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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

well very nice start.. arnav saved khushi from that preetam.. but what will khushi do now.. what will she tell her family.. that bas***d preetam will try to insult her in front of her family.. will arnav come and save her there.. but loved their first encounter.. looking forward to know more..

thanks for pm 😊

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anjali2427

@anjali2427

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

very interesting start,both dunno who they are

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srya

@srya

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

nice start.. continue soon...like the character of arnav

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Hi Anu !!!!! very intersting story...

prologue is very beautifully written...

i m hooked to the story... Is Akash Arnav's cousin ????

Preetam is a jerk... poor khushi always gets engaged to the troubled guy... let us see the changes in khushi's life after ASR 's entry...

what the ... what was Arnav doing with the lady ...

thank you

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pmehra300

@pmehra300

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Absolutely fantastic update

Loved it

Really interesting

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Nishi

@Ni_singh

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

read the prologue and chapter 1...very interesting...

thanks for the pm

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lastdesire

@lastdesire

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Haha preetam had it coming...poor khushi hd to put up wiz him.
Da stranger is our asr...he knws hw to strike a deal in da dark lol

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samirao

@samirao

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Awosome start of an epic tale , written exceptionally well dear writter , so glad to read Asr fight with jerk preetum , hopefully Khushi didn't have to tolerate that bloody as... Preetum any more , impatiently waiting for more , thanks alot for the pm