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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Hey, congrats on the new thread. Looking forward to the satisfaction of having more of the loops being closed.

The last few closures were simply superb.

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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

congrats on the new thread.
hope u doing better now.

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Congrats on the new thread

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Congrats on the new thread xx

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

LOL!! That's one way, I guess.

And res!!

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Res...

I loved it...it was so refreshing and brought a smile and a feeling of warmth ...these two so endearing !

Loved how slowly yet suddenly sort of ...find the way into each others heart and life...from the harmless flirting ...to business associates to a coffee date...loved how she spontaneously blurts it out...just how she feels it...to where they have come now...the journey has been fun and a pleasure to read...

I loved how post the meeting and the demeanour and seriousness the ambience changes to flirty and fun...professionalism has an expiry date...ha ha ...

Loved how he suggest coffee...and she blurts out a date...love how he teases her about it...love how she decides to take a chance with him...feeling for him something that she has not felt for a long time...love how his simplicity and silliness evokes feelings in her...stronger with each meeting and he feels the growing attraction too...

Loved how at the mention of his participation in the project reducing she feels the loss almost immediately...and I love that he asks her if she will miss him...and she admits she will, without any hesitation...

Loved how they go for a proper date...but him reiterating that the she asked him out first...loved how their relationship progresses to her becoming her girlfriend ...the casualness of it ...as it was the most natural thing...loved that scene with Sally...

I liked that you have given these two characters real feeling and emotions...with a sense of freshness...,

So that photograph confirms her worst suspicions...him being a Raizada sibling..just as everything was going so well...I have a feeling NK will surprise us with depth in his character and rise about it..he maybe cheesy and funny, but he knows the value of feelings and will respect them...and her!

Like I said I don't read non Arshi...but your writing makes me...there is a certain quality in the way you write that makes me ...I have had to cut down on my reading with responsibilities in AD...but m glad to read your work!

Edited by vandana.sagar - 12 years ago

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

bloody hell she just found out he was a raizada loved how they both connected so cute to the saving of her life to the coffee date to the full on romance the cute flirting on both side awesome beautifully done i love sally she is so cute and the the other show drops he is a raizada continue soon awesome update
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