Virman Collab FF: Games of the Heart ~ Updated Chapter 1

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kalpana

@jia123sagar

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Awesome prologue

Virat and maanvi as a cbi officers

Superb character sketch

Plz update soon

Thanks for the pm

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5roseparvin

@5roseparvin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Awesome concept... its really very interesting... please pm me friend whenever u update ur story... and thank u for pm and this new amazing story friend ...

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inlvwithehmmbh

@inlvwithehmmbh

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Hey zainab and Ayesha!
From the prologue itself I can see a very interesting and fun story coming up. And the writers just add to my confidence regarding that. It would be quite an interesting thing to see a hot headed and a young women working together. I hope to see the first chapter soon enough now that you've made me so impatient. Update it soon and don't forget to add me in the PM list girls :) thank you for pm-ing me regarding the story too!
xx

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JESMY

@JESNIA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

awesome concept.
nice cs.
thanks for pm.

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Interesting prologue
waiting for starting chappy
update soon

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GOOGLU

@GOOGLU

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Awsm n intrstng proluge n charctrsketch !!!!!! Luv ur wrk ... After such a wndrful intro cnt wait for 1 chapter !!!!! Update soon ... For karan role i sugs RONIT ROY !!!!!!!! Thanks for pm dear :::)))