||~Something About You~||#13 *COMPLETED*21/08/DT NOTE: PG 32 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Hey extension of SAY.Beautiful as always. Arnav Khushi 's engagement ,Arnav's birthday,their promises just fabulous.really missed your writings.Thanks for this OS .Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow, that was an outstanding and phenomenal oneshot, absolutely loved it.

After reading this it just makes me realise how much I miss reading your stories.

The one shot was written exceptionally well, amazing writing.

Loved the cute and adorable banter Arnav and Khushi were having regarding the name calling, it was so sweet.

Awww Khushi is so clever she had her engagement on the same day as Arnav's birthday,

Wow, the promises they made to each other at the end were amazing and so sweet, Loved them.

Loved all the dialogues you included in the update, simply brilliant.

The one shot from start to finish was a amazing read.

Thanks for writing this it was a pleasure to read,

Thanks for the PM,

P.S. Happy Birthday Hotwa!!!!


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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
FAA RAH ...BAN KE TITLI MANN UDAA UDAA UDAA KAHIN

DOOOR

HAPPY BUDDAY TO '22 YARDS' GOLDEN BOY OF TELE

I STILL WONDER WHY HE QUIT ...AFTER SEEING THE WAY

THE TELE-WORLD IS CHANGING ...BOTH HIM N SANAYA HAD

A SURE CHANCE TO GROW N GLOW

THANKS N SWEETS WRITE MORE

YOU HAVE A FLAIR IN WRITING ...



KKKA


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Okay happy birthday hotwa!

Now Farah Di I've missed your writhing so much .. Seeing a pm from you I I scantly came here running

Thanks for the awesome update 🤗

Wow I loved to read the OS .. Since I forgot if you have an epilogue I tried remembering ho the story ended if they were married or not ...
But the. This OS says certainly not...

Khushi was so good to plan...
Now Arnav wants to celebrate his birthday 40 times a year (at least)
Haha

& loved their little promise for each other...

Thanks for updating today ..
I wish to see you in your writing zone very soon back again...
Pls come back Di ... I really missed reading this type of your writing for a long time (your writing)

Once again thanks for the amazing update & happy birthday to our dear Barun Sobti.



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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Hey ,, thanks a lot for this gift on this special day...
arshi's conversation when they are with muskaan is too cute...
the way he was holding the baby is simply adorable..
Khushi's surprise is too good,,, and their promises also...

come back with another story Farah.. pls pls pls
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Posted: 12 years ago
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What a beautiful gift you have given us on Barun's birthday!! The best-est present!!

And of course warm wishes to our hero on his birthday!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww..that was so cute
N yeah happy bday hotwa :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WoW Farah!⭐️ Thank you so much for the sensual and emotional OS! ⭐️Thanks for writing again!😃
Indeed Happy Birthday Hotwa!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg i am so happy farah that u have penned down this os on barun's birthday...wow...wt a timing and a beautiful os u have written ,loved it to the core...
throughout the reading there was a constant smile on face which never leaves even an inch,honestly...loved it
that whole scene where arnav hugged khushi while she was holding baby in her arms was out of this world...loved it to the core...the picture it made was worth watching...
loved to read "red"...feeling so nostalgic...thank u so much for bring say os...thank u very much farah...
there dresses were superb...that whole poolside ambiance was great...khushi sitting in his lap ...wow loved each and every bit of it...there promises...all were super duper...

wish u will never put down ur pen and keep giving us beautiful os like this one in future to...:)❤️

and yes happy birthday hotwa 😊
Edited by lalarukh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
can anythng get better than dis..!

Nothng can actually..!

reading sumthng related to SAY is alwaz special nd dis OS on barun's bday is all d more special..!

Beautiful will fall less if i say this OS is beautiful..!

Each nd evry description nd each nd evry word of dis OS make me feel the love between arnav nd khushi..! ❤️

the starting of d OS was beautiful nd den wit arnav nd khushi quarreling wit the baby nd den his holding d baby circling khushi in his arms nd den their kiss nd den khushi's possessiveness abt him calling dat little bundle of joy as litle red,ahhh beautiful indeed ❤️

the bday celbratn nd their promises,some naughty,some romantic yet all of them coated wit love were simply adorable ❤️

lovely shot nd i dnt mind if u keep on writing their hole marriage ceremony like dis followed by their honeymoon..! 😳

lovely shot fari 👍🏼

loved it to bits ❤️

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