Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 10)

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vaishnavi

@vaishuu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1051

Brilliant update dear...
Eagerly waiting for next...

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teja21

@teja21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1052

dat was damn amazing

loved it

thanx fr d pm dear

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memyarshi

@memyarshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1053

Hey Anony

How insensitive of you to leave ur readers at cliffhanger... Oh God...what next...so beautifully written... the child obssessed with a toy...part was awesome...when do they realize what is next for hem...enjoyed immensely...

Have Mercy on us...update soon... 😎

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RealityTruth

@RealityTruth

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#1054

Awesome update. Finally the shrewd businessman stuck to the deal to get married and throw Khushi's friend from her life and keep her near himself, without realizing that he has fallen in love with her. He knew that his dad might get her married off to her friend. The inner turmoils of arnav was nicely depicted. ..How will his dad react when he gets to know Khushi is the girl his son has chosen...Would he be happy or still have some apprehensions on his son's sudden acceptance to marry and that too to Khushi.. What will be Khushi's reaction..I guess she will give her nod for the sake of her baade papa...Waiting for the next update.

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Chamkili77

@Chamkili77

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#1055

I love it! Have your cake and eat it too... Hope khushi will reciprocate arnavs's feelings

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1056

Looking forward to the next part.

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deepa

@deeswarna

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#1057

super loved the update. it was totally beautiful and explicit in details as usual. n the part that made it special that it was almost all about arnav and his point of views! he has been terribly missed in the last one!

wow that was not a behavior i was expecting from arnav, on the contrary i was expecting to see a super angry arnav and literally turning the house upside down with his uncontrolled rage and might have ended saying some very hurtful things to sumer! but im not complaining he reacted like that. summer could happily do without an escalating blood press and that too in his condition!

arnav is finally thinking along the correct lines, i mean he is finally admitting to himself that khushi is his only and something has to be done urgently if he wants her by his side for the rest of their lives! n im just wondering whether watever he has in mind is the right way. i think khushi would really appreciate if someone wants to marry her for herself not for the sake of fulfilling someone's wish!

poor arnav, felt bad for him! looks he woke up on the wrong side of the bed! first the thing with sumer and then all the talks about rishabh and his accomplishment in making his dad agree for the surgery!

anyway im just happy that arnav despite being totally against the idea of marriage is finally considering it even if its under the pressure of his dad and the fact that he is considering that he is considering a certain girl who has been haunting his dreams shows how much he is in love with her and how essential she has become to his surviving! but knowing wat kind of past he has had and after witnessing his parents disastrous wedding i think its along way before he confesses that wat he has started feeling for khushi is love even to himself let alone to khushi!

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1058

First of all I am so sorry for the late comment, just read chapters 21 and 22 together.

Chapter 21:

The update was brilliant and superb, written amazingly well.

Love the way Rishab was trying to convince Sumer to go ahead with the surgery.

I can't believe Rishab actually wanted Khushi to call Arnav bhaiyya, so funny.

So Sumer wanted to blackmail Arnav about agreeing to marry before he has his surgery, personally think it's a wrong move.

The talk between Sumer and Madhu was quite emotional especially when he was thinking about finding Arnav a wife that will look after him.

Loved the part where Khushi was thinking about Arnav and his behaviour, perfectly written.

Chapter 22:

The update was absolutely fantastic and amazing, written exceptionally well.

So poor Arnav listened to his dads request, but did not react straight away as he did not want to harm his health.

Arnav showing his anger in the sanctuary of his room and also taking it out on a poor Khushi,

Love the way Khushi convinced Arnav to come and eat the food, it was sweet.

Wow Arnav getting so jealous over Khushi mentioning rishab's name over and over again at the table, it's just so nice to read a jealous Arnav.

The following line just cracked me up and I laughed so much;

"Enough was enough. There is a limit to niceness and his in-particular came with an expiry date and time. Today. Right now."

So Arnav's possessive side has taken over and he has realised that Khushi is his only and has decided he wants to keep her with him.

Love the fact Arnav has laid down his own condition regarding the marriage, can't wait for him to disclose who the girl is.

Both updates were a brilliant read and also a pleasure to read.

Eagerly waiting for the next part and thanks for the email xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 12 years ago

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anamnoor

@anamnoor

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#1059

Loved it
How will khushi react to this proposal

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#1060

awesome updates

wow arnav agree for marriage and he have a girl (khushi) in his mind..

hmm. very interesting..and what will his dad's and khushi's reaction..

worth to read...😊

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