Arshi SS: Outside the Lines, Chp 12, Pg 140, link T2 pg 149 - Page 85

lovely chapter...both parts are so much fun and sooo lively...


Arnav getting attracted to khushi ...and he is so jealous... he wants to know more about kushi...


while khushi is enjoying his company.hoping she wont make an mistakes...she thinks she is doing right but her boss did not think that way...

thanks for the pm and update...

cheers...

Love the concept...

Wonderful part a & b, ASR is confused about his feelings or attraction

thanks for the PM & love both the updates.

Nice update, continue soon :)

So Arnav is very attracted to kushi. Jealous Arnav nice to see encounter;-).

Just caught up with last three parts. It was fabulous. The way you have described every little detail about Arnav and khushi's professional life was just amazing.. Who was that guy, felt that he was shyam but what's his relationship with Arnav??😲. Last part you showed the attraction Arnav felt towards Khushi was described beautifully. 😳😊.

So I finally caught up on all the chapters I had missed (chapter 3 onwards). And I can't tell you what a great time I had reading them. Don't ask me what kept me away for so long for I have no proper answer to that. Just want you to know that this story is just as exciting and intriguing for me now as it had been when you had started it. I mean cricket and arnav - oh, your really can't go wrong there!

One of my favourite books, Zoya factor, is also based on cricket and ever since the talks of 22 yards had come up (when I had quite conveniently started hoping that Zoya factor is based on that book), I couldn't stop myself from imagining arnav Singh Raizada (err...I mean barun) in the uniform and on the field...sweat, muscles, hot butt and all. So this story, my dear, is a dream for me 😆


Hoping you'd update soon coz I can't wait to find out about that mystery man who is giving me weird vibes and I can't wait to find out how Arnav's and khushi's relationship progresses. It's quite lovely to see Arnav warm up to Khushi. He's loosening up and slowly becoming less stiff and more open to things. And I must say you have shown the progress and changes wonderfully, taking it slow and taking things forward patiently.

Lots of love!

edited My comment on Pg-120.

Just read the whole story!