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@pup03

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#481

awesome !!! loved girijadevi.. rotund akbar who have to do something of sad arnav singh raizada and his weepy wife khushi.. loved all the updates..

thanks for pm 😊

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831628

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#482

Fantastic updates and classic interpretation...

Emotional one...beautifully written...

Moved me to tears...

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@ammavedu80

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#483

All the 3 chapters are fantastic
Kushi will return soon to arnav
I liked this line a lot

"Why did she feel like a cruel King Akbar who had killed Anarkali for falling in love with Salim? She looked at her own reflection in the glass of the window. A very rotund King Akbar. She imagined herself with a turban and a rose in her hand. And shuddered.

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#484

really she left...:(

i was thinking of some miracle to happ...

arnav was at his best...

he has done soo much for her...

:( :( :(

thanks rashmi

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Jenna

@LondonChick

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#485

I hope from this seperation they'll know just how much they need eachother

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m.rani

@m.rani

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#486

heartbreaking💔

please let them be happy soon...

loved the update.

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#487

Really sad update...

Khushi and Arnav both are in pain😭... both don't want to leave but have to be separated... Both are helpless for their own reasons... I m feeling like going to them tie them together so that they can not be separate...

But in all this Girija Devi is a ray hope... Lol she imagine herself as Akbar... i love this Akbar... hopefully she will bring them together again...

waiting for the next update...

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l.savitree

@l.savitree

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#488

i was 😭 with the last part but the Garija Devi gave me hope

that was an emotional & well written update...love it

continue soon

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#489

Oh my God, what's happening- I love u both smita and rashmi - I love u both damnit / back to back updates and back to back intetpretations / what more is required - u both have made me so so happy
Lovely lovely update - jai ho girija deviji -