Arshi FF- // Love and Us// Thread#2 (Removed) - Page 8

Today's update will be a bit later than the given time. I am pressed for time and hence am running late on schedule.

The update will be posted around 9:30 IST.

Hope you understand.

PS Can someone please tell me how to add a YouTube video with the update?

Paakhee

this is the forum code for the youtube video!😊

in the place of the file name you will have to add the link of the vidoe!

hope this helps!!

and we will be waiting!😊

come soon!

update, we are waiting for u!!!!

Sheetal- well its easy to categorise one as good and another as villaain.But the way sheetal turned out as a person 50 % her mother responsible and 50 % arnav responsible.

If arnav wud hv taken the relationship with sheetal seriously , sheetal wudnt hv turned so negative.

if anyone of us place ourslef in place of sheetal wud realise that how it feels wen your partner is snatched.So what even if it wasnt a serious relationship. Sheetal also entered this relationship only because he got vibes from arnav. Fine it was profit motive for both of them. If arnav wud hv been serious and shown her love , she wudnt hv been so bad. Sheetal became angry cause she felt she lost the charming arnav. she indeed had attraction ofr arnav deep within.

Khushi- all perfect. But why did she knowingly hug arnav outside the party.As per her knowledge At that time arnav was fully attached with sheetal. And wen she saw him kissing sheetal at party she, just after few pleadings melted. At that point she shud hv said that, if u were going to break ur relation with sheetal, how cud u kiss sheetal even if it was acting. ? few mins back u made a new relation and maintaing ur deal with sheetal became so important?
So Khushi didnt raise the issue properly. So wen arnav later accused her of cheating she shud hv told that how difficult it was for her to see arnav with sheetal that night.

Arnav- He and his crocodile tears. He didnt end up with sheetal gracefully. He cud hv sat with sheetal and told that- dont u want me to be happy? do u want me to sulk in your company?
He could apologise to sheetal.. Its said whether u take good wishes or not , NO problem.But never take curses. So arnav didnt handle his equation with sheetal properly. Because his past chapter didnt close properly, due to which his present with Khushi was hampered.

Meanwhile the FF is fantasticly written.Good luck ahead.
this triangle of arnav-Khushi- sheetal/Lavanya concept, then the the asr as casanova with the simple, beautiful Khushi , all these concepts can never be boring. The more and more we read, the more interest increases.

unres!!

I am in shock.

I am in awe.

I am thoroughly surprised.

You, I know are an amazing writer. I know you think that I only say this because I am your reader but that is not true. What I just read, it was pure magic.

Today I refuse to use even one emoticon, even one picture because all of it would only ruin what you have just given us.

From the first word to the last word I read, I had a huge smile plastered on my lips.

I dont know what to say.

Its like all those things that I have been telling you since the past 2 chapters, all those things that have hit my mind for even a minute, have been put down in words by you.

All the disappointment I felt towards Arnav has been so subtly penned down.

I dont know where to start from.

The very beginning.

The way you began, those words, they are still ringing in my ears.

Those were the words Khushi had always related to Arnav with...

Fear of loosing him.

Hope of getting him back.

Dreams of sharing her live with him.

Loving him, getting loved by him.

Making him happy, making him forget his past, making him make peace with his past.

And living a life with him.

Werent these the things she had wanted?

I loved how you showed her breaking from the inside yet remaining strong from the outside only so that no one would have to see her break again.

The memory...

Like I said before, what Khushi and Aakash share is only beautiful. The bond, the love, the comfort they feel around each other is heart warming.

I loved how Aakash had told her about Arnav's presence in her house yet not gone ahead to explain anything, because it was arnav's mistake and no one was allowed to repair the damage he had done.

I can see a very protective father who is not wanting his daughter to break again, to make a wrong decision again. And he is anything but wrong.

At the same time I also see a pair of eyes pleading to change his decision and another promising to fulfill whatever she wanted.

I loved how Khushi, though was breaking from the inside, stood like a wall of support for herself throughout their meet.

I am so glad she did not break down and run into his arms only because he was apologizing.

I want him to repent.

I want him to win her back, and he was going to do just that.

Now when it was almost time to take a decision and though she had forgiven him, she was still uncertain about him, she was still scared that she might have to go through this again... but all she could do was wait and watch.

She had seen him repenting, asking for forgivness, pleading, doing everything in his hand to get her back and that is what I loved. This is what I wanted him to do. He could not always have his way. He was not allowed to choose to not trust her one minute and then repent the next. Things did not happen according to him and this he needed to know.

Graduation Day...

The opening was ofcourse amazing.

I love how Payal had questioned Khushi about her decision and when she got an uncertain reply she had questioned her again. The questions asked were just right, just the ones Khushi needed to go through a reality check.

Now comes the most important part, according to me...

The song, to start with, was so perfect. reading the part with the song was just perfect, it created just the kind of environment we would want.

To start with it was very filmy, Arnav singing and Khushi getting lost in his eyes and voice, just the kind of thing any normal girl would want.

He really had created magic for the girl he loved. He finally proved what she was worth, she was priceless and only he knew that, only he was allowed to see that.

The run down the stairs, while reading it, I was only thinking "how long will she take more?" so i can only imagine how long it might be for her. the run from her past life to a new one, a one where only arnav and khushi belonged. it was her leap of faith, faith in her love, her life, her arnav.

The proposal was just amazing. Nothing of the filmy sort, no big words, no fake promises, only one assurance, to love her till his last breathe. It was that simple. He was going to love her till he breathed and the day he would stop loving her, that would be the last day of his life.

The kiss, the friendship, the tears, the betrayal, the fights...it all came down to one thing...