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Posted: 12 years ago
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*BONGGG* O.O O.O O.O THAT... THATT WAS.. WOoW!!!!! O.O

Saying it was awesome would be an understatement! And I am completely bowled out at the moment! O.O

Love how you weave actual magic with your words, considering it had hardly two lines of dialogues! 👏 ---> This is for you and you alone Anony_mous-jee 🤗

Coming back to the analysis, Khushi had underestimated his love for her. Her assumption of him falling in love with someone else was totally absurd (I know she was all 17 and clearly had no idea that discussing it with him would be better than just plunging ahead with her decision), when he clearly knew that NO ONE and ABSOLUTELY no one would love the broken man he was back then and it was only her and will be her who would, without asking anything in return, and well you have already mentioned that 😆.

When you mentioned about Keshav's happiness on seeing a lift and Arnav's accusing glare in her direction, with all honesty, felt my heart lurch for the poor girl. For all she knew, she had been doing what she thought was best for everyone around her and selflessly sacrificing her happiness for them [Insert KKGSR wali sad smile here]. And I am really glad you included this trait of her's from the Drama, not caring what would happen of her and how things might turn eithrr sour/sweet for her in the future as well You my fraand have made me sad But still ILOVEYOUDAMMIT! 😆

When Arnav's monologue started and he thought of her suffering at his hands for four months and him feeling bad about it and realizing that along with him shebhad equally suffered, I was like, you bet your whole net worth she suffered dumbo! Akeli bandi, without any shelter and taking care of a handicapped brother along with carrying a shattered-tattered heart 😔 He was right in reprimanding himself for not even cross-checking (Yes, I know he was heart-broken and shattered himself), but I was just wondering would he have gone back looking for her if she hadn't turned up in his office? Would he have gone back and see how she was doing in her life? Either she was happy and satisfied, as she had claimed their separation would mean to, or not? Some answers I want from Arnav Babua here 😳

And the ending hayeee [Insert gooe-y eyed image here] What started as a little taste turned into full-blown-passionate love making making us feel like a pool of jelly 😳 Love how you described them finally succumbing to their desire and love for eachother

The last sentence has me all gripped here bahi! She thinks she'll go away again after this just once. I feel for the girl here. Our hero won't let her out of his sight. Dekho I am counting on Arnav for that, agar ramanchi ki na toh pakka main ASR ko first floor se neechay dhakka de dungi 😆.

Take care and update sOon 😊
Edited by smarty94 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
awesomeji
loved it...
eagerly waiting for next update☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edited comment on page 10
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yay their are finally moving forward in their realationship !!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Short update in terms of dialogue too much of narration I could not handle it. Though I liked it that you explained both their POV's in great detail.

I still feel Khushi was dumb while deciding it alone. Serves her right as Arnav is deciding for her! Glad atleast she let Arnav feel her. 16+ content ji.
I understand only Arnav POV not Khushi's this time what to do ? If I were in Khushi's place I would let my partner also decide. Even if I were in Arnav's place in IPK I would my partner decide also. This alone deciding business does not work with me.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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You changed the equation between the two by this bold and surprising move from Arnav. Eagerly waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Khushi is too complexed in this story.hoping for d next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks for the pm.
Awesome amazing update. My heart is going dhak dhak...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loving oneself with all the flaws. That was just what he wanted to convey to her. Both of them couldn't stop because of love for each other and the pain of distance of 11 years
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was an awesome update <3
hope that arnav and kushi will talk with each other about their feeling and thoughts and pain... and make everything alright
looking forward to the next part

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