||~Something About You~||#13 *COMPLETED*21/08/DT NOTE: PG 32 - Page 28

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Posted: 11 years ago
we got os on arnavs birthday and ARHIs engagement...

shell we get an another os on Arnav and his Red marriage and honeymoon...

there is something about u r writing...

cheers...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just re read and I love the fight about being called choti mami VS fufaji..not to take Arnav' side but I agree mami sounds better than fufa...and I love the way you have used the IPK dialogues here...that idea wala dialogue was special on the show too..you have incorporated it so beautifully in this scene...( he looked so hot in that Kurta and then the hug he gives her post the pearl necklace)
I love how she despite how much she loves Muskaan and is ready to let go of being called Bachchi and relinquishing that term of endearment used by bhai, agreeing and accepting that Muskan has rights on it but is not ready and has made it very clear that she will never be ...to share her special name 'red' with even her! That is reserved for her ...hamesha ...she is her laad governors RED...bas !

The way you write about them...with so much heart and soul...I can see and feel how much in love they are ! They seem to real !
The passion and intensity of their love makes them so special and unforgettable ! I miss them!

The brilliance no doubt is in your writing and expression...I have full faith that anything you write you will with so much passion and soul that it will have a similar effect on us...I hope soon you are able to make time and get that feel from within to write...! Whether an OS on this story or a SS or FF unrelated and totally different ! I will be there!


Edited by vandana.sagar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
It does not matter how many times I read this ! Each time it feels better and better!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Late post but i have to say this has been one of my favorite story.
Abolutly love it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Farah I love re-reading this story of yours!!!!!
It's definitely one of my all time favourites!!!!!
I can't thank you enough for bringing 'Something About You' to us!!!!!
Please Farah continue to write more stories like 'SAY', I'm eagerly waiting to read some of your new work!!!!!
Keep up the great work Farah and really missing the fact you're not writing new pieces!!!!!
All the best!!!!
Take care!!!!
Lots of love,
Rahat
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Posted: 11 years ago
I loved this story and read again, never tire of it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Writing and fiction at its best...it's addictive!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

Writing and fiction at its best...it's addictive!


Lost count of the number of times I have read the epilogue - one of the best epilogues and one among the best stories I have ever read
Farah, anything in the pipeline dear - me and vandana are eagerly eagerly waiting to read ur writings
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Arjuhisis


Lost count of the number of times I have read the epilogue - one of the best epilogues and one among the best stories I have ever read
Farah, anything in the pipeline dear - me and vandana are eagerly eagerly waiting to read ur writings


I agree with you Priya...Farah, both Priya and me cannot get enough...nothing compares to this story of Arnav and his Red...this really was ' Something Special'!

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Posted: 11 years ago
dnt knw from whr to start n wat to write...i m thinking over wat to write on comment from past 2 days whn i finished reading d story finally!!...i was speechless n i m speechless at d moment...bt i guess i wl jst try!!...😳
i wnt to congratulate first for writing such a masterpeace!!...👏👏
oky coming to d story i loved each n every character ...u gave brilliant treatment to all d characters!!...
arshi's first meeting!!...whn arnav felt a pull towards her!!...attraction!!...
d bond between arnav n rohan was beautiful!!...
payal's engagement wid smoneelse whn akash was present in d story was quite surprising!!...😉
bt thn mistry got solved!!...whn karan turned out as an jerk!!...😡😡
he was actually lusting over khushi!!...d suspense was killig me about khushi's past!!...for d first few past!!...everyone was lyk is this d same grl!!...n all!!...😕
arshi's first kiss was jst perfect!!...awww...i was blushing all d way while reading d whole part!!...😳😳
thn khushi's ignorance n arnav's frustration!!...😉
fir aaya overni8 staying plan of raizada sibling over nikunja!!...😳
bt khushi understood tht time tht its not enough for her wat he was offering to her!!...
n arnav too backout witnessing d bond n love between d gupta siblings!...she was his best frnd's baby sister, his bachhi afterall!!...
thn comes d past mystry!!...i was litrally on d verge of crying while reading d part whn shashi was explaining all pasy things to his baby!!...😭
garima n payal n buaji was shaken to d core!!...
khushi was actually der baby spoilt baby!!...der laadli!!...whn anjali was saying all things to nani n arnav abt d mahol of nikunja after d past fiasco was heart breaking!!...whn she said payal was sitting outside khushi's room n rahan to joined her der!!...i had tears in my eyes!!...😭😭
after tht arnav's need to see khushi!!...n der talk on d roof!!...was amazingly written!!...
thn everyone tries to be normal!!!...healing started slowly!!...
d moment khushi decided tht she is ready to accept watever he is offering n ran back to him was magical!!...der kiss in d rain on d poolside was magical!!...😳
der first date!!!...awww...thts all i can say!!...
dance in rain n intimte moments!!!...😳😳
thn came d horrible scene!!...we r finished here scene!!...😭😭
both were ri8 on der own places at tht moment i guess!!...thn dey made up...
d rasams were amazing of d double wedding!!...
rohan n anjali were awesome!!...dey married after 9 years of courtship!!...thts amazing!!...
payalash were extremely cute!!...
i loved d bond between d gupta siblings d most!!...
gupta famiy is superb!!...kudos to garima n shashi!!...ideal parents!!...
der love for khushi was commendable!!...👏
are ha aman's intro to d story n to armav's lyf was superb!!...😉 karan kapoor ki to band baja di usne!!...for d second tym too!!...whn d fight happens at d night club n whn khushi realised tht arnav loved her!!...
all d pushing n pulling reminded me of our ipk!!...😳😳
on d haldi whn d song came n khushi got emotional!!...arnav said her go away!!...n she sais make love to me!!...😳😳😳
thn came the magical ni8!!...❤️
d moring or should i say d midni8 after tht was awesome!!...😉
om mehedi whn arnav spoil her hands wid putting d ugly dots!!...bt it was adorable!!...he didnt wnt tht ponytail to put mehedi on her hands!!...😆
nk was adorable!!...so was samiya!...tht grl was amazing!!...i was more thn glad whn dey both came together at d end!!...😳
d covo between khushi n samiya after sami saw dem kissing!!...it was painful to her bt she was a sweetheart!!,,,,unlike tht bi**** lavnya!!...😡😡
d face-off between arnav n rohan at sheeshmahal was heartbreaking!!...😭
rohan was abolutely ri8 at his place i guess!!...n arnav cudnt bear d thing tht he was saying him to stayaway from his khushi!!...n he said those horrible things!!...😲 which khushi witnessed!!...n d painful saperation!!...😭
n nw how to forget SHyam manohar jha!!...d certified bas***!!...whn he was being all nice to khushi in past thn also i always got negative vibes from him!!...n thts wat he proved!!...tht creep!!...😡
i never gave lav much important in d story ...she was jst a frnd i thought!!...bt she turned out to b a bi****!!...worst thn enemy!!...
my heart was actually dhak dhak dhak dhak...whn dey were all finiding khusi!!...i was actually affraid to read further!!... her family's condition was jst!!...😭
aman's covo wid arnav tht tym whn he told him tht he cant b the first person to whom smone wl inform abt khushi!!...aman u jst rocked it yaar!!...👍🏼👏
n whn de got d info...der rush!!...d tension!!...d pain!!...d prayer!!...d realistion!!...every damn thing was written so perfectly!!...👏
n thn he saw her in pool of blood!!...😭n d ASR cried!!...
family tym in d hospital n rohan told khushi sappy puppy!!...😉 finally arshi met!!...
n thn came marry me!!...😳
sab kuchh was jst perfect!!...
n yeh i jst loved khushi's all outwears!!...be it her dailywear or d outfits arnav designed for her for d double wedding!!...😉
d epilouge!!...der cute fights!!...d adoranle families!!...i loved all f it dammn it!!...
are ha d "tht u love me damn it" was epic!!...poor arnie!!...😉😆
n thn came d little angel another baby gupta!!...muskaan!!...😳
muskaan n her fui-fufaji were supercute!!...
at d end tht was arnav who was in hurry to get married actually!!...😆😆😆
awww he bought nikunja for her!!...whn she was cursing nikunja's new owner!!...😉
i not at all satisfied wid my comment actually!!...😕its hard to describe wat i felt while reading d story!!...its actually impossible!!...bt i tried!!...😉
n i wl come back wid more later!!...😉
p.s. he called her red!!...awww...😳😳
p.s.s n baby gupta was utterly cute!!...😳😳
Edited by nirmal1992 - 11 years ago

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