Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 10) - Page 28

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Posted: 12 years ago

God! I missed this story so much.

Thanks for the update Anony J and as usual a brilliant onešŸ‘. Personally I got all excited after reading the update because we have Khushi's point of view which I have been dying to read. I know it's not a lot but at least it's a start.

The closing line of the chapter "What she missed was that it is the still waters that run deep. And Arnav is the other name for ocean." gave me Goosebumps, with that one line you summarized everything Arnav is.

So, Sumer does have an hidden agenda. I did have inkling about it and I guess he is totally justified in his thinking. He understands Arnav and the vacuum in his life better than anybody and I am glad that he is not shying away from his role in putting Arnav through turmoil as a kid. I have nothing but respect that he is taking full responsibility of his mistakes and is doing whatever he can do make up to those mistakes. Marriage and Arnav are poles apart, even after being so drawn to Khushi he hasn't thought about marriage with her. So, Sumer is walking thin line here, I know Arnav reaction is unpredictable to this. But if I have to guess I would say he would probably be receptive to it and might get excited in his own way thinking it's with Khushi that his dad is proposing the marriage. If nothing this proposal will at least get Arnav thinking of marriage with Khushi. Arnav is short temper and impulsive but he will not lose his cool with Sumer, give his condition. I will all the luck to Sumer!!

If its left to Khushi she will make the whole world come and convince Sumer about the surgery, it really shows how much she loves Sumer and the extent she can go for her loved ones. It was very sweet of Rishabh to do research and do his bit in convincing Sumer, though he did for Khushi it was a genuine effort. So, finally he asks the questions that sitting like throne in his heart. I like the way Khushi handled the whole situation and didn't let things go out of control.

As much as I do not like Rishabh presence but to me he is very key to the story, especially to progress Arnav and Khushi's relationship. Only after he came into picture Arnav realized how strong his feelings for Khushi are and it strengthened his desire to keep her with him forever and now Rishabh has already trigger Khushi's thinking towards "What Arnav means to her". Though it will take a lot for Khushi to start feeling something for Arnav or even to realize what Arnav feels for her. Because according to her she is not good enough for anybody and nobody can love her.

Can't wait to read next update and I hope it will come soon 😃.

Edited by Crazy4Sobti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is absolutely awesome update. Love it Anamika. Am looking forward to reading more.
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Posted: 12 years ago
šŸ‘šŸ˜²

Awesome

So Sumer wants Arnav to marry?
This is going to so fun

Come on Arnav
Here is your golden opportunityšŸ˜‰

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Posted: 12 years ago
Ok First of all m in second page of ur update
Woahhh

Yayyy !!
Yehannn !!!
Thhoda dance ho jaaye !! šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†



Bohot ho gya dance !!

Lets come to the update now !!

What the !!
Sumer planning to get Arnav married
I m sure Arnav will utilise this chance to marry Khushi...

This Rishab is a bit rude
I hope Arnav's marriage news will make Khushi realise her feelings for him...

A little bit though
Or will we see a jealous Khushi ??
Vaise I love a jealous n a possessive Arnav much more...

The one in MKM 1

My fav
But neither did I like Akash in that story

He had no spine
nor do I like Rishabh much here...

The only good that they do is that they make Arnav jealous !!
n make him realise his feelings for her..

Thanks for giving us Khushi's POV
This tells us that Arnav has become a very important person in her life...

The last line was just too good !!

Let's see what happens now !!

Awesome Update !!

Edited by Barun_Addict - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Vats, loved the update again... I am simply amazed how every single time you capture the emotions of every single character so beautifully and keep the story moving... I loved the details you put into the thought processes of the characters... Gives us a beautiful insight into their psyche...

So Khushi as usual is doing her part of convincing her Bade Papa to agree to the surgery... She is doing things at her level, asking her friends to convince her bade papa, so sweet of her & so in sync with her nature of doing things in a collaborative way...

So, Rishabh finally asked the million dollar question why not call Arnav bhaiyya?? I almost puked like Khushi... LOL

Was so glad to see Khushi's discomfort in thinking of Arnav as her bhaiyya... No way!! šŸ˜† But equally loved to see Rishabh's discomfort at Khushi's explanation... Stay away Rishabh, Khushi's taken... šŸ˜‰

Hmmm, not sure where Sumer is going with his emotional blackmail thingy... I hope it doesn't back fire given Arnav's very, very short fuse... But I sincerely hope (which I know is wishful thinking on my part) that somehow, he is suggested to marry Titaliya & he then says, ok let me think about it... Please aisa kuchh karo... In dono ke beech mein kuchh ho nahi raha hai... I almost died when I read that bhaiyya suggestion... This way, at least they can start feeling things towards each other along those lines, especially our bholi bhaali Titaliya... Who happens to be the most clueless girl I know...

Otherwise a very lovely update again Vats. lekin & this is a huge lekin now that you have finished off FYS, please update this story sooner... Update jaldi jaldi karo please, ardent, sincere request 😊
Edited by pixiegirl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Another awesome part.. Waiting for more to come..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yahooo...finally. ...loved the update...though I missed khushi arnav interaction in this update but still liked the update very much...cnt wait for next update. ... please update next update soon:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow we have this back
thats so cool
now shall get to it in half an hour
right back now
so lets see what you have for us today
am sure it will be exciting exhilarating and the usual twists surprises shocks etc etc
what is rishu doing here
and how does sumer surgery have to do with him
what is going on i wonder
sorry didnt read completely not to do with the surgery but his phobia
but why him only
damn he is winning brownie points here
arnie where the hell are you
yes he is laddoo's friend and nothing more than that one hopes
but then you never know right
wow he sure wants sumer to understand that nothing wrong will happen good on him
well what else do you expect them to do
if you are gonna be stubborn so will your kids
and laddoo is like that only way too protective for her loved ones
but then cant blame her wither can you
dont you dare think such things you are gonna be okay
you have to pull it for him
but what does he have in his mind
is it what we all are secretly hoping and praying for
one hopes so otherwise i dont think arnie will take the shock
so he really thinks he wont make it
arrey be positive mate please
you have to make it for arnie just have to
or god knows what khushi will have to do to get him out of the shock of you not making it
rishu man you are hell bent on making him agree to this right
well cant say he doesnt have it in him to be persuasive
haila who else has she asked to speak to her bade papa about
man she is one hell of a protective daughter aint she
but then how can she not do this
not only would it affect her but more importantly arnie as well
well he was doing it for you dear
not that he doesnt care for your bade papa but you were the incentive here for this
she knows arnie pretty well dont she
she knows why he isnt talking to his dad
because he fears what if he pushes his dad too much he could refuse
and we all know he would never want that for sure
rishu rishu dont go in arnie matter she is bound to defend him and she aint wrong either to do so
oyye dont go there at all
no ewww they CANNOT and i repeat CANNOT be sibling ever
but then that would be his jealousy talking in a way
i know right you cant have him as her potential groom and then brother
that would be weird and really weird
but then rishu dont know that arnie too was considered as potential groom for khushi
if he comes to know he might just have a fit
leave it mate just leave it
nope he aint gonna leave it is he
stop trying to goad her she never will call him bhaiyya
trust me he is a storm for sure
and he might just gain the upper hand without trying too much
sorry to say but it just was meant to be for sure
oh boy they sure are putting her in tricky spot right
wait but why is she so eager for arnie to have more friends
but then she always cares for him
maybe she doesnt know but she cares for him more than she knows she does
hmmm rishu sure gave her lots to think about now didnt he
okay so it is what we were hoping for
wooo hooo
well he is gonna say yes this time
wow he is getting another chance at this
and he better not ruin it this time
wow his dad is good real good
so this surgery will happen only if arnie agrees ti marry hmmm this should be good
and its not like they are asking him to marry khushi only
but he has to marry someone if he wants his dad to go for surgery
basically his dad is making sure that if he dont make it arnie will have someone for him
and that someone has to be khushi arnie please dont ruin this golden chance please
see this just goes to show that he is ASR dad
but really manipulating his son like that very bad
ahhh who cares as long as it gets arhi together man
well he is right and so is his sister
its not nice to put more pressure on him that is if he thinks its pressure
ahhh so it seems that he has his sister on his side too after this argument
see she is agreeing to him inside even though she is coming up with more excuses
but they both know that if he has a life partner it is more easier for him to open up to them
after all they are for you naa more than others
and he is only like that with khushi not even her as of yet though
ahhh yes she is going around to his idea goodie
yes he is against marriage but will he be against his and khushi's i wonder
well that is the only way to make sure she is with him permanently
that she doesnt leave him and go with someone else
oh dear guess only time will tell will he wont he agree hope he does
but not because of his dad but for himself
to be with khushi forever well as long as there is life
well if its khushi then she is perfect and if he will go for someone well that would be stupid for sure
and completely off their love story too
yes his dad would make sure the past dont repeat but with khushi we dont have to worry
hmmm so he really thought about this
and am glad not like last time when it was about laddoo
well laddoo shall be perfect for him
but if i wonder he shall think the same
he can use this to get her man
as there is no way he will be able to do it on his own completely
and this is just the sort of helping hand he needs
well lets wait and watch who marries whom
oh dear if you thought arnie was confused this one is just as bad
she doesnt know does she that she cares for him lot more than anyone else
and she still dont know why she makes so many excuses for him
but she does that without thinking man
wow she sure has him figured out well only in this matter
not the matter that matters to him these days
that matter is the matter that matters to us too
hey that was funny for sure
sorrry sweetie these two can never be friends
what ever you thought about them cant happen
why one simple reason they are both in love with you though neither has said it but one sure tries to show it
but they cant get along they are rivals for your affection
and the funny thing is she dont know of the same bless
awww she is so cute when she is that innocent
but am glad she is that way
hey thats what drew them to her naa
yes he is the backbone of the family and you the heart kinda
hmmm wait where is arnie in all this
guess we shall know what he is thinking about
and what his thoughts are gonna be on his marriage proposal
hmm that is one thing am looking for desperately
after all it is a make or break situation people
and just as i expected you gave us what we hoped for
cheers for pm
wonder where his thoughts are going apart from his dad surgery of course
Edited by chavvi16 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Marriage talk is around the corner how will arnav react to it
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Posted: 12 years ago
first few to get in early:)
wow nice to see in depth analysis of mr raizada by khushi this by far most accurate khushi has got of arnav but still plenty to learn loved how you ended by the still water quote...too good
looking forward to read more why khushi cant say arnav bhaiya:)

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