SwaRon OS: Breaking the circle of pain

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Superb OS gal the current track regarding swayam and sharon is sooo very depressing I just hope jaisa tune likha waisa hi show main ho I just hope swaron get back ASAP..😔.
I want such a confrontation scene between swayam and sharon where both of them can clear out each other's viewpoint..
Very well written do pm me for your other works..😃.

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Mehvash Naazneen

@dashinggirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

lovely OS 😊

amazingly written

awesome job 👍🏼

beautifully penned down

thanks for writing something good about the current suitation

title is so perfect for the OS

really loved it ❤️

keep up the great work and

do write more OS/FF/SS on swaron

want to read more on them ...

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Trisha paul

@trisha19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Awesome Os!!!👏

you described sharon's monologue so beautifully...

Kas show me vi aisa hi ho...without involvement of any third person..

I just loved this os...thanks for the pm..

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sanjana_D3

@sanjana_D3

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Beautiful

I really wish this happened in the show

Very very well written OS :)

Loved the flow of the story and concept

Thanks for the pm

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Varada

@damonTVDrocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

AMAZING is the word!!!😃I really wish this happens in the show!!😕

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Swathi

@swathi_swaron

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Beautifully written OS Mihi...

Khaash yeh sab sach mein hotha...

and mujhe yeh bhi pata hai ki khaash kabhi sach mein nahi badal thi...atleast for SwaRon 😭

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

fabulous and great os... loved it

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

loved it mihika---fabulously written.

and palki had better read this

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Heena

@kamlesh32

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

This was a beautiful os. I just wish this is how swaron patched up...without the help of someone else!

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Fatima

@HSFA

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Wow after such a long time reading some work of yours Mihi and trust me its always a pleasure to read your stuff particularly.😳

I love the way you write and incorporate all the elements in your work<3

Its was beautifully written specially the abandon corridor part. The way Sharon was striving hard between her heart and mind was really enjoyable<3 👍🏼

Finally they reunited. I hope that it happens in D3 soon (no expectations though:P)

Their conversation was beautifully crafted. Mind blowing! 👏👏Just loved it to the core.

Missing you a lot yaar<3 🤗

Loads of love.