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Posted: 12 years ago
ohhh myyy god,
what a story
this is just amazing, dont kow what i liked more...
great to know that manvi is alive
hope it doesnt took long to see them happily together

amazing work
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi
I am a regular reader of ur stories. All of ur stories are mindblowing
You are such a fantastic writer. I enjoy ur stories more than the serial
I think cv should take some tips from u...keep writing like this😊 & coming to the
update..it was great..finally Tanya is out of the picture..hope they will find Manvi soon... will be waiting for ur update...try to update soon...take care😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Ray of Sunshine # 7

An year ago, on the same day, around the same time:

"Whatchu looking at baby?" Manvi asked Diya who was looking at her mom, lying on the bed balancing her tiny head in both her hands. Manvi was sitting in front of the dressing table, getting ready to pick up Virat from the airport.

He was gone all week for work and was flying back today inspite of all his work commitments just to spend some time with his wife on their wedding anniversary.

"You.." Diya pointed out. She was deeply engrossed in watching her mom, touch up her makeup and change into a white and silver saree in front of her. It was so interesting to her little brain to see someone instantly transform into an angel.

"Hmm..." Manvi brushed Diya's nose with her powder brush, making her giggle.

"You look like a fairy momma..." Diya exclaimed putting her hands around her.

"Oh, I look like a fairy?" Manvi smiled.

"Aha! I wanna look just like you, when I grow up.." she traced her mom's face with her little fingers. Manvi held her hand and kissed it sweetly.

"That's so sweet baby but, you already look like me and a lot more prettier ..." Manvi kissed her on her cheek and Diya giggled again, throwing herself in her arms.

"I wanna come tooo..." she pouted.

"It is school night. You need to sleep..."

"And daddy and momma are going on a date!!! No kids allowed on the premises" Vyshali walked in with Kiara, winking at Manvi.

"What's a date?" Diya asked curiously holding onto her mom tightly. She knew it was time to say goodnight.

"Di!!!" Manvi looked Vyshali signalling her to stop pulling her leg in front of her daughter.

"Alright. Ok. You are getting late Manvi. Start already. Don't make my little brother wait. But, on the other hand, he will not complain at all, coz he is going to go nuts looking at you like this. Arey, if I was a guy..main hi tere se ek doh affair chala leti..." Vyshali smiled as Manvi closed Diya's ears and shook her head.

"You are right Di. I should go, away from you. You sure, you are going to handle her and Kiara, both??"

"Haaan meri maa...ja. What can be more fun than baby-sitting two spoiled daddy's princesses? Right Diya? Come here!"

"Nooo!" she hugged Manvi even tightly, wrapping both her legs around her too.

"Diya?? Don't you want me to bring papa home?" Manvi asked.

"No, I want only you."

"I will come back in a couple of hours honey.."

"Are you sure?"

"Haan meri choti pari. You are going to be a good girl, have dinner with Kiara and go to bed. Kaapish?"

She looked down sadly and went to her bua unwillingly.

Manvi sat in the car and checked her hair and makeup in the mirror for one last time. She wanted to look special today, she had never stayed away from him for this long and she missed him so very much. She knew he couldn't make it home due to his work commitments but she had literally forced him to come, atleast for a day.

"Virat, you know what, if you don't come, I will file for a divorce. What good is a husband if he isn't around?"

"Will you stop it with the threats? I already booked my ticket and am at the airport. Forget you, I will die if I don't see you like in the next twenty four hours. Man! I always rolled my eyes at husbands who used to say " Oh, I can't stay away from my wife even for a few days. But, you have made me this desperate. Shame on you Mrs.Vadhera..."

"I am glad.."

"You better be all decked up for me. Wear that white saree I got you.

"I will see what I can do.." she laughed.

"Alright, they have announced my flight; see you in a few hours baby. I emailed you my itinerary."

Those were the last words to her and now, after an year, he is running through the corridors of a godforsaken hospital in Mexico, in the wee hours of the morning, along with his sister and daughter. He was in a shock and the whole world seemed to be moving in a slow motion and all the voices had garbled out on him and he could not believe what the authorities have told him.

She was alive. She was alive all these days and he did not even know. What had happened to her? Where was she all these years? His gut feeling was telling him it must be very, very bad " something happened to her. And it scared his guts.

Two people from the embassy and a doctor were waiting for them. "A couple of mountaineers found her last night. She was barely breathing. She was held captive with a terrorist group."

"How the f**k did you guys not know that?" Vyshali screamed at them.

"I am her husband. How is she?" Virat asked.

"Please come with me Sir..." the doctor took him inside and stopped in front of a tinted glass window.

"She is stable right now. But, I am sorry to say that.."

"WHAT?"

"Mr.Vadhera, I am sorry to say that, she was physically, mentally and sexually assaulted. It is a medical miracle to see someone in this condition making it. I cannot even comprehend what kind of methods they used on her. She is not responsive to words or gestures. She is completely numb. Her default reflexes are not working. It is like even if someone is hurling a rock at her, she will not move..We have called in for a psychologist and Dr.Kim is trying to determine what can be done."

"I want to see her..."

"Ofcourse."

The doctor took Virat through a series of glass windows which were the adjoining units in the ICU. He entered a room and everything was white in color and the room smelt of disinfectant. His heart was racing.

"Di, are you guys going to leave us alone or not? It is our wedding night and don't you feel ..a little...a tad bit..that..maybe..we...might be.. needing some um..privacy?"

"Haan bhai, abhi shaadi hogayi hain toh, why would you want to spend your time with us. You arwe throwing me out. And anyways, tum ho hi itne fast, isi liye husband banne se pehle papa bangayi, hain na?"

"DI!!!"

"Alright, we will go. But, mu dikhayi??" Vyshali extended her hand and demanded his wallet.

"KYA? She is my wife."

"Acha? Alright, I am going to sit here and chit chat with my brother's nayi nayi dulhan!!"

"Ok fine. Here take whatever you want and please leave...please..."

"That's better.."

"Bye, Manvi. Good luck. Quite a desperate husband you have here.."

Virat went and locked the door and came back to Manvi and sat in front of her. "Thank god! I didn't think they would leave tonight.." he was about to unveil her and she stopped him.

"What do you think you are doing?"

"Manvi, Abhi bohot hogaya..I didnt even look at you all day.." he came closer and she moved away.

"Main kyu dikahao apna chehra?"

"Are you serious?"

"Very!"

"What else is there? What do you want now? I am broke."

"A pledge.."

"A pledge?"

"Yes. A declaration of love."

Virat looked towards heaven but he figured it is better to do it her way. "Hmm..ok. I pledge that I Virat Vadhera will love you, until my last breath. I will love you truly, madly, deeply. I will love you when you are pregnant, when you are fat, when you are angry, when you are happy and when your are sad. I will protect you and break the gut of anybody who would as much look at you and I will buy you whatever you want and treat you like a princess in a godamm castle. Bas?"

"Can you allow me the honor atleast now?"

"Yes."

He smiles and lifts her ghungaat slowly and she looks up at him with tears in her eyes. "That was very sweet.."

"I am very sweet" he shrugs smiling.

"You are.."

"And you are the most beautiful bride in the entire universe!!!" he puts his hands on her shoulders.

"That I am!!" she smiles shyly.

"My bride.." he pulls her into his arms.

"Yours!"

The doctor drew the curtain and showed him in. She was lying there, with her eyes closed. It looked like there was not a part of her body that wasn't covered in bandages. There were big machines on the side recording every small change in her body. He looked at the doctor and the doctor politely nodded and left him alone with her.

She didn't look like Manvi at all. He didn't relate or connect with her. He stepped forward and held her hand which had atleast three IV lines running through it. There were old injuries which had healed but left bad scars on her. And then there were newer ones which looked brutal. His Manvi, his beautiful loving wife - how could they do this to her? A strange kind of mad boiling rage was building up inside him. He felt so disturbed, like he could break anything that he could lay his hands on. He was raging in fury.

"Viraaat..." She tried to grasp his hand.

He looked into her eyes which were open now.

He couldn't utter a word. He was choking and there was a big lump in his throat. He was just able to nod his head. His eyes were filled upto the brim as they met hers. He couldn't look into them. How could he not have known that she was still alive - that some f**king bas***d was tormenting her as he was going on with his life as if she did not exist. How did this happen? How can I forgive myself Manvi?

Manvi opened her eyes and it was really happening - he was here, in front of her. God had finally heard her prayers. Her love was here. She is going to be okay. He looked so lost and confused, nevertheless, he was here. She wanted to say so many things - She wanted to tell him that she had missed him and that they had hurt her and that she wished he knew where she was and how she had wished every single day that he would come and save her by some miracle. But, all that didn't matter because, it was over. She wanted to hug him and cry her heart out, tell him what they did to her, tell him how painful it was. But all she was able to do was move her fingers and whisper his name.

He summoned all his patience and strength and sat beside her. Her face had so many bruises, wounds and cuts. He couldn't react, he wanted to kill that son of a bitch who did this to her. His fingers cupped her face and he knew she could see him. He knew she could never go numb to his touch. He knew she was still there. Her eyes had filled up and they just looked at each other, trying to associate to what each of them had undergone in their absence. Accept the reality which seemed so unreal.

But, as soon as his hands cupped her face, she turned away. "Diya..." she whispered.

She didn't look at him again

~~~

Edited by bluebolt - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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highly emotional update!!! & the FB makes it worst 😭..the way u've penned it...was so heart wrenching..
manvi's condition is unbearable..the contrast of past & present ..diya pointing about manvi beauty -she looked like a fairy & virat praising her for being the most beautiful bride on the universe... but now she is not that manvi anymore!! i really hate u for the way uve interspersed the fb..though it was significant ...like when virat was lifting her ghoonghat then shifting to the doctor drawing the curtain & here her body is covered with awful injuries!!
the promise that virat made to her on their wedding night...his guilt ... but things were beyond his control...virat wrath..shocked state..his fury ..i can feel it all :-(
why did virman, moreover manvi had to go through so much ..such a cruel fate for them!!
im sure virat will be able to bring her back, although it would not be that easy ... doctors said she is not responsive but virat presence did make a difference !! till now virat & her daughter have been her only hope and strength ...at the end when she mentioned diya..is she there?
plz give a happy ending !!
(ps: try to work on ur frame of mind :-p)

Edited by roshreb - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
maine comment bhi nahin ki..the like is for my signature kya??:-p
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: roshreb

maine comment bhi nahin ki..the like is for my signature kya??:-p


nah..i am crying after i wrote this update and I feel happy seeing u..thats what the like is for 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome...update...😲
i luved it...eeekkksss!!!!👏
Manvi...and Virat...their emotions...ad the flashbak...was just fab...!!!!❤️
continu...sooonnn...and thnx fr the pm...!!😊
Edited by shaalivirman - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Excited for the next partt
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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another update!!!!!!!!! jumping jumping jumping

unres finally!!

um already controlling a pile of tears dat are ready to gush out at the news of the last day of ehmmbh.. here comes my di making me to pour the stored up tears..
so far in this story, though virman were away, though the moments in the flashback were heart wrenching,, today even though they are meeting after so long,, this update is the one making me to cry more!

oh my brilliant writer,,, i was looking forward for this chapter,,, just to smile wide witnessing virat-manvi-diya to see each other and cherish and live the moment... but but,, u have planned something vch i never expected.. how come i cried at their meeting?? its just by the magical u.. wat a different author u are!!! wen i wanted to smile and strongly believed dat u wud make me to smile,,, u did the opposite.. u gave their meeting,, but after the flashbacks... they aren't mere memories,, they were memories telling us their beautiful moments, cruel fate and the cherished pledge.. how beautiful that pledge, dat promise wud have sounded in manvi's ears at their first night together... how much she wud have cherished his words... how much love virat wud have had in him to utter those words... but the cruel fate,, it managed to make virat guilty.. its not his mistake at all,, but his instant recalling of such a memory delivers the guilt that is over powering him... hope he doesnt blame him entirely for the ugly fate!!

why does the happy moments spent by virman bring tears more than the torture they are under going after their separation??
isnt it interesting?? all flashbacks are beautiful but they are the ones bringing up pool of tears.. again & again & again,,, reminding me to question why shud fate be so cruel?

wen u gave dat she's ''physically, mentally & sexually assaulted'' i was shattered... a girl shudnt undergo such a torture.. how will she ever overcome??
i am so sorry for this character, i cant accept it as a fictional character for truth hides behind this character.. there are alot such people being kidnapped and brutally tortured,, this moment, after witnessing a pain in manvi,, a character so close to my heart,, is the moment dat is making me to think over the cruel fate of the real such people undergoing such torture.. i just wish all tortures happening on earth to vanish...

why did u make manvi to turn her head away??? its so paining!!
may be she thinks dat after she's tortured without kindness she doesnt deserve virat or she cant give him anything... or is she scared?? ofcoz its not difficult to stand up from one year of torture,, not physically alone but mentally and sexually.. i just am so deeply bonded vt this, and hence i cant witness her pain.. her one action of turnig away is creating so much tension in me... is it just an action or an action vt hiding reasons?? let virat pour all his love, all his care and bring back the old manvi..
salute for manvi's braveness!! she has been tortured so much but never uttered any worth information to the kidnappers.. she managed to live vt the memories.. and now she has managed to reach her love, her family... such a woman!!! a woman who shud be praised beyond limits for her bravery!!!
and virat,, i pity him alot.. he must be getting shocks in a row.. the love of his life,, his better half whom he lived vtout for the past one year,, unknown to the fact that she's alive,, has finally returned to his life to light up.. he wud have been shocked, confused and happy at her return.. but her condition wud have shattered him,, dat is the one thing dats making him to blame himself... the guilt that he cudnt be by her side, the thoughts wat she wud have undergone alone, the guilt again that he cudnt keep up his promise, the anger at their fate and so many more emotions... isnt it too much for a person to absorb in a short span of time?? is he to wonder wat happend to her, blame him for her condition, engulf her to believe dat dis is happening for real, get confused at her behaviour or understand her and live the moment???
very very interesting story di!!! very nice turn of events and the next move of each character is unpredictable!!!

the first flashback made me to recall addicted moments where Ria adores and complements jeevika as angel (i guess) equally like her mom.. how awesome kids are.. here Diya adoring her mom, calling her a fairy and ''It was so interesting to her little brain to see someone instantly transform into an angel.'' OMG the beauty of this sentence!!! a kid's complement is true beyond limits,, her surprise in sensing the angelic conversion in her mom was beauty beyond limits dii... 'little brain' in ur sentence is making me to love Diya, her innocence, her astonishment and unknowingly a smile appears at such a beautiful sentence,,, very soothing and pleasant dii!!! the cute conversation between the duo is enuf to make me to miss their moments,, to realise the hardship the two wud have gone thru.. it wud have been their last conversation before an year ryt... isnt fate very very cruel here.. how much it has shattered the love filled family!!

hats off to u for selecting the perfect moments for the perfect flashbacks!!!! can just praise u all day di.. wenever um reading this chapter,, each different time,, each different thoughts engulf me.. sometimes i adore ur language, sometimes ur style, sometimes the characters and many times u.. how come u are creating such a bond vt me and each of ur stories?? this is so interesting,,, i teach my brain to claim a single presentation of urs as my favourite.. but ur writing is controlling my brain more than me.. it is just transforming, jumping its favourites from one story to other... my brain is very bad,, its so unstable,, i am blaming u for that!!! now see its telling me that this is the best story as it is relating so much vt reality and is having an awesome plot and is making me to emotionally go flat.. wen i read ur writings,, all emotions line up and dance in front of me,, telling me to choose each of it.. meaning anger-frustration-love-fun-happy-sad-blah blah blah,,, all are portrayed in ur writing...
my soul sissy,, u are influencing me alot!!! show some kindness and reduce ur awesomeness plsss

um absorbing alot of days to comment for this ryt?? its just dat wenever i sit and read,, i cry and stop the work... such an emotional fool i am
sorry for the extreme delay
let me post it before u comeout vt another chapter

get additional kissess,,, more tight hugs,,, and alottt of love
hats off to the 'witch in u controlling me'!!
get going my soul sissy!!!

Edited by virmanhus - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
UNRES !!!!

pshhh !!! i m late !! sorryyy !!! totally stuck up !!! :( I don't noe from where to start yaar !!! Anu u noe wat watever u pen down is juz amazing !!! Every story of urs is juz mind blowing !!!!! we juz get into can't choose a particular story of urs !!!! hats off Anu ❤️ u r really really amazing ❤️

Part 5 _ virat lost manvi on her anniversary day !!! ;'( the flashback part was superb !!! desperate virat hayyye teri dress ki toh🤣 lamaao !!! tat was really superb !!! awwwn loved the way virat handle the situation !!! n manvi already think of the name !! tat's soo sweet :D
this part bring a big grin on my face !!!
on the other part !! poor mannu !!! :'( HUH tania !!! 😡

Part 6_ these peoples are soo cruel !!!! poor mannu !! she is suffering alot😭😭
the flashback yet again was soo sweet n cute !!! loved the way manvi was blaming virat !!!
the way they supported each other in the delivery time !!! ❤️OMG how dare Tanya talk to diya like tat😡😡 poor babyy !!! i feel bad for her !!! thank god vyshali heard it all !!! diyaa asking her mother from the shooting start !!! this is soo touchy :'( how can u stop there !! thank god i don't have to wait !!! :P

Part 7 _ Anu !!! this is sooo heart wrenching !!! i don't noe wat to sayyy !!! this literally touch my heart alot !!! i could juz imagine the whole scenario in front of my eyes !!! how did u do tat !!! the feelings the emotions my god !!! u have written everything juz perfectly !!! i could juz feel everything !!! the flashback part was sooo !!! gosh i don't noe how to express it !!! n the way virat thoughts were written is juz mind blowing !!! Anu !! u once again left me speechless !!! beautifully written Anu !! really really loved it ❤️

thanks for all the pms :)

i m totally into this story of urs too ❤️ honestly now i really want another update of this story ASAP !!!! this is fantastic !!! ❤️ another stunning story of urs !!! ❤️ AWESOMEE !!

Edited by .Yamin. - 12 years ago

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