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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AquaSandhya



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Uh!...why is 'everyone else' getting involved??!! :-o. They've been pretty oblivious up till now...why start clueing them in now?!!!

Are you stalling on us now?!! :-p

A simple, hot, scorching kiss between these two thoroughly teased and tantalised individuals will help ease everyone's tension!!! And by 'everyone' I mean the hundreds of thoroughly teased and tantalised readers!!! ;-)

And since when has a kiss between Arnav and Khushi ever dampened the excitement?!! All it takes is a 'missed kiss' to get real and fictional characters in a tizzy!!! :-)

Edited by neverbefore - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow what an update..I need to gather my thoughts first and then say something as on the surface it was a simple chapter with a surprise party going on with almost all the characters gathered there but if one looks deeper a lot more happened.

New entry of Lavanya wii make Khushi to think more deeper about her feelings towards Arnav which has barely made their appearance yet..we don't know how close Arnav and Lavanya are and what is their relation.. to me it felt that she is more than interested in Arnav and while talking to Khushi she did't pay no attention to her as she wanted Arnav at a certain place with certain people that too while he was in the middle if a conversation with Khushi but he allowed La to drag him away.

Khushi does't like this feeling of helplessness and possessiveness where Arnav is concerned in relation to La..she is probably telling herself off saying why are you feeling like this Arnav is not your personal property..oh dear that is confusing for a seventeen year old..intelligent or not to find a brother of your best friend the most good looking person ever and feel the attraction towards him..also to feel pain in her heart to see another girl casually kiss him.

Arnav on the other hand is 'enchanted' and mesmerised by Khushi and he says to himself that ' I Want Her'... well can he just have her? I don't know as Khushi is on the same page as well but there is a lot more complication in between, so I think only the time will tell.

There is something more simmering under the surface between Anya and Aman? Wow!! Would love to know more about these two. I bet will be very interesting.

Shyam has also made an entry in person and can't take his eyes off Anjali, wants to marry her and wants kids with her, what does she do give him cold shoulder..that is what guys do normally, enough of me generalising as our Anjali here is very different. Loved the conversation between Shyam and Khushi..you made them brother and sister in this story..awesome.

All that was simmering under the surface..will erupt at one time or the other and I will patiently wait for that to happen and also will wait to see which couple is first in the cue.

Lovely chapter. Wonderfully written.
Pls continue soon.
Thanks for the PM.

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Posted: 12 years ago
loved d details of every thing from hall decoration to individual dressing details..😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh god...why?? Y did u send lavanya then??? I hope she is omly a good friend of his
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow tht was a wonderful update... the convo btw shyam n khushi was nice... really enjoyed reading it.. khushi is so mature for her age :)
oh the pull btw arnav n khushi is sooo strong... n now when she is going to go out from fresh air... god save her from arnav ;)
pls pls update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update...

i liked the way u described each and every person, at party,anya ,akash anjali and our hero arnav and heroine kushi...i can clearly visualize...liked the way kushi and arnav oogling each other...😛😛😛😛😛😛...and the way u described their strong pull towards each other...😃😃😃

so Shyam Character introduced,shyam also knows that kushi is anya best friend,liked their conversation, so shyam is good person and he loves anjali a lot...liked the way he thinks i have to pacify and make up to her...hoping anjali will soon agree to marry shyam...she is something...

aman and lavanya two character introduced...so i guess anya likes aman, thats why she is irritated about aman on each and every thing... is .lavanya arnavs girlfriend ????so hamari kushi betiya is little bit jealous...kyun nahi hogi...😉😉😉😉😉...kha jealousy hoga vaha payar ka realization hotha hi...😃😃😃😃😃...

i am very curious about next chapter because kushi went out side,humko meliga jadhu he nasha hai😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉...

thank u for the lovely chapter and pm...
cheers...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Another lovely update. I so loved the way you have put up the entire party scenario including the minutest details. Opening of the chapter describing the ambiance of the party hall was penned beautifully, delighting the mind. The brief description of everyone's attire for the evening was thoughtful as it was not picturised only on arnav or khushi unlike few other stories. Good to see few new faces of the story, however for me personally Dr. Shyam took away the show. I loved the way you have penned the whole war scenario, making it as an interesting conversation between two character. Shyam's thoughts were clear & perceptive. The conversation between shyam & khushi was depicted as naturally as possible and I loved the rapport between them. The way they both concluded that the surprise party was no longer an actual surprise for anjali seemed as though shyam & khushi have known arnav & anjali for years. I hope lavanya's & aman's entry brings some interesting turns into the story. Looking forward for the next chapter.
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Posted: 12 years ago
This la's entry is scaring me.
But the party not finished. Waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sandy, I will be "enchanted" tomorrow. Always like to catch DND in peace!! And comments are making me impatient!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...
New entry..Lav...Is she dating Arnav..??
Poor Khushi...
Aftr that incidnt Arnav compltly ignored her...
Finally wen he came 2 talk 2 her...
That Lav came...:-@

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