That was a great update. Its amazing how you cleverly managed to give us a update which was kind of filler, not revealing much, yet kept us glued to it throughout.
You didn't divulge more about Payal's past and rightly so. With the kind of nature she has it will take more than just coaxing and demanding, together with his fury, from Akash's end to make her open up letting all her guards down. Coz her the truth is just that, being her vulnerable self. The whole Payash sequence was wonderfully done.
The Arhi scene was so beautifully portrayed. Their longing for each other, the reluctance to leave even if just for hours, the pain at being separated, their missing each other and yet holding themselves together knowing their responsibilites was all just so brilliantly put together in words by you.
And then we have a new entry. So what role is Ms Admin gonna play in this story? Its obvious that neither Arnav nor Akash recruited her. It also seems even Aman doesn't know much.
Finally Mr. Irani has made his decision. I have my heart racing in nervousness and anticipation of whats going to happen next. So plz update soon.
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