11/11//2013 - ARHI FF:MASTERCLASS THREAD10: Chapt89 pg114..note pg131

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coolgirl3

@coolgirl3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#801

OMG!!!!!! Amazing, can't wait for the next part to see who Mr Irani gives his land too...

Plz update soon

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

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Posted: 11 years ago

#802

OK Payal killed her husband? Is that guilt talking or is she being literal about it? I'm with Akask: I find it very difficult to believe, but Payal is stubborn and isn't going to be forthcoming easily.

Arnav and Khushi...what can I say? I felt like I was reading about lovers parting without knowing when they would next meet..these two are sooo romantic!

Will this admin assistant be a problem????? What will Mr Irani's decision be about the land...?

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#803

even i want to know payalias full story

i kinda like this akash the one in IPK as too pansy and payal too is feisty and cute

my guess is kushi will get iranis land

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Jay

@jduke

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Posted: 11 years ago

#804

Wow...this story line is so different and awesome. You have excellent writing skills that glues the readers to the story. Waiting for complete story from Payal. Did you write any other stories?. Can you give index link?.

Edited by jduke - 11 years ago

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rvas

@rvas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#805

ohhh wow...loved loved loved it

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#806

so back to routine for them all
and back to playing games
sorry back to it being what ever it was before this HM trip
wait what she as in payal said must be true
well at least the bit that she was married
that would explain how the younger daughter got married before the older one
especially for families like khushi and payal this is true
well how where where she killed her husband is another matter
so khushi didnt want him to go
and he didnt wanna go either
but they have to right
awww she was so checking him out but then thats her right and no one can take that from her right
hmmm so what now i wonder
payal truth arhi battle
and sorry to say woman but all three men are taken
though that dont mean that you wont have enough eye candy

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shubhanjli

@shubhanjli

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#807

Where were you dear? Missed you.

You came with a bang. Romance suspense tension all in one.

Loved it, just awesome.

Poor Arnav and Khushi. They are so much in love. They don't want to start their normal routine. Love birds. And again i am saying..the way you describe Arnav, is just freakingly awesome. He is damn hot and sexy and Khushi is so lucky. Whole world ogle him then why can't she and he loves it as well.

By the way who is this new Ms Admin. Are we going to have jealous romantic movements. Or she is going to get blast.

Even Akash is so damn hot. I am looking forward for the murder mystery.

And finally the result time has come. Is there going to be a trouble in paradise.

Yes Naina bring it on... Waiting for next eagerly..

Thanks for the update and pm.

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#808

That was one intriguing chapter and all thanks to Akash and Payal!

Arnav was adorable in his reluctance to leave Khushi..

and now for the big suspense will he or will she?

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palaayan

@palaayan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#809

Naina,

The update in my mind is filled with angst. Angst at being seperated from your dear love, angst at realities of life and being unable to understand or change anything. Finally the angst of finally learning the outcome of Mr Irani's decision.

Arnav and Khushi's love is so beautiful, the bond so strong that it borders on divinity, it truly does. Aakash is apprehensive regarding the true state of affairs with Payal yet seems quite willing to break down her barriers I am deeply curious to know how this pragmatic, extremely hot tempered man penetrates this steel heart.

As ever I can't wait for the next update!!

Manreet :)

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#810

Super update, N!
Having to step out into the normal world after 2 weeks of living in their own paradise was undoutbedly very painful, you descrined that beautifully.

Payal has clearly had a long time to strengthen the defence walls that she has built aorund her already strong self after whatever happened that resulted in the death of her husband.

It is going be a long, persistent hacking at the walls for Akash to be able to get through to her. But Akash does not seem to be a man easily deterred, if anything, this has probably made him even more determined to get through to her. Both are a perfect match for each other.

But why do I feel there is a lot more to this killing the husband story, it seems she believes she's killed her husband, am not sure if that is really the case.

The one thing that I find a bit intriguing is that Khushi has not told Arnav about such a seminal event in her and Payal's life? Actually when I look back at the story, I realise that we've not seen any interaction between Payal and Khushi or between Arnav and Akash.

3 hunks in a room and a young lady faints!! ha!😃

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