girlfriend? But Arnav seems to have only eyes for Khushi... so it's okay. I doubt she'd be a threat. Chance hi nahi hai.

You know, while Lavanya was leading him towards their friends, I almost expected Khushi to mentally say,

'Look back, Look back.'

And then,

*wind blows,

*Rabba ve track on*,

and... he turns.

And looks at her.

*Intense eye-lock*


Okay. I'm dramatic. I know. #KThanksBye 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome part
congratulation for new thread😊
Aanchal15 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful wordplay, and, absolutely loved the intricacies..the milieu, the accoutrements, the inner monologues, Khushi-Shyam's very dexterous confab, and, then, those Arshi moments... Aman seems to be an impressive character, and, reading about Shyam's perception of Anjali,was so ethereal, and, captivating..Those little sparks of envy that Lavanya's presence and proximity managed to emanate, was worth reading...await next, as always..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anarocksick

Sandy, Sandy, Sandy... I LOVE THE DETAILING!!! Seriously, I love when things are written with details. Not too much. But just the right amount. Makes the things so much more enjoyable and understandable.

Besides, I have no issue whatsoever reading each and every action/movement of Arnav... be it breathing/blinking/staring/trying very hard not to stare/smiling/Hi-ing/talking/driving/frowning and la la la... you get my point, right? 😉

And your Khushi is so adorable! I just love reading her thoughts! And damn, the girl looked smokin' in her anarkali suit. Thought she was just cute. But she totally brought the sexy back, yeah!

Your Anjali is very cool and different! I don't think I've read about any Anjali like her. I mean, an Anjali who doesn't want to get married? 😲 It's like...world order change ho gaya, boss!
But you know what, it's so understandable, why she is like this. Being the elder sibling, of course, the impact of the whole disturbed family situation, fell on her the most. And I love the sort of understanding she and Arnav share in this regard.
But Bechara Shyam. He seems like a nice enough guy. I can't begin to imagine just how much wooing he'd have to do to get Anjali to marry him.

Ye Lavanya Kashyap kahan se aagai? :-| Wannabe girlfriend? But Arnav seems to have only eyes for Khushi... so it's okay. I doubt she'd be a threat. Chance hi nahi hai.

You know, while Lavanya was leading him towards their friends, I almost expected Khushi to mentally say,

'Look back, Look back.'

And then,

*wind blows,

*Rabba ve track on*,

and... he turns.

And looks at her.

*Intense eye-lock*


Okay. I'm dramatic. I know. #KThanksBye 😆


I'm saving your comment in my wriitng folder...coz I have all the verbs that Arnav can do 😆

Ana, I loved your dramatic scene very much...banging my head that I didn't think of it :)

Thank you😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Really enjoyed the arty scene and of course it reminded me of one of my favorite moments in the show. Anjalie Raizada for some reason impresses me a lot. Here she is a presence to be reckoned with and her and Arnav's bonding appears very strong and it has been stressed that they 'look out for each other'. I feel that there is a lot of significance to that bonding.
The awareness Arnav and Khushi have...will that come to a head or just stay at this simmering stage and then she will leave?

Love the new entries.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update.. Awesome description of the party venue ..the lighting.. Music and THE PEOPLE.
Loved the way you described Anya and Anjali.. How Arnav see Khushi and his thoughts about her and her beauty and vice versa..
Here you introduced Aman. From the way you described I think that he has some special relation with Anya and it will grow as time passes. ...

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Posted: 11 years ago
im simply loving ur shyam bhaiya and thank u sandhya for not making something with evilness on his mind 24/7 in this one (well up to now). he seems a genuine human being who loves anjali raizada like crazy and only wishing to see an happy ever after with her. i liked the super intelligent conversation they were having and i kind of think that his personal views on war are indirectly reflecting ur own and i like ur way of thinking and i will refrain from commenting on this very sensitive topic

coming back to the very raizada like party, sophisticated and classy:))) it was nice to read how khushi was seeing everyone was dressed and how she was making a mental list of the questions. she is such a unique girl! n truly it wont surprise me if ana and aman get together one day because even in their bantering there must be some hidden affection for each other!

lavanya?? ye kahan se taapki!!! n i dont like her hanging on arnav's arm like that! i feel bad for khushi, it must not have seeing them together but i know our khushi is a very mature and strong girl and she will be handling everything perfectly!!!!

huh?? did arnav just admitted to himself that he is attracted to her!!!! if so then y he is letting himself to be taken from her!!!! sometimes guys can be so dumb

and sandhya were the neighbours also invited to this party????
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Posted: 11 years ago
Entry of two new characters Aman and Lavanya 😊

I loved how your are describing the party through Khushi's eyes..!! Her thoughts about Ana's dress, hair and ultimately Aman, hmm something's really up between Ana & Aman, I feel it 😉

Adonis - a perfect descrption for Arnav 😉 He is still miffed, me feeling bad for Khushi

The scene - when Arnav & Khushi are walking towards each other in a trance and Lavanya comes hugs him, kisses him on the cheek and Khushi looks at Arnav to see him looking back at her reminded me of the episode on Nov 28th (I think) where Arnav yells at Lavanya for wearing a Khushi like dress, then comes to her room to say sorry, when she hugs and tells him that she loves him, he looks at Khushi - that look..!! I happened to watch it the previous day and was mad at him all over again for being his worst towards Khushi I'm not mad at your Arnav yet, in fact I feel for him right now 😉. It's apparent he is drawn towards Khushi but Lavanya comes and snatches him away, two times 😡 clearly La is drawn towards our handsome hunk, who wouldn't be?? 😉

Anjali Singh Raizada, haven't seen her before as exquisite as you have sketched her. Sensuality is oozing from her and she is against marriage, that's a first too.. poor Shyam 😉. Glad Khushi called him bhaiyya already, so there is no didi ke sout 😛 And S & K's conversation interesting.

I see the tension building up Sandhya, so is there a chance of Khushi going to poolside for fresh air next and then, you know it 😉

Cheers
K
(ps: sorry for the late comment)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anamika100

Really enjoyed the arty scene and of course it reminded me of one of my favorite moments in the show. Anjalie Raizada for some reason impresses me a lot. Here she is a presence to be reckoned with and her and Arnav's bonding appears very strong and it has been stressed that they 'look out for each other'. I feel that there is a lot of significance to that bonding.

The awareness Arnav and Khushi have...will that come to a head or just stay at this simmering stage and then she will leave?

Love the new entries.


Thanks A :) Always look forward to your comment.
Edited by AquaSandhya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful update, loved shyam and khushi rapport lavanya's entry not entirely though for obvious reasons, loved arshi too wonder what is the deal between Ana n Aman!!

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