FF: Riya v/S Sakshi :luv competition(part-26+T2 link-page -102) 27/11

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Lovely part...

ab aage kya hoga?? plz update soon & PM me..

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archi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: AnjuRish
so is this ariya or arakshi dear full confusion

Ye part padne.k baad v confusion ???

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Suryatapa sengupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Love the concept very much Read all the parts togather Fantastic updates Pls continue soon ( like botton is not working. Don't know know how to sent buddy request. If possible then pls pm me. )

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ninii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

wow wat a update

loves it

ariya scene was gr8 but wat arjun did would hurt riya

continue soon

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srividhya68

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

so arjun knows abt sakshi being his friend...
riya angry...
aww ariya ka rains scene were awesome...
aww thunderstorm bhi abhi hna tha... acha kiss mil jaata wrna lol
but ye kya hua end mai??? :(
continue soon..

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archi

@hunny1993

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: khemanisarita
pls update

Will update on tuesday 😊

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Sreeparna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

nice part.
loved Ariya scene.
cont soon
thanks for pm.

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riyaarjun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Uff kiss hone hi walatha lekin vo chhodo story is so good n plz it make ariya story plz plz

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archi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

thax 4 likes & comments .sry individually sabko reply nehi ki .but i have read ur all comments .here is part -7.
enjoy it !!!!

Part -7

Arjun entered into his house frustratedly & rushed to his room .he just fell on his knees infront of roshni 's large photo &started crying .
Arjun :roshni believed me ...mein tumhe dhoka nehi de rahi thi .i don't know aj mujhe kya ho gaya tha .kuch der k liye mujhe laga ki wo tum ho .but trust me meine jaan bujkar kuch nehi ki .i was not betraying u !!!!

There was a glass vessel .he pressed it in anger tightly & it broke
into pieces .one piece of glass pinned into his hand & it started bleeding .but he
treated it as the punishment of betraying roshni.

BG (THE SONG IS A HINDI VERSION OF A BANGLA SONG .IT IS NOT FILM OR ALBUM SONG )

Mere dil lapata hai
Hue yeh kya khaata hai
Tere liye ye dil rota hai
Har sham har raat din
Jab tak hain jaan
Jaane jaana ...
Kaise jiyu ...
Hum tere bin ,hum tere bin
Hum tere bin ,hum tere bin ...

(Scene shirt 2 riya )she was walking alone on the street in heavy rain & remembering the incident what happened one hour bfore .
Riya :mere saath aisa kyu hota hai ???jab v koi khubsuraat sa sapna dekhti hu wo palme toot kyu jaata hai .akhir meri gaalti kya hai ???yehi ki mein unse pyaaar karta hu !!!!(tears drop falling 4m her eyes )

BG song (Female voice )

Har paal tujhko jaane ku chaahe ye dil
Tere bin hai ye paal jeena mushkil
Teri chaahat meri dua
Ab mujhse tu zaara mil
Jab tak hain jaan
Jaane jaana
Kaise jeeyu
Hum tere bin ,hum tere bin
Hum tere bin ,hum tere bin ...

(nxt morning in etf office )ayesha & sakshi entered into the conference room .they found chotu & shree were sitting there .
Ayesha & sakshi :gd morning guyz !!!
Shree & chotu :gd morning ...
Ayesha :kya baat hai ???ye riya kahi nazar nehi aa rahi hai ??? 😲
Shree :wo actually riya aj humare saath nehi aye hai .usne kaha ki wo baad me ajayenge .
Ayesha :oh ..
Sakshi :waise guyz tum logo ki khadoos boses nazar nehi aa rahi hai ?????

In the meantym rathod & arjun entered .they took their seats .every one wished them gd morning .ayesha gave coffees 2 all & arjun's cutting chai came .every one was sipping their drink .

Rathod :shree ,riya kaha hai ???
Shree :sir ,riya aj hamare saath nehi aya .usne kaha wo baad me aa jayega .itne tym me to ussse aa jana chahiye tha ...

Arjun was hearing every thing .he cursed himself in mind .
Suddenly riya entered .

Riya (2 rathod ):sry sir .me late ho gayi !!!
Rathod :its ok riya .ho jata kabhi kabhi ... 😊

Riya went & sat bside shree .
Shree :ri ,tu thik to hai na ????
Riya :ha shree ,mujhe kya hoga ...
Shree :pata nehi yaar par aj tera chehra bohot utra hua lag raha hai ...
Riya (glanced once at arjun ):nehi shree ,bas thoda sa saar dard hai .don't wry .i will b fine .

Soon they got a case .a case of kidnapping .
Rathod :rawte ,tum aur riya ayush (victim )ghar jakar milo aur unse puchtach karo tab tak hum clab hokar ate hai jaha wo akhri baar gaya tha .
Arjun & riya looked at each other .on the other hand sakshi (MV):jab dekho arjun k saath riya ko vej dete hai !!!
Riya (2 rathod ):actually sir aj mera tabiyaat kuch thik nehi hai .ap kiss aur ko vej dijiye .
Rathod (with concern voice ):r u ok riya ???agar tum chaho to aj day off le sakte ho .
Riya :no sir ..mein office me thik hu .
Ayesha touched riya 's forehead .
Ayesha :riya ,tumhe to bukhar hai!!!!tumne dawai li ??
Every one looked at riya .
Riya (with a faded smile ):ha esha .meine medicine li hai .
Rathod :riya tum office me hi ruok .aur kuch v jaruraat padi to dharmesh (clerk )ko bol de na ya hume fone karna .
She just nodded .
Rathod :sakshi ,tum rawte k ayush k ghar jao .
Sakshi (feeling like jumping ):ok sameer !!!!

They left .but b4 leaving arjun took a glance of riya .

After a tiring day they solved the case & saved the boy .rathod called day off .they just leaving when suddenly riya feet dizzy .she fell down & bcome unconsciouse .they immediately rushed 2 her .
Shree :ri ,ri !!!!sir ye to akhe nehi khol raha hai .
Rathod :hume use immediately hospital le jaani honge !!!

Arjun took her into his arm & got into the suv .

At hospital -
Rathod :doc ,is riya ok ???
Doc :don't wry mr. Rathod ,she is ok .bas bukhar ki wajase weekness hai .aur normal medicine kam nehi ki kyu ki uss bacteria ka side effects avi v kam kar rahi hai .humne unhe injection de di hai .kal subha tak hosh aa jayenge .
Rathod :thax doc .
After the doc leave "
Rathod :guyz humme se kisi ko aj riya k saath hospital me rukhna hoga .
Shree :fir sir mein aur chotu rukh jaate hai .
Ayesha :shree tum log rehne do mein rukhe jaati husband .
Rathod:ha shree ,ek kaam karti hu mein v ayesha k saath rukh jata hu .(lollzzz ...humere rathod sahab moukeka faida utha rahe hai )
Arjun (in rude voice ):kisiko rokhneki jaruraat nehi hai .mein riya k pas rukh jata hu ..
Sakshi :fir mein v tumare saath ...
Arjun (cut in mid ):nehi .tum v jao .

Sakshi wanted 2 protest but arjun 's hard glare is enough 4 shutting her mouth .so they left .arjun went 2 riya 's cabin .she was sleeping .arjun was looking her .

Ok enough 4 2day .i m tired .
Precap :Arjun apologies 2 riya .

Upcoming updates :-
1. Riya -sakshi open challenge .
2.New etf member entry .there will b dhamaka !!!

Guyz leave ur likes & comments .don't b kanjus !!!!! 😛