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shafqee80

@shafqee80

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Abavi plz
plz plz
plz plz
updateee

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abavi

@abavi

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

From the author's desk: here it is, the next update for this chapter. Do read and let me know your views... I read each and every comment, at both the forums and I am deeply grateful to all of you for all your views.. I still have to reply to your PMs which I shall do as soon as possible.. I am a little short of time as of now...
PMs will follow soon

Happy reading!

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Chapter 11: Brides of Raizadas
Part 2: Dasmel in Shining Armour.

I have posted a sneek peek here, you know where to get the full update. If you dont, pm me, I shall give you the link. You might have to login and leave a comment to be able to read the update.

"How could you do this... to our love... our forever love... you even agreed to elope with me to UK.. so that we can get married and live our own life... peacefully.. now now.. how can you do this to me? to our love... all those star gazing nights... all those sweet coated words of love and promises of togetherness... were they all a lie? is this all you can do for me and our love... you even agreed to have babies with me" Khushi built up the scene

Arnav exchanged glances with Akaash and Anjali both of whom looked equally bemused and shocked with Khushi's audacity.

"You all dont believe me isnt it?" Khushi asked the crowd "Even she knows how much we love eachother..." Khushi told as she pulled Anjali to the front and Payal blinked at Anjali as she swallowed in confusion.

"Anjali?" Arnav muttered

Anjali turned to look at her brothers

"I swear I dont know where she is heading" she hushed back at them...

Khushi saw Arnav throwing draggers at her and... winked... making him gulp in suddeness of the move.

"Dont you?" Khushi asked Anjali "Dont be scared of your brother.. tell them all the truth... about my sad love story"

"hmm .. yeah.. I think so" Anjali strutted...

"Did you all listen?" Khushi turned to the audience to continue her drama...

"Uncle, Aunty... wont you all do something to help me? ... If I were your daughter, would you have let this injustice happen to my poor heart and love?"

Arnav muttered "unbelievable" when he recovered from the wink and rolled his eyes at Akaash who hid his sheepish grin with a cough.

What is khushi upto 😲 Do mail me if you dont know how to reach my updates... :)

Edited by abavi - 11 years ago

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ankitamishra201

@ankitamishra201

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

awesome thnx for the update

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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

that was epic...never wud i have thought that khushi wud do this...loved reading it thoroughly...only one grouse i have, that u took forever to update...

all ur ff's are so awesome, we miss it a lot, if u dont update in time...so please try to make some time for us and update it more often...

thanks

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ismani

@ismani

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Hahaha!!!!

Hilarious abavi...I just can't stop laughing😆

The update was worth the wait...

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phillips_2909

@phillips_2909

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

thanks fr pm
need link
missed so much

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Finally abavi you are here. I sent you a pm but didn't get any response from it. Read the update which was damn lovely but I need some time to put in my thoughts. So will update by evening my thought. Hope it is okay with you.