Smitar's: Loving Khushi#5 Part 20, 21 Pg 1 (4/9)

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incarnadine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Congrats on the new thread!!! :)

Loved the updates loads!

The part where Arnav talks to Devi Maiyya was highly emotional 😭
The Goddess heard his plea and granted him his wish. She returned Khushi to him :')

As always, their phone conversation made me teary eyed.
Khushi accusing Arnav of always being far away..then voicing her desperation to see him..

Girija Devi's words of wisdom are an icing on the cake. I love them Smita! True, hiding your unhappiness behind a smile will only make others take you for granted..

Part 21 is the beginning of their blissful life together.
Finally confessing their love for each other, and consummating their marriage.
Can there be any ending as awesome as this? It's lovely! All the pain and separation they've gone through has finally culminated into a happy life together :')

I'm so glad that I was part of this awesome story!! I loved it to bits!
Looking forward to your new story!!! =)

Love your interpretations Rashmi!! They're wonderful as always; and thank you for the email :)

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chippu84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

awsommeee... i loooveeeddd it... tooo goooddd ... plz pm me if ustart another one...

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Newbiesoapfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Great end Smita... she realised that she can't stay away!!!

Love your stories... especially this one as it closed a lot of loops!

Contract marriage , the whole Payash wedding night story , Shyam's threatening Khushi , Anji finding out about and handling shyam... everything that we wanted in the serial...

And of course .. Arnav's talk with DM... we always expected that to happen ... Khushi missing , Arnav talking to DM to bring her back as he realizes that DM is behind everything that happens in this world!

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devsum

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

i just love your stories.. reminder set for the 12th. I'll be stalking...

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A, Anon, Nony, Anamika :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Lovely end to a lovely story :)

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

beautiful !!! loved it.. they are one finally.. khushi realised her love for her husband.. was great.. arnav is more than happy to take his lovely wife with him to home...

thanks for pm 😊

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Sugi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Congratz on new thread 🥳

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ArSh23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

aww what a great ending! Girija Devi gave Khushi such good advice. It was good she went away for a little while because it helped her see what she really wanted. I can't wait to read your next story!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

part 20
congos on new thread
but its ended so soon thats sad yaar
so lets see do they make it back to one another i know they will
true her hubby does need her more than anyone else
and you guys can get someone else he cant
its only khushi for him and only arnie for her
hmm what tiwari chacha was saying sure reflected arhi didnt it
wow who would have thoguth that he would say and do this
but then for him living without her is impossible
so he did what he had to do to get her back
even if it meant going back to the one he proclaimed isnt there
and realisation has struck her too
so much that she called him that late
but then it would have done
oh thank god for GD she sure helped them didnt she
so he came as soon as he could for her
ahhh that reunion was so beautiful
and she is right you know
you aint devdas mate kya karr diya aap ne apna
well now she is here it shall be okay again

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chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#80

part 21
yes you owe it to them all
but mostly you owe it to your love too
yes mate she is yours and only yours
and about time too
well what you wanted to do then can be done now
after all now she is your wife
and you both have finally reached your destination
no you naughty naughty devil how can she feel cold when what you are saying and looking at her is enough to rise her heat
oyye hoyye really making excuse of health are we arnie
hmm that kiss was magical
and now with the past behind them this is the way forward
arnie she is only your treasure so keep her safe from others
and that is just the beginning of their love story
but end to this story
now cant wait for the 12th then we shall see you again

Edited by chavvi16 - 12 years ago

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