loveee uuu!!!! muahhh
diii such an awesome update!!
well thank u dear Mexican for not checking on my mannu's pulse!! people like u are much needed in the country, in dat way so many criminal groups cud be captured..
''Maybe, just maybe they will not shoot and her and maybe someone will find her. Maybe she can look at her family for one last time, she hoped. Every muscle in her body cried in desperation. She didnt know how long she could keep up the pain.''
the 'may be's expressed her hope.. a hope vt a hope.. her utmost desire to get back to her love.. her virat and her daughter.. the flashback (love u for fbs) dat appeared immediately after she doubting her ability to keep up the pain was Brillliant!!!
no pain in the world is taken by a soul vt desire or willing.. the unbearable pain dat is beared vt love, determination, will, desire and want is only the soul wrenching pain dat is experienced by every mother.. putting it in a very precise place and delivering us that she's experiencing so much pain, a pain making her to recall such an incident, the incident being her delivery and she's thinking of the sweet and funny ways of virat calming her was just mind blowing di!!!! it talked sooo much... it told me dat she's in pain.. it told me dat she has to bear it, take it and cope up vt it for some more time to live her ever after life,, alike in pregnancy, where dere she is already aware and is taking the pain willingly while here its the opposite.. it told me dat she's here vtout virat and has to bear the torture vtout his support and finally it told me dat every minute of her life under the cruel custody is being spent by her thru these memories.. be it sad or happy she's holding back the left over life only vt the memories... recalling the moments of her beautiful life in every pain be it light to death... such a pathetic and lively situation!!! love u manvi and love u di for ur excellency
wat a queen of writing u are!!! mahhhnnn selection of plot, delivery, selection of location for the flashback and the perfect recalling of perfect moments... awesome is not even a word to describe its awesomeness!!! having tears in thinking of ur excellent writing skills.. u are magical!! u are a perfect, brilliant, clever and an extremely talented author!!
each story of urs has each different style.. this particular one, travels vt flashbacks in a way to give us virman moments while in reality, from the beginning of this story, they are never together.. u made us not to miss deir perfect moments together but to yearn for them to comeback together and live hereafter peacefully.. again thinking dat virat is never aware of her existance for the past one year is making my insides scream at the bloody cruel fate..
in love vt dis plot dat is deep, emotional and sinking alot vt reality!!
well well Tanya madam, u are out finally!! thanks for ur short visit and quick exit!
lmao at Diya's actions to throw Tanya away from her father.. she is a mini Manvi (Manvi of ehmmbh) in planning and getting rid of people.. smart kid!
Vyshali indeed is a nice sister,, u made it clear dat she only hoped for her brother's future and now learnt d fact dat its not easy for a second woman in virat's and diya's life!
thaaankkksss for pushing Tanya into the swimming pool..
always adored the father-daughter conversation.. its an arguement usually and next they patch up vt all the love.. again virat missing manvi in understanding his daughter AT ONCE can be easily witnessed thru it..
may the little girl's wish at the shooting star come true reallly very soon (may be next chapter eeekkksss).. very baaad place to stop dii..
u often boost me up and give me the chance to adore ur writing leaving the story apart.. this is one such instance.. i cannot get over manvi's pain and the perfect flashback at the perfect situation.. u deliver alot of things by a single thing dii and i capture it and adore it beyond limits
love u loads di!! get my kisses, hugs and love and love only!!
hats off for the 'emotionally making me to breakdown ability' in u!!!
get going!! ❤️
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