VIRMAN FF:DANGEROUS LOVE DISCONTINUE

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@anu0555

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

OMG..!!! it was dammmn gooodd...

it was awsome as alwyas...its so nysh n interesting concept...

i fell in love in with it... loved the introduction..it was fab..lovely...outstanding..!!! n title name is very interesting n awsome..!!!

loved manvi n viraat's character..!!! great story..!!plzzz janat do update sooonnn...i waiitng eagerly for nxt part...can't wait anymore...!!! n thnk u for the pm...n sorry for short comment...actually from now i will not get dat much time bcoz my skool has been started...but i will definitely read ur stories n will comment on them..

love yea

-anu aka rouza..

Edited by anu0555 - 12 years ago

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Pyaasi Chudail

@PyaasiChudail69

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

omg it is brilliant loved it plz cnt sn and pm me

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Syed695

@Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Awesome..!! Very different though..and interesting 1 too...They love each other allot..but Virat is 1 dominating...he loves her and would plan everything...but when takes that intiative he doesn't like..cz thats wht happened in the end...he slapped her for kissing him..where he himself wantedto take that 1st step...Superb Jannat..Waiting for the story to unfold..Thanks for the PM..!!

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Abqurah

@Abqurah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

wow Appi i love u
U finally update and don't worry na
It dhasu👏
I love the song great job... Update soon and thank u for pm 🤗

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roshreb

@roshreb

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

awesome & different concept!! love it..virat's love is a dangerous one !! his dominating nature is scary !! that slap at the end was shocking..he wants to be in charge of each and everything!! update soon!!

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JESMY

@JESNIA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

SUPERB STAR.
BUT WHY VIRAT SLAP MANVI?
IS IT MANVI, OR ANYONE ELSE?
PLZ CONTINUE SOON.
THANKS FOR PM.

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

New story on Virman!!!! 😃😃 Prologue is really nice ⭐️.. Loved the way you have described being in love and being in love with the idea of love.. Dangerous love!! Interesting title 👍🏼.. Intro part was superb 😊.. Virat sounds little psycho type lover and quite dominating.. Manvi is sweet and innocent girl.. Loved the first chapter ⭐️.. Nice song selection ❤️.. But very wrong timing Jannat.. Why did you stop there?? He slapped Manvi?? 😲 Manvi doesn't sound that bold.. Is it some other girl?? Eagerly waiting for the next part.. Please continue soon and do pm me for the future updates please.. Take care 😊

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FlowerHater

@FlowerHater

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Awww!!!!!!Viru slapped someone who is that??? Eager to read next part!!!! Do upd8 soon!!!!

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manvilover18

@manvilover18

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

wow new story awesome...

this is really interesting story...

i don't think virat slap manvi...

i think he slap someone alls...

plzzz update it quick.

and ur other story also...

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richa002

@richa002

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Interesting intro...
Loved ur update...
Manvi is scared of viraT... I love psycho lovers..
Loved it
Virat nd manvi loves each other soo much...
Hawww virat slapped some one bt whom!!! Is that manvi???
Thanxxx for pm