ArHi OS | A Crack In The Curtains *Awarded* - Page 2

loved it very beautiful...keep it up

This is...breathtaking! Left me speechless! Thanks for the PM!

Why the hell u were nervous? It's so beautiful ! ( in arnies ishtyle)
Really, so emotional !

Don't bite your nails girl, stand up and take a bow! It was sweet, touching and felt so real - especially that squeeze. I loved how you meshed up the various storyline and came up with a closure for each one. Loved how Arnav is remorse and knows what is at risk and is not willing to let go without a fight. A chance for him to show her his love as she has seen mostly the anger and hatred, a chance for him to repent and tell her how much he loves and needs her. I love that you left it at the squeeze and the happiness it brought to this tyrant who became a believer because of her goodness! Yeah I like it, I like it a lot. Thanks.

Darrrling Emma, this was one of the most beautifully written one shots I've read! And I mean it.

Your words made my water a bit but that's alright. It was worth it. I like crying about/for things I love.

You wrote it so wonderfully, captured the emotions just right.

Bas beautiful it was. No other words.

I was reading this at 3am in the morning whilst suffering from my every now and then bout of insomnia.

Subah subah mujhe emotional kara diya..ek haappy ending wala doosra part bhi de dona..Arshi happily ever after...

For the first time in many many reads, I had tears in my eyes. It was haunting but in a sweet way. Loved it.

this is beautiful...this is the essence of IPK .Khushi is the light of Arnav's life

OMG!!!! it was soo so Beautiful. I Had tears in my eyes reading it. You are a good writer, would love to read some more of your work.