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deepika45

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Posted: 12 years ago

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It so beautiful update. Khushi is falling misserably in love

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Bublee013

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Thanks for the pm..
Congrats for new thread...
Awesome.

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Happytwinkle

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Congrats for new thread

beautiful part

thanks for the pm

Twinkle

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ILoveFF

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Lovely update... She is so naughty and innocent

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45678

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

oh so cute. really loved it.

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J P

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Congratulations on the new thread! :)

Urgh that stupid phone, ruined the moment!

Lovely update!

Moving on are we, the first traces of changing relationship!

Splendid moment! Rabba ve!

Poor akash pity him!

Kaka is happy I'm glad!

Looking forward to the next one!

Cheers

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Kaj!

@Kaj!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Whao! So much has happened during my one month absence lol. Love the transition in Arnav and Khushi's relationship. I love how she finally came clean about NK to Arnav, assuring him that there could be no better choice when it comes to choosing a husband than Arnav.

NK has booked a honeymoon suite in a month's time in Manali. I hope this doesn't cause further friction between Khushi and Arnav. Or who knows... maybe they could make better use of that suite 😉..😳..🤣

Uff these impromptu phone calls, ALWAYS ruining the moment in their lives. Phone call maker, agar unko ek kiss karne deta, toh tumhara kya jaata?? 😡😆

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lala rukh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

😳deeps its an awesome update yar...i loved it to the core...🤗

u r giving us such a sweet and pleasureable moments of the two together that ...heart is full of sweetness right now...:)

i am loving this couple more than anything in this world...

how cute and understanding they both r becoming towards each other...

there was a constant smile on my face while reading it and still my smile muscles r not back to there serious position...lolzzz

read soo many stories but never read such a master piece where husband and wife THE MOMENTS r written so beautifully...:)

the way khushi asked kaka abt his day ...and then her excitement in telling him how she got approval from arnav singh raizada... u put us in constant awe state...i swear :)

never knew that treat can be that treat full...hahahahaha...wow really treat means that...loved it...loved the way arnav tries to stop her in saying these words...:)

loved the way u mentioned his thank u to kaka in sense of saying sorry...wow

yaaar u have made me crazy...i mean can someone drink mango shake that sexily...ufff deeps...i am rewinding and playing those lines again and again in my mind...u have written it soo beautifully that after loosening his tie...i want him to drink mango shake daily...hyeee deeps...ok ok controlling...lol

poor khushi obviously after that shaking mango shake she had to run to washroom...hehehehehe...arnav bay is confused at his wife acts...:)...my sympathy with khushi :)

she said she wants to pee and he saying y u have to hold it till last min...🤣🤣

ur comedy was at its best when they discuss akash and payal doings...hahahaha...just simply hilarious out of this world...it was pure friend to friend talks i swear...that easily they discussing it...wow..awe arnav is having her mehndi wali photo on mb..so sweet yar...

well akash and payal were also seemed quite busy...hahaha...really that my shona shona baby was like aweee

hahaha arnav and his santa banta jokess...hehehe

that last whole scene btw arnav and khushi was superbly written...loved the pool side...the ambiance ...u always create magic there with ur writing...:)..really wt was there between them ...not saying word just heart to heart talks...Whats happening between us Arnav?...

I have no clue. Let the moment be clueless...hyeee

see i am laughing like an idiot throughout the update...ur each and every line cause aweeess,so sweet,wow,uffs and hyeees deeps :)

i wish when ever KISS WILL BE GOING TO HAPPEN...IT WOULD BE FROM KHUSHI ...SHE HAS GONE CRAZY LIKE US ...U MAKE ALL OF US OGLING ON HIS LIPS ...😳😳..LOLZZZ

my goodness deeps...i simply loved it...

and u know love u even more❤️

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amita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Congrets for the new 🥳
Arnav was so eager to spend time with her
Khushi was admiring his lips WOW good progress 😉

Khushi is slowly falling for Arnav...❤️

She is so naughty 😉, poor Akash...😔 Arshi ne disturb ker diya
And poor Arnav so emebaresed what to reply

Conversation of Akash and Arnav was too funny😆

Santa banta jokes seriously Arnav
Bachare sidhe sadhe Arnav ko pasha diya Khushi ne

Loved their poolside moments

They were getting closer and closer day by day

But that damn phone always spoil their moments😡

Really and Awesome and superb update

Loved it too much

Very beautifully written👏

Waiting for next update

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819504

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Congratulations on new thread dr..
May u have many many more threads of this ff...

Update was jst superb...
Khushi unknwngly fallng fr him...
Love her all antics nd innocent talks...
Arnav slowly slowly cming out of his shell...
Perfectly pen down dr...
Do update next soon..
Thanx fr the pm

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