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Sajinabi

@saj111

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#371

Very emotional update Smita 😭 but u've depicted Khushi's very true emotion's dat she is going through currently and it its very neccessary to be left alone to think exactly wat she wants from her life and how she wants to live her life accordingly. Although thought Arnav would convice Khushi to stay after 15th, but dis was d best 4 both of them. Loved d last part "I will build a cottage near your window and spend my life looking at you from afar." lol Smita 😆 from begining of d chapter it was very sad but glad dat u ended with a humor to ease ur reader 😊.

Update soon Smita, want to see how their families are going to react and want to see how will be their new relationship's after seperation.

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gauri

@GAURI29

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#372

i am feeling bad for arnav ...
poor guy
bt khushi also needs freedom

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#373

awww that was just amazing

So finally he's lettingher go so she can find out about herself

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#374

Such a twist in the story! I never expected Khushi would want to go away from everyone. To Varanasi. To do the job of a cook for a hostel full of girls.

She wants to identify the real Khushi Kumari Gupta. But is that easy, when her heart will be in Delhi? In a way, that's a plus point. Dooriyan bhi hai zaroori 😉 and Khushi will get a chance to explore herself...

But poor Arnav 🥺 he's hating himself for letting her go through all that trouble.

If only they had met in a different way.

If only Arnav wasn't so tough on Khushi.

If only...

Lovely update Smita!! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Thank you for the email Rashmi! 😊

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sarozz

@sarozz

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#375

Fabulous update...it's so heart wrenching...i was almost at the verge of tears..i couldn't believe that she is actually leaving for real...

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Mallika

@malkasub

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#376

Im glad shes leaving. the way she put her POV, we could feel how claustrophobic it was for her not being able to vent out her emotions, that too considering the character that she was.

her leaving will rightly help her find herself.

great update, waiting for more

mallika

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anjubua

@anjubua

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#377

fab update, sad that she's leaving

but to rediscover herself, Arnav

is supporting her cos he love her.

can't wait to read more.

continue soon

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#378

at least he would let her fly her wings...hoping in the end she will come back to her nest

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404703

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#379

for Part 9 of 2 B...

awesome part...

they both married in the presence of their family members with their blessings...now no one will dare to ask khushi about the worth of her mangalsutra and sindoor...

arnav know and believe tht one day khushi will return his love with the same intensity its just tht she is too hurt to proceed further to accept her love...the love tht was made mockery of by Arnav one time...

so with the beautiful dreams of a better future they are on the way to their journeyto sleep.😆...😆...

loved it...